The first time I wrote a fanfic in two years. Simply enough, this is a story about a lovestruck trainer, and his loving glaceon. Surprise, surprise, this contains sexual content.
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Exactly what it says on the tin.
So, quite a bit to say about this....
For starters.... And I mean this from a formatting/structure stand-point.... It's a mess.
Good story with a nice fun/sexy tone, BUT the way it was writen... Just a mess...
I hope you don't take this a brutally as it seems, but yeah.
Hope to see more from you, and hope you improve much more!