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Need creative feedback

 
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    Illusionairy Fox
    Chief
    Date:Feb 20, 2015 9:24 PM Title:Need creative feedback
    So I'm finally getting back to writing fanfiction, but I'm not too confident that I still have that "oomph", that "something" that made my work popular on fanfiction.net. So I need people willing to read novel-length chapters (over 2,000 words/chapter) to see if I still have what it takes to write great stories.

    I'm not asking you guys to read ALL of my fanfics, just the ones I will be providing links for. One is a story that I started waaaaaaay back in November 2010 and haven't touched since December 2012, and the other is a oneshot that I put up to test the waters, yet haven't received enough feedback on back in July of last year.



    This one is the story I haven't touched in 2 years, and plan to get back to soon:
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6468467/1/The-Virus

    And this one is the oneshot that I used to test the waters:
    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10503912/1/Differences-Unite

    Hopefully I can get enough feedback so I can really get the gist of what I need to do, or what I need to fix before fully committing to the story again - I don't want to fuck it up by doing something that people don't want.

     
     
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    Illusionairy Fox
    Chief
    Date:Feb 26, 2015 7:34 PM Title:Re: Need creative feedback
    Yanno, it kinda stings that nobody would even reply to this post, or even leave an anonymous review on the stories to let me know just how well (or how bad) they think I did between the two. Makes me think that they aren't worth reviewing or continuing and I should just give up on creative writing. :/

     
     
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    Befuddling since 1985, when the Cows came home
    Raw19
    Date:Feb 26, 2015 9:58 PM Title:Re: Need creative feedback

    Yanno, it kinda stings that nobody would even reply to this post, or even leave an anonymous review on the stories to let me know just how well (or how bad) they think I did between the two. Makes me think that they aren't worth reviewing or continuing and I should just give up on creative writing. :/


    It's not at all fun being ignored and i'm really sorry that happened here.

    Gimme about a week to check out some of your work and i'll get back to you.

    http://www.youtube.com/user/KyeGuard?feature=mhee

    ~ You think You're surprised? You should have seen My expression when they told me the Rain in Spain stays Mainly on the Plains! ~

    ~ Quotes and the like are only popular if that's what 'she' said. ~

     
     
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    Illusionairy Fox
    Chief
    Date:Feb 26, 2015 11:49 PM Title:Re: Need creative feedback
     
     
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    Befuddling since 1985, when the Cows came home
    Raw19
    Date:Mar 6, 2015 7:16 AM Title:Re: Need creative feedback
    Pool's open, water's fine.

    http://www.youtube.com/user/KyeGuard?feature=mhee

    ~ You think You're surprised? You should have seen My expression when they told me the Rain in Spain stays Mainly on the Plains! ~

    ~ Quotes and the like are only popular if that's what 'she' said. ~

     
     
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    Illusionairy Fox
    Chief
    Date:Mar 6, 2015 7:54 AM Title:Re: Need creative feedback

    Pool's open, water's fine.

    I'll take that as everything's alright, then? ^^;

     
     
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    Befuddling since 1985, when the Cows came home
    Raw19
    Date:Mar 6, 2015 9:21 AM Title:Re: Need creative feedback
    So far, yes.

    http://www.youtube.com/user/KyeGuard?feature=mhee

    ~ You think You're surprised? You should have seen My expression when they told me the Rain in Spain stays Mainly on the Plains! ~

    ~ Quotes and the like are only popular if that's what 'she' said. ~

     
     
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    Illusionairy Fox
    Chief
    Date:Mar 6, 2015 5:01 PM Title:Re: Need creative feedback
    Alright, thanks :3 I'll be replying to your review on FFN later today to clear up a few things.