This was spectacular! I enjoyed it very much, even though there were a few minor discrepancies scattered about. Mainly a few spelling and grammar mistakes, and then you had a sentence repeat itself within its own line. My only other 'complaint' or notation involves a size denotation--it's a bit absurd in context, which I suspect can be fixed with the right contextual word (send me a private message for the correction detail)

The sex was great, and you put a unique spin on the theme. Glad to see such a beautiful work--shame it was far too late for the Odd Couples contest....


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