AGNPH Stories

Summary:

Warning, horribly written. Something I wrote awhile back... Any how, Brock is trapped in a cave, and he finds some female Pokemon that want to have sex with him...

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  • Chapters: 1
  • Completed: No Word Count: 1639 Views: 591
  • Published: Aug 23 2012
  1. the cave (1639 words) [Reviews: 2]

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    Befuddling since 1985, when the Cows came home
    Reviewer: Raw19
    Date:Apr 17 2018 Chapter:the cave

    Looked long and hard for this one and finally found it again after a decade. Still holds up as some most excellent fluff.

     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 2 2018 Chapter:the cave

    This showed up in the random-story spot. And... If I'm being honest...

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    I can't... I can't even be blunt. The idea seemed great from the summary. But the execution...

     

    Sweet, merciful Arceus; give me stregnth....

    SO many errors!!!!!!!

     

     

    Spelling, grammar, sentence-structure... Every little detail and lesson from growing up with a quasi-Grammar-Nazi, I had to force myself through this ordeal... This... This... farce of an 'erotic' fanfic.

     

    I'm deeply sorry, I tried to like it, but I'm going to give you a low score. There's far-too much that needs improvement. If you'd like, I'd be happy to go through and highlight EVERYTHING that needs correcting, or even do a complete re-write. Again, great concept, but horrible execution.