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Hey everyone! I'm TripleX and I've been reading on AGNPH for a while now, and the stories I've read are awesome. Even though I love reading fanfics, especially Pokemon fanfics, I would like to write and publish my own ideas of pokemon stories to AGNPH. But I was too afraid that they were not good enough or too amateur for you readers out there.Anyways, as I was reading some of my favourite author's stories, I've notice that the some of authors are updating their stories less and less, or slowly and slowly, and/or even sometimes to the point that they have to postpone their stories for a long period of time. I and many others understand that they are too busy doing other important things, or having huge writers block. But it gets frustrating for me and other readers out there to have to wait and wait for the authors to update their amazing stories, and it has come to the point that I can't wait any longer for the authors to update their stories.So I bravely decided to write and publish my stories out to AGNPH and other fanfiction websites to see how good my stories really are and how well you readers like my stories. So please comment or give me a good review of my stories, and rate as well. Also if you have time, comment on my stories on how to improve on my stories better to other readers out there so that they would want to read more and more of my stories. I will try to do my best to write and publish my stories as fast as I can, but also try to make them as great as possible. It's going to take awhile for me to write and publish my stories, but I got ideas going and they come fast, so please bare with me with the whole waiting part and see if my stories are excellent for all of you readers out there. :)I'm going to be starting my first pokemon story; it's called, "David's Start of a New Adventure". Rated XXX for Romance in later chapters, OCxPokemon. WARNING: there is yaoi involved and probably some more of it, so try to bare with it. If not DON'T READ IT!! But there will be a lot of friendships in this story and heart warming events. So I would recommend you at least read some it and I also think it's worth reading.If you want more information about me or more info about my characters of my stories you can click here, TripleX's Profile..........
The Beginning
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(David's POV)
I was in complete shock that I was not in my room any more. I started to look myself over to see if I broke or lose anything that might be important to me.
"Alright, everything seems to be fine. No broken bones, I still have my clothes on, and I didn't bring anything with me." I said to myself and being relieved. Then I brought myself up to my feet and start to look around 'Ok I'm in a place where there are canals, gondolas for transportation, and it looks like a city of water. So am I in a city in Italy?' I thought, "It has to be it, there is no other explanation. Only Italy has cities like this, canals, gondolas, Pokemon....... Wait POKEMON??!!" I said out loud.
I look at an arch bridge over a small canal, and there on top of the bridge perched a small Pidgeotto who is just sitting there doing nothing. I just watch there in shock, not believing what I'm seeing.
'Oh my god! Oh my god! I'm in the Pokemon world.' I thought as I start panicking, "But where exactly am I in the Pokemon world? How am I going to get home? Is this a dream, or am I going insane?" I talk to myself as I slap myself to see if I was dreaming "*SLAP*!!!...... Ow!" Ok maybe I'm not dreaming.
So many questions were going through my mind, like if I'm ever going home. But when I think about it, maybe one of the legendaries could somehow be able to bring me back home. But when I thought harder, I remember my life back home. Where I had no friends, no exciting life, almost no parent supervision, and no social life.
This is one of a life time chance to be in the Pokemon world, and this would be probably my only opportunity to start a new life and maybe have my own adventure, with MY own Pokemon. But first, I need to know where I am, and then start my adventure from there.
Besides if I do want to go home (which I do not intend to), what are the chances of finding a pacific legendary Pokemon that would help me? The chances would be almost impossible.
..........
I was walking around the place for almost an hour now, and it was harder than I thought on where I should look for any clue on where I am. Everywhere I look I see some people with their Pokemon, and trainers looking for battles with their Pokemon, and even some Pokemon were wondering around on their own.
When I start to walk around where there are a lot of people passing by, some of the people who walk past me gave me odd looks, as if I'm a freak or something. It was probably what I'm wearing, but I don't think that's the problem. As I look around, the place it looks sort of familiar to me.
"Wait a second." I said and stop on my tracks, 'Ok I remember being teleported to here from the TV, and before that I was watching.... Pokemon Heroes.' I said in thought as I realized that it makes perfect sense that I was teleported to Alto Mare. It looks so similar from the movie, but looks more realistic up close. But I have to make sure if where I am, is where I thought I am right now.
I saw an average man walking in front of me about six or seven feet away from me and he was wearing a casual brown suit that he looks like some kind of business man of some sorts, and was holding a black brief case in his right hand. I quickly close the distance between me and the brown suited man and politely tap him on his shoulder.
"Um excuse me sir, where exactly are we?" I said as nicely as I can.
"Well my boy, we're in Alto Mare." He said happily. When I got a closer look at him, I saw that he looks like in his late twenties with a unique mustache that sort of looks like a Mario mustache from the Mario series, he had a nicely combed brown hair, and has sky blue eyes.
"Well thank you." I said quickly. I was about to turn around, when a hand was holding my right shoulder that made me stop on my tracks.
"Now hold on young one. You're not from around here, are you?" The same man I talked to said.
"Unfortunately I'm not." I said embarrassed.
"Alright, hold on a second." He said. Then he started looking in his brief case. I was curious of what this man is looking for and wonder what he was going to do. "I know it's in here some......ahh ha!" He proudly said as he took out what looks like a map, then put in my hands.
"A map?" I said curiously, looking in the map.
"Yes, it's the map of Alto Mare. I don't need it anymore since I come here a lot now and I know this city to the back of my hand, and I think you need the map more than I do." He said smiling.
"Wow thanks sir." I said kindly.
"You're welcome, I'm just glad to help. Now if you would excuse me, I need to get going." He said, and started to turn around and disappear into a building he walked in.
'Wow that was lucky of me.' I thought as I walk around the city of Alto Mare with a map in hand.
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As I walk around Alto Mare, at the same time looking in the map, I was aware that the guardians of the Soul Dew, Latios and Latias was some where in the city, and me being a fan of them I just have to at least see them in the flesh with my own eyes and get a close look a them. I remember in the movie that Latias and Latios can make themselves invisible and just wonder around the city. So it's going to be tough for me to find them. But I also remember in the movie that Latias, can take a shape or form of a human and since she is good friends with Bianca she turns into her a lot.
"So I just need to find someone that looks like Bianca. Hmmm...... sounds easy enough." I said as I kept on going to the direction of the town square since I think it's a good place start to look for Bianca/Latias.
When I arrive there, there were quite some people walking
in or out of the town square. I remember the description of Bianca's outfit since its simple to remember. She wore a white skirt under a green t-shirt, and wore pink shoes. She has brown hair that go up to her shoulders, and part of her hair style was what looks like Latias' ears at both sides at the top of her head, and she also has bright brown eyes.
"Ok, where are you Latias?" I muttered quietly as I look around to find a resemblance of Bianca. "Hmmm...... This is tougher than I thougWHOA" I said in amazement when I saw the exact same description of Bianca at the far end of the square, she had the outfit, the look, everything. 'But wait. What if that's the original Bianca and not Latias.' I sadly thought with a frown on my face, but I suddenly realized something, 'Wait! I remember a stupid detail about the original Bianca' I thought in realization "She wore a white artist hat, and she always carries a blue bag full of art supplies around with her." I said correcting myself, "This Bianca doesn't have those last two descriptions. So that's got to be Latias!" I said quietly so people don't hear me, then I quickly follow Bianca/Latias as quietly as possible.
As I quietly follow her, she had her arms behind her back with her hands holding each other, and she was walking slowly, minding her own business. She was looking around quite a lot, like she was trying to look for something.
This was going on for a few minutes, unit she went into an ally. I quickly follow her trail to the ally and try to be as silent as I can, and try not to get caught. The Bianca/Latias was going in all sorts of directions, and at some point I suddenly lost her for a second because I had to tie one of my shoe laces, and when I look back to the direction where I thought Bianca/Latias should be, she was gone.
'Oh shit, I think I lost her.' I thought in frustration. I found myself going through a bunch of allies that seems like one huge maze that feels like it has no end to it. I remember this is the part in the movie where Ash and Pikachu follow Bianca/Latias and got a little lost along the way.
..........
What seems like eternity, I finally got out of that shithole and went through a mini tunnel that has vines and plants growing all over the tunnel. When I got out of it, I saw there were only two directions, left and right.
I looked at the left and saw nothing but an empty street and a canal. To my right, what I saw was surprising to me. When I look to the right direction, I saw Bianca/Latias at the far end, and she was looking at me with a smile on her face.
"I guess she noticed me following her." I said looking down to the ground in defeat. When I look back on where Bianca/Latias was, she was still looking at me with the same smile, then she wave one of her arms at me in a way for me to follow her.
All I did was nod in accepting her offer, then she ran off to the left. I ran quickly to where she ran off, but when I got there, there was a wall.
'A dead end?' I curiously thought. "Hmmm...... I wonder?" I said to myself as I start to walk towards the wall. I thought I was going to hit the solid wall and hurt myself, but I didn't feel the impact of the wall. So I open my eyes to see that I was in a dark tunnel that there was light at the end of the tunnel. "Guess I went through the wall." I said. Then I quickly got to the end of the tunnel, and what I saw made me go into awe.
At the end of the tunnel I saw what made my mouth drop open, was the most amazing garden I have ever seen. There were many trees all over the garden and also had many Pokemon in the huge garden. Polywags in a small pond, a flock of Butterfrees flying around the garden, and some Yanma flying over some ponds.
'This must be the secret garden.' I thought when I start to walk down the stairs that lead to the garden. As I wander around, I've notice at the end of the garden was a big fountain that was gushing huge amount of water.
At my left there was a large pond, and at the end of it was swing hanging from a tree. That's when I saw Bianca/Latias swinging happily on the swing. I walk around the pond to see Bianca/Latias closer. When I got there, I feel like something was out of place.
'So if I'm with Latias right now, then where's Latios?' Thinking hard.
I was still thinking when a sudden breeze came out of nowhere and blew on me that the hair on the back of my neck stood at one end. I then slowly recognize this scene, and I started to tremble a little.
"Oh crap. If this is the part where Ash and Pikachu got their asses kicked by Latios. Then that would mean......" I didn't get to finish my sentence when a sudden burst came from the fountain, and what looks like to me was an invisible shape or form of some kind and started to rush at me at high speed.
..........Chapter End Notes:Ok, that was the end of the second chapter!!! Whooooooot!!! XD
What do you guy think? Do you think its good, bad, needs a little work on? Please give me your review on how you think. If my story is going a good pace, or needs to be work on. If it does need work, tell me why.
Also what do you think is going to happen to David? Find out on chapter three.
Laters!!
(David's POV)
I was in complete shock that I was not in my room any more. I started to look myself over to see if I broke or lose anything that might be important to me.
"Alright, everything seems to be fine. No broken bones, I still have my clothes on, and I didn't bring anything with me." I said to myself and being relieved. Then I brought myself up to my feet and start to look around 'Ok I'm in a place where there are canals, gondolas for transportation, and it looks like a city of water. So am I in a city in Italy?' I thought, "It has to be it, there is no other explanation. Only Italy has cities like this, canals, gondolas, Pokemon....... Wait POKEMON??!!" I said out loud.
I look at an arch bridge over a small canal, and there on top of the bridge perched a small Pidgeotto who is just sitting there doing nothing. I just watch there in shock, not believing what I'm seeing.
'Oh my god! Oh my god! I'm in the Pokemon world.' I thought as I start panicking, "But where exactly am I in the Pokemon world? How am I going to get home? Is this a dream, or am I going insane?" I talk to myself as I slap myself to see if I was dreaming "*SLAP*!!!...... Ow!" Ok maybe I'm not dreaming.
So many questions were going through my mind, like if I'm ever going home. But when I think about it, maybe one of the legendaries could somehow be able to bring me back home. But when I thought harder, I remember my life back home. Where I had no friends, no exciting life, almost no parent supervision, and no social life.
This is one of a life time chance to be in the Pokemon world, and this would be probably my only opportunity to start a new life and maybe have my own adventure, with MY own Pokemon. But first, I need to know where I am, and then start my adventure from there.
Besides if I do want to go home (which I do not intend to), what are the chances of finding a pacific legendary Pokemon that would help me? The chances would be almost impossible.
..........
I was walking around the place for almost an hour now, and it was harder than I thought on where I should look for any clue on where I am. Everywhere I look I see some people with their Pokemon, and trainers looking for battles with their Pokemon, and even some Pokemon were wondering around on their own.
When I start to walk around where there are a lot of people passing by, some of the people who walk past me gave me odd looks, as if I'm a freak or something. It was probably what I'm wearing, but I don't think that's the problem. As I look around, the place it looks sort of familiar to me.
"Wait a second." I said and stop on my tracks, 'Ok I remember being teleported to here from the TV, and before that I was watching.... Pokemon Heroes.' I said in thought as I realized that it makes perfect sense that I was teleported to Alto Mare. It looks so similar from the movie, but looks more realistic up close. But I have to make sure if where I am, is where I thought I am right now.
I saw an average man walking in front of me about six or seven feet away from me and he was wearing a casual brown suit that he looks like some kind of business man of some sorts, and was holding a black brief case in his right hand. I quickly close the distance between me and the brown suited man and politely tap him on his shoulder.
"Um excuse me sir, where exactly are we?" I said as nicely as I can.
"Well my boy, we're in Alto Mare." He said happily. When I got a closer look at him, I saw that he looks like in his late twenties with a unique mustache that sort of looks like a Mario mustache from the Mario series, he had a nicely combed brown hair, and has sky blue eyes.
"Well thank you." I said quickly. I was about to turn around, when a hand was holding my right shoulder that made me stop on my tracks.
"Now hold on young one. You're not from around here, are you?" The same man I talked to said.
"Unfortunately I'm not." I said embarrassed.
"Alright, hold on a second." He said. Then he started looking in his brief case. I was curious of what this man is looking for and wonder what he was going to do. "I know it's in here some......ahh ha!" He proudly said as he took out what looks like a map, then put in my hands.
"A map?" I said curiously, looking in the map.
"Yes, it's the map of Alto Mare. I don't need it anymore since I come here a lot now and I know this city to the back of my hand, and I think you need the map more than I do." He said smiling.
"Wow thanks sir." I said kindly.
"You're welcome, I'm just glad to help. Now if you would excuse me, I need to get going." He said, and started to turn around and disappear into a building he walked in.
'Wow that was lucky of me.' I thought as I walk around the city of Alto Mare with a map in hand.
..........
As I walk around Alto Mare, at the same time looking in the map, I was aware that the guardians of the Soul Dew, Latios and Latias was some where in the city, and me being a fan of them I just have to at least see them in the flesh with my own eyes and get a close look a them. I remember in the movie that Latias and Latios can make themselves invisible and just wonder around the city. So it's going to be tough for me to find them. But I also remember in the movie that Latias, can take a shape or form of a human and since she is good friends with Bianca she turns into her a lot.
"So I just need to find someone that looks like Bianca. Hmmm...... sounds easy enough." I said as I kept on going to the direction of the town square since I think it's a good place start to look for Bianca/Latias.
When I arrive there, there were quite some people walking
in or out of the town square. I remember the description of Bianca's outfit since its simple to remember. She wore a white skirt under a green t-shirt, and wore pink shoes. She has brown hair that go up to her shoulders, and part of her hair style was what looks like Latias' ears at both sides at the top of her head, and she also has bright brown eyes.
"Ok, where are you Latias?" I muttered quietly as I look around to find a resemblance of Bianca. "Hmmm...... This is tougher than I thougWHOA" I said in amazement when I saw the exact same description of Bianca at the far end of the square, she had the outfit, the look, everything. 'But wait. What if that's the original Bianca and not Latias.' I sadly thought with a frown on my face, but I suddenly realized something, 'Wait! I remember a stupid detail about the original Bianca' I thought in realization "She wore a white artist hat, and she always carries a blue bag full of art supplies around with her." I said correcting myself, "This Bianca doesn't have those last two descriptions. So that's got to be Latias!" I said quietly so people don't hear me, then I quickly follow Bianca/Latias as quietly as possible.
As I quietly follow her, she had her arms behind her back with her hands holding each other, and she was walking slowly, minding her own business. She was looking around quite a lot, like she was trying to look for something.
This was going on for a few minutes, unit she went into an ally. I quickly follow her trail to the ally and try to be as silent as I can, and try not to get caught. The Bianca/Latias was going in all sorts of directions, and at some point I suddenly lost her for a second because I had to tie one of my shoe laces, and when I look back to the direction where I thought Bianca/Latias should be, she was gone.
'Oh shit, I think I lost her.' I thought in frustration. I found myself going through a bunch of allies that seems like one huge maze that feels like it has no end to it. I remember this is the part in the movie where Ash and Pikachu follow Bianca/Latias and got a little lost along the way.
..........
What seems like eternity, I finally got out of that shithole and went through a mini tunnel that has vines and plants growing all over the tunnel. When I got out of it, I saw there were only two directions, left and right.
I looked at the left and saw nothing but an empty street and a canal. To my right, what I saw was surprising to me. When I look to the right direction, I saw Bianca/Latias at the far end, and she was looking at me with a smile on her face.
"I guess she noticed me following her." I said looking down to the ground in defeat. When I look back on where Bianca/Latias was, she was still looking at me with the same smile, then she wave one of her arms at me in a way for me to follow her.
All I did was nod in accepting her offer, then she ran off to the left. I ran quickly to where she ran off, but when I got there, there was a wall.
'A dead end?' I curiously thought. "Hmmm...... I wonder?" I said to myself as I start to walk towards the wall. I thought I was going to hit the solid wall and hurt myself, but I didn't feel the impact of the wall. So I open my eyes to see that I was in a dark tunnel that there was light at the end of the tunnel. "Guess I went through the wall." I said. Then I quickly got to the end of the tunnel, and what I saw made me go into awe.
At the end of the tunnel I saw what made my mouth drop open, was the most amazing garden I have ever seen. There were many trees all over the garden and also had many Pokemon in the huge garden. Polywags in a small pond, a flock of Butterfrees flying around the garden, and some Yanma flying over some ponds.
'This must be the secret garden.' I thought when I start to walk down the stairs that lead to the garden. As I wander around, I've notice at the end of the garden was a big fountain that was gushing huge amount of water.
At my left there was a large pond, and at the end of it was swing hanging from a tree. That's when I saw Bianca/Latias swinging happily on the swing. I walk around the pond to see Bianca/Latias closer. When I got there, I feel like something was out of place.
'So if I'm with Latias right now, then where's Latios?' Thinking hard.
I was still thinking when a sudden breeze came out of nowhere and blew on me that the hair on the back of my neck stood at one end. I then slowly recognize this scene, and I started to tremble a little.
"Oh crap. If this is the part where Ash and Pikachu got their asses kicked by Latios. Then that would mean......" I didn't get to finish my sentence when a sudden burst came from the fountain, and what looks like to me was an invisible shape or form of some kind and started to rush at me at high speed.
..........Chapter End Notes:Ok, that was the end of the second chapter!!! Whooooooot!!! XD
What do you guy think? Do you think its good, bad, needs a little work on? Please give me your review on how you think. If my story is going a good pace, or needs to be work on. If it does need work, tell me why.
Also what do you think is going to happen to David? Find out on chapter three.
Laters!!