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David's Start of a New Adventure by triplex

 

Story Notes:

Hey everyone! I'm TripleX and I've been reading on AGNPH for a while now, and the stories I've read are awesome. Even though I love reading fanfics, especially Pokemon fanfics, I would like to write and publish my own ideas of pokemon stories to AGNPH. But I was too afraid that they were not good enough or too amateur for you readers out there.Anyways, as I was reading some of my favourite author's stories, I've notice that the some of authors are updating their stories less and less, or slowly and slowly, and/or even sometimes to the point that they have to postpone their stories for a long period of time. I and many others understand that they are too busy doing other important things, or having huge writers block. But it gets frustrating for me and other readers out there to have to wait and wait for the authors to update their amazing stories, and it has come to the point that I can't wait any longer for the authors to update their stories.So I bravely decided to write and publish my stories out to AGNPH and other fanfiction websites to see how good my stories really are and how well you readers like my stories. So please comment or give me a good review of my stories, and rate as well. Also if you have time, comment on my stories on how to improve on my stories better to other readers out there so that they would want to read more and more of my stories. I will try to do my best to write and publish my stories as fast as I can, but also try to make them as great as possible. It's going to take awhile for me to write and publish my stories, but I got ideas going and they come fast, so please bare with me with the whole waiting part and see if my stories are excellent for all of you readers out there. :)I'm going to be starting my first pokemon story; it's called, "David's Start of a New Adventure". Rated XXX for Romance in later chapters, OCxPokemon. WARNING: there is yaoi involved and probably some more of it, so try to bare with it. If not DON'T READ IT!! But there will be a lot of friendships in this story and heart warming events. So I would recommend you at least read some it and I also think it's worth reading.If you want more information about me or more info about my characters of my stories you can click here, TripleX's Profile..........


A Close Call

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David kept on running, hoping to find a Pokemon Center soon and also hoping that this Treecko will survive this severe trauma from its abusive trainer. David couldn't even imagine how abusive a trainer or trainers can be towards their Pokemon. But now that he saw it with his own two eyes he felt fury and hatred towards who would do such a thing to their Pokemon

'It's just not right.' He thought, to treat Pokemon the way this Treecko has been treated. This made David wonder if Pokemon are being abused all around the Pokemon world, there probably is and he can't do anything about it, much to his displeasure.

Now as David was running to find the Pokemon Center he thought if he remembered correctly, all or most of the Pokemon Centers are usually a rather large building with a huge Pokeball against the front of the center.

'Pretty simple and straightforward to find.' he thought to himself.

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It didn't take long for David to find the Pokemon Center, but considering the fact that David had almost have to run all the way to the other side of Azalea Town. But at least he made to his destination before anything could get any worse, and that's all that mattered to him.

"Nurse Joy, Nurse Joy!!!" David yelled as he ran through the sliding automatic doors towards the counter where Nurse Joy is, which she actually jumped up by surprise from the sudden outburst from 'someone' while she was doing some of her paper works.

"Yes, yes?!...... Oh dear, what happen?!" Nurse Joy said while she came to her senses that a teenage boy calling her name came running in the lobby with a beat up Treecko in his arms.

"I can explain later just get this Treecko some medical help now!" David sounded desperate as well has an alert expression on his face, like who wouldn't? This Pokemon could die in his own hands at anytime at any minute!

"Right, right. Chansey!" She called out through the hallway behind her, and within a second, 2 Chanseys with a nurse's hat came running through the hall, went around the counter and gently took the Treecko out of David's arms and put the poor Pokemon on a stretcher. Then quickly roll the stretcher back to where they came from, but going through a medical door at the end of the hallway. "I suggest you wait at the waiting room please." She point towards David's left that there is a small waiting area at the left end of the lobby. After Nurse Joy said that sentence, she quickly followed the Chanseys into the medical room as the doors closed in behind her.

David had no other options but to wait. So he made his way to the waiting area and sat himself down and just...... waits. As he was waiting patiently, he got a better focus on his surroundings as he previously did not paid attention due to because of a dying Treecko in his arms and all. But as he looked around the lobby, it was actually empty.

Usually there would be trainers around doing something relating with their Pokemon. Like healing their Pokemon after a Pokemon battles, or get their Pokemon a quick check up, or just staying in for the night then be on their way the next day. But it's was like a ghost town in this lobby where David is waiting in right now. This somewhat made him wonder why there weren't any trainers in the Pokemon Center, but he quickly dismissed the thought and decided that if he was going to have to wait for hours he could at least get an hour or two of rest/sleep in him so he wouldn't get bored or lose his sanity.

It was about 6 o'clock according to his Pokedex so it was starting to get late anyways and besides, running around almost over halfway through a town to find a Pokemon Center can be exhausting. So without a further or do, David crossed his arms across his chest as well as putting his head down, he closed his eyes and let the dreamless sleep consume him.

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It was nearly over 7 o'clock when someone suddenly gently shook David on the shoulders as he was actually having a good rest/sleep even thought he was sleeping on a chair. (I don't know how people sleep on chairs, they seem so uncomfortable to sleep on! XD)

"Hmmm? What? What is it?" David said tiredly as well as he physically looked kind of groggily on his seat. He then looked at the intruder of his slumber and came to realize that it was Nurse Joy. He then jolt straight up on his seat as he was getting some mixed thoughts and concerns whether or not if Nurse Joy has some good news or some bad news for the Treecko he just rescued a few hours ago. "Nurse Joy! What happen to Treecko? Is it ok? Is it dead? How serious are the injuries? Is it-" He then got interrupted by Nurse Joy putting up one of her hand, indicating for him to stop talking, which he did, because he probably sounded like a babbling idiot. So without humiliating himself further, he shut himself up and listen on what Nurse Joy had to say.

"Don't worry, Treecko is going to be alright. The good news is that there are just a bunch scrapes and bruises here and there, but about a few days without seriously doing anything physically, his minor injuries should be healed in no time at all. (Notice that you now know the gender of Treecko)" That made David feel a bunch of weight lifted off his shoulders, relief that Treecko is not dead so he wouldn't have to worry about the gecko Pokemon so much. But unforchantly there's always the bad news after the good news or vice versa. "But due to the lack of blood the Treecko lost, he won't be waking up until around the middle of the day and also he has a minor concussion so he might feel a little bit dazed when he wakes up." Ok so David guest it wasn't as bad as he expected it would be, but better than having any serious injuries that will affect any short terms or long term problems right?

"Ok so am I able to see Treecko?" David said in a calm voice.

"Yes of course, Treecko is resting down the hallway in room 4, and you can stay here as long as you need to." Nurse Joy said with a reassuring smile. So David got off from his seat and was about to head to Treecko's room when Nurse Joy place her hand on David's shoulders "David if it's not too personal, would you mind telling me what happen to your Treecko? I haven't seen such a beating on a Pokemon for quite some time." She asked curiously. David seemed unsure at first, but he knows he can trust Nurse Joy.

"Well actually, Treecko use to belong to another trainer, but now I guess Treecko is with me now." He said in a sad tone as he remembers the beating, the abusing, and the screaming that Treecko had been through. All of the memories made him tremble a little, but quickly stop knowing that Treecko won't be harmed anymore.

"Oh, so what happened?" She said as she was getting more interested.

"You may want to seat down for this, it's a pretty intense experience." David said as he leads Nurse Joy to the waiting area for both of them to sit themselves down.

When they both sat themselves comfortable, David took a deep breath and began.

"Alright, it all started when me and my Pokemon were coming out of the dock and we heard someone screaming in pain so we went to the source and we......"

(Ok I'm not explaining the little abusing story again since you already know it and probably don't want to read/know it again, so we're just going to skip that part.)

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"......and here we are now." David concluding that little story of his.

"Oh my, that's so awful! What kind of a trainer would do such a thing to their Pokemon?!" Nurse Joy said while crying and sniffling as she said that sentence and while taking out a handkerchief out of her pocket and dry a few of her tears and blow her nose in it.

"I don't know, all I know is that this is not the way trainers should treat their Pokemon and that we should treat them with respect and treat them as friends and equals." He said as Nurse Joy agrees with David's statement as she is still sniffling. "Are you going to be ok Nurse Joy?" He said with concern. He didn't mean to make Nurse Joy upset, that's why he was unsure to tell her what he saw and what Treecko experienced in the first place.

"Yes I'll be fine, you can go see Treecko now if you want." The nurse said, starting to be her perky self again and brought herself out of her seat and went over to the counter and starting to finish off her paper works that she was previously got interrupted from.

David was relieved for that Nurse Joy was not upset anymore. So with that said and done David got up from his chair and made his way around the counter, into the hallway and open the door in room 4 where he hope that Treecko won't look as bad as he previously looked when David last looked at the abused gecko Pokemon.

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Chapter End Notes:Ok that's the end of the seventh chapter, yes!!! XD

But to be honest, I don't think this was one of my best or lengthiest chapters I've written, but either way I think was 'ok' for my opinion. But I want to know from you, so please leave a comment or review and rate too!

Also what do you think Treecko's condition going to look like?

Find out in chapter 8 in, 'David's Start of a New Adventure!'

But for now, TripleX out!!!

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