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Summary:

A Gardevoir named Sophia has a crush on her best friend... Who is a normal guy. What happens when they break a law preventing them from being together?

  1. Escape! (1365 words) [Reviews: 1]

  2. A new life (1359 words) [Reviews: 1]

  3. Influences (3068 words) [Reviews: 1]

  4. What a day! (1975 words) [Reviews: 1]

  5. Answers! (2105 words) [Reviews: 1]

  6. Change (2487 words) [Reviews: 1]

  7. The baby (2513 words) [Reviews: 1]

  8. Tequilla Twist (3889 words) [Reviews: 1]

  9. Answers. NOW! (2121 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:Escape!
    A good start. Nice teaser scene at the end too. But I must point out that the POV-shifting could have been indicated by some means. And random capital letters need to be corrected, as well as a few grammar mistakes as well.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:A new life
    Uh oh... Caught, and now we got trouble... Damn those anti-poképhiliacs! Pokémon need love too!
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:Influences
    A new perspective--and on Kio&Mia. But still, same grammar mistakes, and confusing POV-jumping. And a time-frame altercation note would have been nice.

    But back to the present, and just in a nick of time it seems...
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:What a day!
    Happiness all around! Stories like these make me proud to love the best feminine psychic-type known as Gardevoir.

    Grace, Beauty, and Power, all in one Pokémon.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:Answers!
    More untapped power for Gardevoir!
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:Change
    Needs a fanart to accompany Sophia's new look.

    And onto the doctor freak-outs!
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:The baby
    Baby hybrids, dance classes from a Pokémon, and now a press leak. What's next?
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:Tequilla Twist
    Something tells me that Hanna and Felicia are being followed by a Houndoom. Or Entie.

    And a character list--like at the start of Chapter2--wud have been nice.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 13 2013 Chapter:Answers. NOW!
    Fire everywhere... And I'm gonna make a negative note on how Roxanne was portrayed last chapter--completely non-cannon.