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Gardevoir Motherhood. by
Rated:PG-13 [Reviews: 1]

Summary:

Offshoot from Vaporeon's New Life.

After two years of being a parent, Gardevoir has had enough of never getting the final say in how her child is brought up.

This is NOT the final chapter to Vaporeon's New Life, that story is still being developed.

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  • Chapters: 1
  • Completed: No Word Count: 2636 Views: 434
  • Published: Aug 23 2012

Story Notes:

Pokemon isn't mine, and will probably never be mine, so any and all characters and settings that are official Pokemon/nintendo proterty are copyright to them. This IS a fan work, and the plot and setting is not intended to be commercial.

  1. Final Straw (2636 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Jun 6 2014 Chapter:Final Straw
    I must say, that i rather liked this story, though I found a few mistakes here and there, and one major issue i have was towards the end when Simon and family were having that little chat/debate about Basil. It would have been easier to know who was talking to who during the one-line responses if it was marked in some way, and overall using a double space paragraph breaker.

    Overall, great job, looking for more on this story arc.