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A lonely Christmas? by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 1]

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Ash was certain he was going to spend his Christmas away from family and friends, but someone close to him has other plans; Strong Altoshipping

  1. A lonely Christmas? (3598 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Jan 3 2014 Chapter:A lonely Christmas?
    Although this was very well written, they're SEVERAL punctuation mistakes that would have significantly improved readability/flow.