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Hey everyone! I'm TripleX and I've been reading on AGNPH for a while now, and the stories I've read are awesome. Even though I love reading fanfics, especially Pokemon fanfics, I would like to write and publish my own ideas of pokemon stories to AGNPH. But I was too afraid that they were not good enough or too amateur for you readers out there.Anyways, as I was reading some of my favourite author's stories, I've notice that the some of authors are updating their stories less and less, or slowly and slowly, and/or even sometimes to the point that they have to postpone their stories for a long period of time. I and many others understand that they are too busy doing other important things, or having huge writers block. But it gets frustrating for me and other readers out there to have to wait and wait for the authors to update their amazing stories, and it has come to the point that I can't wait any longer for the authors to update their stories.So I bravely decided to write and publish my stories out to AGNPH and other fanfiction websites to see how good my stories really are and how well you readers like my stories. So please comment or give me a good review of my stories, and rate as well. Also if you have time, comment on my stories on how to improve on my stories better to other readers out there so that they would want to read more and more of my stories. I will try to do my best to write and publish my stories as fast as I can, but also try to make them as great as possible. It's going to take awhile for me to write and publish my stories, but I got ideas going and they come fast, so please bare with me with the whole waiting part and see if my stories are excellent for all of you readers out there. :)I'm going to be starting my first pokemon story; it's called, "David's Start of a New Adventure". Rated XXX for Romance in later chapters, OCxPokemon. WARNING: there is yaoi involved and probably some more of it, so try to bare with it. If not DON'T READ IT!! But there will be a lot of friendships in this story and heart warming events. So I would recommend you at least read some it and I also think it's worth reading.If you want more information about me or more info about my characters of my stories you can click here, TripleX's Profile..........
Big Plans
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(David's POV)
When we arrived to Lorenzo/Bianca's home, it was surprisingly right next to the secret garden. Lorenzo/Bianca's home was pretty much one large house alone. The house was painted white all around the house with all the edges brown.
As we got inside the house it looked very luxurious, but had a classic look to it. (Now I'm not going into details again about what houses looks like inside, it sometimes get very annoying that you have to read the details on things you don't really need to know, like inside of a house. Alright, on with the story!) I was fascinated on how luxurious the house looked inside. It looks like a five star hotel, but in a house.
When everybody walked (floated for Latios and Latias' case) inside, the group went on their separate ways. Bianca and Latias went to a large balcony at the back end of their home, where there's a good view of the secret garden. As I watched them go to the balcony, Bianca started to paint something on the balcony but I couldn't tell what she was painting, while Latias happily floats around Bianca looking at her painting every once in a while.
As for me, I followed Lorenzo to the kitchen with Latios close behind me, and Lorenzo told me to sit at one of the chairs in the kitchen table. I took a seat on one of the chairs with Latios floated right next to me as we watched Lorenzo took out the first aid from one of the kitchen cabinets at the far end of the kitchen.
When Lorenzo sat next to me, patching up my wounds with the first aid, there was an awkward silence between the three of us and it didn't take long for me to start a conversation.
"So Lorenzo, how long did you work as a curator of the city museum?" I said as I started to pet Latios' head and he started to purr a little. (Back at the garden when we were talking, Lorenzo mention that he was the curator of the city museum.)
"Well David, I've worked there for over thirty years, and I never got tired of it." He said happily, "Also I build gondolas for a living when I don't work at the museum." He said as he bandaged one of my cuts on my right arm.
"Oh really? Is there anything else you do for a living?" I said, winching when he sprayed the antibiotic on another one of my cuts.
"No, not that I know of, but umm...... when I was younger I wanted to be a Pokemon trainer and battle other Pokemon trainers all around the world." He sadly said.
"Oh? Then why didn't you do it?" I said tilting my head at him. I was curious of why he didn't follow on what he wanted to be, I mean who doesn't want to be a Pokemon trainer and have your Pokemon by your side the whole time?
"Well, before I worked at the museum, my grandfather was the curator of the museum and he wanted me to take over after he would past away. He was also a gondola builder as well, and he would often ask me to work with him. But I'd enjoy it through it all." He said shrugging, while he was almost done bandaging me up.
"Ok, no offence but umm...... don't you think it's a little boring doing the things your grandfather wants you to do? And also, shouldn't YOU decide on what YOU want to do in your life?" Me saying it with a confused expression.
"Sometimes other things are more important than what you want to do in your life. Like me looking after beautiful Bianca over there." He said, mentioning Bianca at the balcony with Latias, "So David, what do you want be in your life." Looking at me with a question look. I wasn't expecting that kind of question, so that kind of caught me off guard but I answered anyway.
"Technically I want to be a Pokemon trainer as well but, I just want to travel all around the Pokemon regions seeing Pokemon, bonding with Pokemon, having a Pokemon adventure with the Pokemon I bond with, and I guess doing battles as well. But unfortunately I don't have the equipments or requirements to do so." I said sadly looking at Lorenzo. He was thinking after I said that last sentence, then got a look as if he's gotten an idea.
"Wait here David I want to give you something." After saying that sentence, he rushed across the kitchen and disappears into a hallway to his left and went up a set of stairs leading up the next floor. I was wondering what he wanted to give me, but my thoughts were distracted as I gasp when Latios started nuzzling my neck with his head, while he was making cooing noises. I smiled, then rubbed his dragon like neck gently and we pretty much stayed like that until Lorenzo would come back.
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It was a few minutes when Lorenzo left upstairs. Me and Latios were still in the same position as last time when Lorenzo left. I thought of why I got so lucky to be in this world of Pokemon and get to be with one of my favorite Pokemon, Latios.
Finally Lorenzo came back after over ten minutes and what he wanted to give me was in his hands, I was in disbelieve to see what was in them.
"My father gave these to me on my tenth birthday, but since I was too busy with my grandfather, helping him with the museum and the gondolas I reckoned you should have it." Lorenzo said as he handed me an emerald green Pokedex and a belt with a few empty Pokeballs. I couldn't believe what was given to me as I look at the items with complete shock, but I finally spoke.
"W-Why are you giving this to me?" I said with shock. Even Latios was a little surprised from the gift that was given to me.
"David, I could see and tell that you have great passion for Pokemon and that you would be great with other Pokemon too. Besides, I don't need it since I was too busy with other things." He said with a smirk.
I was going in a verge of tears, but I manage to regained myself and gratefully thanked Lorenzo and then I check my new Pokedex. I was surprised that the features on the Pokedex were a lot similar to my DS back in the real world, the buttons, how it works, everything. I check and see that it had a GPS system on every region you go to with a build in map in it.
"Oh and David, I've already transferred some money to your trainers card in your Pokedex so you can have a good start on your journey." Lorenzo said with a smile. I nodded and checked, and sure enough I got quite a lot of money for beginner trainers, $10,000 to be exact.
I thanked Lorenzo again, and as I look more into the Pokedex I realize that there was one important thing before I need to start my journey, besides the equipment and Pokemon supplies I'm going to need to travel with. (I was going to buy them in the Pokemart anyway)
"But wait Lorenzo. Before any trainer goes and starts their Pokemon journey, every trainer needs a starter Pokemon before they go on their journey." I said, very disappointed that I don't have one.
"Hmmm...... you do have a point there." Lorenzo said as he thought hard to himself. As he was thinking, he started to look at Latios who was still floating next to me with concern that I was disappointed and put a claw on my shoulder to try to comfort me. Then he started to look at me, then Latios, then at me again. What started a small smile on his face then grew into a huge smirk that I noticed, and then I asked.
"Why are you smirking like that?" I asked, bringing him back to reality.
"Oh nothing, nothing. You and Latios talk among to yourselves, while I'll go and talk to Bianca." He said, and then he headed towards the balcony where Bianca and Latias were at.
'Ok then?' I thought as the smirk on his face looked a little suspicious to me, "Hey Latios, do you want to go back to the garden with me?" I said looking face to face with the Eon Pokemon. He nodded, first I put the Pokedex and the Pokeballs down at the kitchen table, and then we made our exit out the front door and walked/float our way back to the secret garden.
(Ok I'm going to start switching back and fourth events, so try to not get confused)
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(With Lorenzo and Bianca)
"Bianca, Latias, my I have word with you two?" Lorenzo said kindly, opening and then closed the balcony door behind him.
"Yeah sure grandfather, what is it?" Bianca questioned as she stops her painting and went to her father, with Latias in toe.
"Let me ask you two a question. How well do you think Latios and David get along?" He asked, expecting to get a good answer.
"I think they get along great. Latios can't seem to get enough of David, and they seem really close to each other even though they just met a few hours ago and had a fight before they even get to know each other. Then they made up quickly and got to be really close friends." Bianca said with Latias nodding in agreement.
"I was hoping you would say something like that." Lorenzo grinning. Then he started to explain his idea to Bianca and Latias that has to do with me and Latios. (What you think Lorenzo is up to?)
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(Back with David and Latios)
As we arrive at the secret garden the sun was just above the horizon at the right side of the garden giving the garden an orange sunset setting in the garden which made it even more beautiful.
I was amazed on how beautiful the garden looked, it almost seems magical. As I started looking around, fascinated of the admirable scenery, I notice one of my shoes laces was untied on my left shoe so I have to kneel down and tie them again (DAMN FUCKING SHOES!). When I finish tying my shoes I've notice that Latios was not at my side anymore.
'Hmmm...... that's strange, I've could of swore that Latios was right beside me.' I thought as I start looking around to try to find him.
I was wondering around the garden for a few minutes thinking of where he might have gone to. I was staring to panic a little, worrying for my good new friend. But that all changed when I felt an invisible object went under between my legs and started to life me off the ground.
'Holy shit!' I thought as I hold on to the invisible object as tight as I can so I wouldn't fall off. I was worried that I was going to be taken away and that I wouldn't come back to the garden. To my relief the invisible object revealed itself to be Latios who was smiling the whole time as we fly around the garden.
"Latios why are you...... Whoa!" I said when I look at the view. The view was incredible! I could see the whole garden and I could even see part of the city with the canals all around the city. "Wow Latios, this is a great view, no wonder you and Latias like to fly around so much." I said as we kept on flying. Latios only nodded in agreement as we fly around some more. "Hey Latios, do you think we can fly faster?" I asked. The only thing I saw on Latios' face was a little smirk and then he started to pick up great speed. "Whoooooaaaaaa!!!!" I screamed as we fly around the garden so fast that I feel like we're going in super sonic speed.
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(Back with Lorenzo and Bianca)
Bianca gasp "Oh do you think Latios would want to go with him?"
"I'm positive Bianca. I see how they bond with each other and Latios would be devastated if David leaves the city the go on an adventure without being with him." Lorenzo said, "Also, Latios has never been happier, besides when he and Latias play together." Lorenzo chuckled remembering the times when Latias and Latios would always play together when ever they have the chance.
"But what about Latias? Don't you think Latias would be upset seeing her brother going away, or how about the Soul Dew? I don't think Latias can defend the Soul Dew by herself without Latios." Bianca said concerned for her good friend Latias, which Latias agree to Bianca's word.
"That is why I'm going to be using a special security system I've been working on to guard the Soul Dew. That way Latias doesn't need to guard it anymore so she could go with her brother and had an adventure together with David." Lorenzo finally stated.
"B-But......" Bianca was in the verge of tears, because her two good friends would be leaving her, but her grandfather interrupted.
"I know you and Latias are very good friends, that's why I'm telling David that he WILL promise to come to visit us when ever he can. Also I've put our PC (personal computer) address into David's Pokedex. So when ever David, Latios, or Latias would want to talk to one of us, they could use the Pokedex to talk to us from their Pokedex to our PC screen." He said proudly.
This made Bianca a whole lot better, she then wipe some of her tears away and thanked her grandfather for making her feel better that she would get to see Latias and Latios in some ways, and that she would be ok when the time comes when Latias and Latios leaves with David.
"Great I'm going to tell David and Latios the good news. Hey David, Latios I've got something to tell...... you." He said slowly when he didn't find neither one of us at the kitchen. He then went back to Bianca and Latias. "Umm...... do you know where David and Latios went off to?" He asked to two girls.
"Oh yeah, me and Latias saw both of them heading back to the garden while I was painting...... oh there they are now." She said pointing at me and Latios from afar flying around the garden super fast.
"WHOOOOOHOOOOO. YEAHHHHHHHH, BABBBBYYYYYYY." Was all they heard from me as I put my hands high in the air while flying on Latios' back. They couldn't help but laugh at our display of having fun. Then Latias came zooming into the garden with me and Latios so she could be part of the fun with us.
"Hahaha see how much fun these two are having with David?" Lorenzo laughed as he showed his big belly when he laughs.
"Yeah, they do look happy with David." Bianca pointed out while looking in our direction with a smile on her face.
..........Chapter End Notes:That's the end of chapter four everyone!!! Yeah!!! XD
Please give me a rate and comment/review on how the story is going so far.
Also, what do you guys think of David's reaction when he finds out that the two Eon Pokemon are going to be his starter Pokemon?
Stick around for chapter 5!!!
Adios!!! Amigos!!
(David's POV)
When we arrived to Lorenzo/Bianca's home, it was surprisingly right next to the secret garden. Lorenzo/Bianca's home was pretty much one large house alone. The house was painted white all around the house with all the edges brown.
As we got inside the house it looked very luxurious, but had a classic look to it. (Now I'm not going into details again about what houses looks like inside, it sometimes get very annoying that you have to read the details on things you don't really need to know, like inside of a house. Alright, on with the story!) I was fascinated on how luxurious the house looked inside. It looks like a five star hotel, but in a house.
When everybody walked (floated for Latios and Latias' case) inside, the group went on their separate ways. Bianca and Latias went to a large balcony at the back end of their home, where there's a good view of the secret garden. As I watched them go to the balcony, Bianca started to paint something on the balcony but I couldn't tell what she was painting, while Latias happily floats around Bianca looking at her painting every once in a while.
As for me, I followed Lorenzo to the kitchen with Latios close behind me, and Lorenzo told me to sit at one of the chairs in the kitchen table. I took a seat on one of the chairs with Latios floated right next to me as we watched Lorenzo took out the first aid from one of the kitchen cabinets at the far end of the kitchen.
When Lorenzo sat next to me, patching up my wounds with the first aid, there was an awkward silence between the three of us and it didn't take long for me to start a conversation.
"So Lorenzo, how long did you work as a curator of the city museum?" I said as I started to pet Latios' head and he started to purr a little. (Back at the garden when we were talking, Lorenzo mention that he was the curator of the city museum.)
"Well David, I've worked there for over thirty years, and I never got tired of it." He said happily, "Also I build gondolas for a living when I don't work at the museum." He said as he bandaged one of my cuts on my right arm.
"Oh really? Is there anything else you do for a living?" I said, winching when he sprayed the antibiotic on another one of my cuts.
"No, not that I know of, but umm...... when I was younger I wanted to be a Pokemon trainer and battle other Pokemon trainers all around the world." He sadly said.
"Oh? Then why didn't you do it?" I said tilting my head at him. I was curious of why he didn't follow on what he wanted to be, I mean who doesn't want to be a Pokemon trainer and have your Pokemon by your side the whole time?
"Well, before I worked at the museum, my grandfather was the curator of the museum and he wanted me to take over after he would past away. He was also a gondola builder as well, and he would often ask me to work with him. But I'd enjoy it through it all." He said shrugging, while he was almost done bandaging me up.
"Ok, no offence but umm...... don't you think it's a little boring doing the things your grandfather wants you to do? And also, shouldn't YOU decide on what YOU want to do in your life?" Me saying it with a confused expression.
"Sometimes other things are more important than what you want to do in your life. Like me looking after beautiful Bianca over there." He said, mentioning Bianca at the balcony with Latias, "So David, what do you want be in your life." Looking at me with a question look. I wasn't expecting that kind of question, so that kind of caught me off guard but I answered anyway.
"Technically I want to be a Pokemon trainer as well but, I just want to travel all around the Pokemon regions seeing Pokemon, bonding with Pokemon, having a Pokemon adventure with the Pokemon I bond with, and I guess doing battles as well. But unfortunately I don't have the equipments or requirements to do so." I said sadly looking at Lorenzo. He was thinking after I said that last sentence, then got a look as if he's gotten an idea.
"Wait here David I want to give you something." After saying that sentence, he rushed across the kitchen and disappears into a hallway to his left and went up a set of stairs leading up the next floor. I was wondering what he wanted to give me, but my thoughts were distracted as I gasp when Latios started nuzzling my neck with his head, while he was making cooing noises. I smiled, then rubbed his dragon like neck gently and we pretty much stayed like that until Lorenzo would come back.
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It was a few minutes when Lorenzo left upstairs. Me and Latios were still in the same position as last time when Lorenzo left. I thought of why I got so lucky to be in this world of Pokemon and get to be with one of my favorite Pokemon, Latios.
Finally Lorenzo came back after over ten minutes and what he wanted to give me was in his hands, I was in disbelieve to see what was in them.
"My father gave these to me on my tenth birthday, but since I was too busy with my grandfather, helping him with the museum and the gondolas I reckoned you should have it." Lorenzo said as he handed me an emerald green Pokedex and a belt with a few empty Pokeballs. I couldn't believe what was given to me as I look at the items with complete shock, but I finally spoke.
"W-Why are you giving this to me?" I said with shock. Even Latios was a little surprised from the gift that was given to me.
"David, I could see and tell that you have great passion for Pokemon and that you would be great with other Pokemon too. Besides, I don't need it since I was too busy with other things." He said with a smirk.
I was going in a verge of tears, but I manage to regained myself and gratefully thanked Lorenzo and then I check my new Pokedex. I was surprised that the features on the Pokedex were a lot similar to my DS back in the real world, the buttons, how it works, everything. I check and see that it had a GPS system on every region you go to with a build in map in it.
"Oh and David, I've already transferred some money to your trainers card in your Pokedex so you can have a good start on your journey." Lorenzo said with a smile. I nodded and checked, and sure enough I got quite a lot of money for beginner trainers, $10,000 to be exact.
I thanked Lorenzo again, and as I look more into the Pokedex I realize that there was one important thing before I need to start my journey, besides the equipment and Pokemon supplies I'm going to need to travel with. (I was going to buy them in the Pokemart anyway)
"But wait Lorenzo. Before any trainer goes and starts their Pokemon journey, every trainer needs a starter Pokemon before they go on their journey." I said, very disappointed that I don't have one.
"Hmmm...... you do have a point there." Lorenzo said as he thought hard to himself. As he was thinking, he started to look at Latios who was still floating next to me with concern that I was disappointed and put a claw on my shoulder to try to comfort me. Then he started to look at me, then Latios, then at me again. What started a small smile on his face then grew into a huge smirk that I noticed, and then I asked.
"Why are you smirking like that?" I asked, bringing him back to reality.
"Oh nothing, nothing. You and Latios talk among to yourselves, while I'll go and talk to Bianca." He said, and then he headed towards the balcony where Bianca and Latias were at.
'Ok then?' I thought as the smirk on his face looked a little suspicious to me, "Hey Latios, do you want to go back to the garden with me?" I said looking face to face with the Eon Pokemon. He nodded, first I put the Pokedex and the Pokeballs down at the kitchen table, and then we made our exit out the front door and walked/float our way back to the secret garden.
(Ok I'm going to start switching back and fourth events, so try to not get confused)
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(With Lorenzo and Bianca)
"Bianca, Latias, my I have word with you two?" Lorenzo said kindly, opening and then closed the balcony door behind him.
"Yeah sure grandfather, what is it?" Bianca questioned as she stops her painting and went to her father, with Latias in toe.
"Let me ask you two a question. How well do you think Latios and David get along?" He asked, expecting to get a good answer.
"I think they get along great. Latios can't seem to get enough of David, and they seem really close to each other even though they just met a few hours ago and had a fight before they even get to know each other. Then they made up quickly and got to be really close friends." Bianca said with Latias nodding in agreement.
"I was hoping you would say something like that." Lorenzo grinning. Then he started to explain his idea to Bianca and Latias that has to do with me and Latios. (What you think Lorenzo is up to?)
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(Back with David and Latios)
As we arrive at the secret garden the sun was just above the horizon at the right side of the garden giving the garden an orange sunset setting in the garden which made it even more beautiful.
I was amazed on how beautiful the garden looked, it almost seems magical. As I started looking around, fascinated of the admirable scenery, I notice one of my shoes laces was untied on my left shoe so I have to kneel down and tie them again (DAMN FUCKING SHOES!). When I finish tying my shoes I've notice that Latios was not at my side anymore.
'Hmmm...... that's strange, I've could of swore that Latios was right beside me.' I thought as I start looking around to try to find him.
I was wondering around the garden for a few minutes thinking of where he might have gone to. I was staring to panic a little, worrying for my good new friend. But that all changed when I felt an invisible object went under between my legs and started to life me off the ground.
'Holy shit!' I thought as I hold on to the invisible object as tight as I can so I wouldn't fall off. I was worried that I was going to be taken away and that I wouldn't come back to the garden. To my relief the invisible object revealed itself to be Latios who was smiling the whole time as we fly around the garden.
"Latios why are you...... Whoa!" I said when I look at the view. The view was incredible! I could see the whole garden and I could even see part of the city with the canals all around the city. "Wow Latios, this is a great view, no wonder you and Latias like to fly around so much." I said as we kept on flying. Latios only nodded in agreement as we fly around some more. "Hey Latios, do you think we can fly faster?" I asked. The only thing I saw on Latios' face was a little smirk and then he started to pick up great speed. "Whoooooaaaaaa!!!!" I screamed as we fly around the garden so fast that I feel like we're going in super sonic speed.
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(Back with Lorenzo and Bianca)
Bianca gasp "Oh do you think Latios would want to go with him?"
"I'm positive Bianca. I see how they bond with each other and Latios would be devastated if David leaves the city the go on an adventure without being with him." Lorenzo said, "Also, Latios has never been happier, besides when he and Latias play together." Lorenzo chuckled remembering the times when Latias and Latios would always play together when ever they have the chance.
"But what about Latias? Don't you think Latias would be upset seeing her brother going away, or how about the Soul Dew? I don't think Latias can defend the Soul Dew by herself without Latios." Bianca said concerned for her good friend Latias, which Latias agree to Bianca's word.
"That is why I'm going to be using a special security system I've been working on to guard the Soul Dew. That way Latias doesn't need to guard it anymore so she could go with her brother and had an adventure together with David." Lorenzo finally stated.
"B-But......" Bianca was in the verge of tears, because her two good friends would be leaving her, but her grandfather interrupted.
"I know you and Latias are very good friends, that's why I'm telling David that he WILL promise to come to visit us when ever he can. Also I've put our PC (personal computer) address into David's Pokedex. So when ever David, Latios, or Latias would want to talk to one of us, they could use the Pokedex to talk to us from their Pokedex to our PC screen." He said proudly.
This made Bianca a whole lot better, she then wipe some of her tears away and thanked her grandfather for making her feel better that she would get to see Latias and Latios in some ways, and that she would be ok when the time comes when Latias and Latios leaves with David.
"Great I'm going to tell David and Latios the good news. Hey David, Latios I've got something to tell...... you." He said slowly when he didn't find neither one of us at the kitchen. He then went back to Bianca and Latias. "Umm...... do you know where David and Latios went off to?" He asked to two girls.
"Oh yeah, me and Latias saw both of them heading back to the garden while I was painting...... oh there they are now." She said pointing at me and Latios from afar flying around the garden super fast.
"WHOOOOOHOOOOO. YEAHHHHHHHH, BABBBBYYYYYYY." Was all they heard from me as I put my hands high in the air while flying on Latios' back. They couldn't help but laugh at our display of having fun. Then Latias came zooming into the garden with me and Latios so she could be part of the fun with us.
"Hahaha see how much fun these two are having with David?" Lorenzo laughed as he showed his big belly when he laughs.
"Yeah, they do look happy with David." Bianca pointed out while looking in our direction with a smile on her face.
..........Chapter End Notes:That's the end of chapter four everyone!!! Yeah!!! XD
Please give me a rate and comment/review on how the story is going so far.
Also, what do you guys think of David's reaction when he finds out that the two Eon Pokemon are going to be his starter Pokemon?
Stick around for chapter 5!!!
Adios!!! Amigos!!