Story Notes:
This is a slightly revised version of an unfinished story that I originally uploaded to fanfiction.net. The plot and characters are unchanged.
Chapter 1
Being trapped in a cave by a blizzard was not what I had had in mind when I had decided to travel to Snowpoint City, yet it was the very thing that led to my life being changed forever. At the time, however, I was only concerned with survival.
"Come on out, Geodude." I pressed the button on one of my pokeballs, and the stoic figure of my Geodude appeared in front of me. "Geodude, I need you to block the exit of this cave with some boulders."
The cave we were in was rather small, just barely high enough to stand in, and not very deep; at least we didn't have to worry about any wild pokemon attacking us. I wasn't claustrophobic, but I still wasn't fond of waking up sore.
"Oh, by the way Geodude, make sure there's a hole for air." I also wasn't fond of waking up dead.
"Geo," Geodude responded.
I slouched against the wall, thinking about how ill my luck was. I was glad that I had Geodude with me, as he was much quicker at his job than I would have been, and he was quickly finished. Closing the cave created a whole new set of problems, however. It was both very dark and very cold, and there was very little to do. My own body heat was proving insufficient, and Geodude was stone cold, being a rock-type, so I decided to let out one of my warmer pokemon.
"Sara, come out!"
The glow from the pokeball briefly illuminated the cave. "I hope Sara doesn't mind this," I thought. Sara was a good pokemon for sure, but for some reason she didn't appreciate having my will imposed on her as much as some of my other pokemon. A Ninetales materialized in front of me, staring at me questioningly.
"Hey Sara, if I don't get some warmth soon I'm going to freeze to death. It would be really nice if..."
Sara's paws were suddenly pressed against my shoulders, and then with her powerful legs she threw me onto the floor. Could she be a little gentler? My breath was athen knocked out of me when a weight dropped onto my chest, a very furry weight. Sara had decided to lie on top of me.
"Seriously now, Sara." I grabbed her body and rolled her and myself onto our sides. She growled softly in complaint. Wanting to get a little closer to her heat, I rolled her onto her other side and snuggled up next to her. I was lucky to have pokemon that cared about me enough to not let me freeze to death. We stayed in that position for a while, my body now much warmer, and I began to feel myself growing tired, drifting into sleep. I whispered goodnight into Sara's ear and soon fell asleep.
That night I had some very dirty dreams, mainly focusing on Gardenia, the very attractive gym leader that I had finally defeated a couple of weeks ago. She was underneath me, looking at me as if she was unsure of what she was doing, which I found adorable. I ran my fingers gently through her hair, and whispered reassuring words into her ear. I brought my mouth to hers, and embraced her body, holding her close to me. She closed her eyes and I began to move to enter her as I kissed her warm wet lips, her sweet, warm... wet... wet!
Suddenly I was awakened, and startled, by a warm tongue licking my face. I really that I was still holding Sara close, and that I'd been rubbing my dick against her all night. How nice of a bedmate was I. She moved slightly, and still tight against her, it admittedly felt good.. I blushed at the thought and moved away from her, embarrassed.
"I'm sorry Sara, I was dreaming and you were..." I began, but she was licking my mouth now. Intrigued by her actions, I waited a moment, before, with a strange curiosity, beginning to kiss her back. I didn't why she was doing this, but it was clear that she wasn't very experienced. I figured I would show her how it's done. I grabbed her behind the ears, keeping her head still, and pressed my lips to her mouth. I opened my lips slightly, and slipped my tongue into her very warm mouth.
Sara sat up in front of me, still locked in a kiss. I rubbed my hands over her fur aggressively, and pulled her chest up against mine. I felt like I was still dreaming, a bizarre dream for sure, and so my conscience didn't object to what I was doing. I grabbed her fur and dropped her onto her back, and then fell on top of her, much like she had done to me, as I continued to mix saliva with her. She pulled away momentarily and looked at me unsurely, not used to having someone on top of her. I thought of Gardenia and how cute she had been. My Ninetales is just as cute. I stroked her soft fur and looked at her and thought, No, cuter. Why don't I...
I was shocked at what I was thinking. After all, she was a pokemon, and I was her trainer. It would be unfair for me to take advantage of her. Unfortunately, I knew that I wouldn't be able to get the thought out of my head, and that I would need release before going back to sleep. Well, I figured, it wouldn't hurt to masturbate with her. I slipped down my pants and underwear, and began softly rubbing myself directly against Sara's fur. It was a unique sensation. She looked at me again questioningly. In response, I reached my hand down to in between her legs and felt for a soft, fleshy hole. When I found it I noticed that it was larger and more swollen than I thought. I lightly moved my finger around the outer edge, slowly moving inwards. She squirmed in response to this, so I kept going, finally working my index finger inside of her. Being a fire type she was very warm on the inside, warmer even than her mouth. I continued to masturbate on her fur, becomingly increasingly aroused. Judging from the dampness that was now starting to come over her, I could tell that Sara was too. I bit her softly on the neck, licking her luxorious fur. I inhaled deeply; I wanted to be filled with her scent, which was now arousing me even further. I by now had worked three fingers into her, and her muscles were now moving in response to their presence.
I could tell now that I would be able to fit inside her easily. I wanted her badly. Beginning to kiss her again wildy, I looked into her eyes and lost all self-control. I positioned her beneath me, while she looked at me expectantly. All at once I pushed myself into her as deeply as I could. She squealed pain, and I realized that this was probably her first time. In one sense, it was mine too. Slowly I began thrusting my hips against hers, her legs spread wide around me. As my body clashed against hers in a union unintented by nature, I claspedmy fists around her fur as tightly as she was pressed around me. The warmth and the aroma and the closeness to her overwhelmed my senses. I increased my tempo, and she began to return with light movements of her own. I pinned her shoulders to the ground and kissed her all over her face, her lips, her cheek, her muzzle. It was more powerful than any experience I had had before, like an awakening, an evolution.
It wasn't long before my "evolution" would be finished. I increased the speed of our thrusts, now slamming against her fragile furry body repeated. The experience was soon too much for her, and she whined in the pleasure the pain of her first love and as she reached her climax. Her liquids tainted her beautiful fur. With one final breath of the most sensual moment of my life, my seed shot far into her virgin body. I slowly released my grasp on her, feeling a powerful bond that would transcend our physical hold on each other.
I pulled out of her dripping sex, and wondered had just happened. I was exhausted, and Sara was too. I felt a strange contentedness inside of me that I didn't know how to explain. Doing the only thing that there was to do, I laid down and pulled Sara, my Ninetales, my pokemon, against me, and whispered sweet nothings as we fell back to sleep, to where dreams belonged.
"Come on out, Geodude." I pressed the button on one of my pokeballs, and the stoic figure of my Geodude appeared in front of me. "Geodude, I need you to block the exit of this cave with some boulders."
The cave we were in was rather small, just barely high enough to stand in, and not very deep; at least we didn't have to worry about any wild pokemon attacking us. I wasn't claustrophobic, but I still wasn't fond of waking up sore.
"Oh, by the way Geodude, make sure there's a hole for air." I also wasn't fond of waking up dead.
"Geo," Geodude responded.
I slouched against the wall, thinking about how ill my luck was. I was glad that I had Geodude with me, as he was much quicker at his job than I would have been, and he was quickly finished. Closing the cave created a whole new set of problems, however. It was both very dark and very cold, and there was very little to do. My own body heat was proving insufficient, and Geodude was stone cold, being a rock-type, so I decided to let out one of my warmer pokemon.
"Sara, come out!"
The glow from the pokeball briefly illuminated the cave. "I hope Sara doesn't mind this," I thought. Sara was a good pokemon for sure, but for some reason she didn't appreciate having my will imposed on her as much as some of my other pokemon. A Ninetales materialized in front of me, staring at me questioningly.
"Hey Sara, if I don't get some warmth soon I'm going to freeze to death. It would be really nice if..."
Sara's paws were suddenly pressed against my shoulders, and then with her powerful legs she threw me onto the floor. Could she be a little gentler? My breath was athen knocked out of me when a weight dropped onto my chest, a very furry weight. Sara had decided to lie on top of me.
"Seriously now, Sara." I grabbed her body and rolled her and myself onto our sides. She growled softly in complaint. Wanting to get a little closer to her heat, I rolled her onto her other side and snuggled up next to her. I was lucky to have pokemon that cared about me enough to not let me freeze to death. We stayed in that position for a while, my body now much warmer, and I began to feel myself growing tired, drifting into sleep. I whispered goodnight into Sara's ear and soon fell asleep.
That night I had some very dirty dreams, mainly focusing on Gardenia, the very attractive gym leader that I had finally defeated a couple of weeks ago. She was underneath me, looking at me as if she was unsure of what she was doing, which I found adorable. I ran my fingers gently through her hair, and whispered reassuring words into her ear. I brought my mouth to hers, and embraced her body, holding her close to me. She closed her eyes and I began to move to enter her as I kissed her warm wet lips, her sweet, warm... wet... wet!
Suddenly I was awakened, and startled, by a warm tongue licking my face. I really that I was still holding Sara close, and that I'd been rubbing my dick against her all night. How nice of a bedmate was I. She moved slightly, and still tight against her, it admittedly felt good.. I blushed at the thought and moved away from her, embarrassed.
"I'm sorry Sara, I was dreaming and you were..." I began, but she was licking my mouth now. Intrigued by her actions, I waited a moment, before, with a strange curiosity, beginning to kiss her back. I didn't why she was doing this, but it was clear that she wasn't very experienced. I figured I would show her how it's done. I grabbed her behind the ears, keeping her head still, and pressed my lips to her mouth. I opened my lips slightly, and slipped my tongue into her very warm mouth.
Sara sat up in front of me, still locked in a kiss. I rubbed my hands over her fur aggressively, and pulled her chest up against mine. I felt like I was still dreaming, a bizarre dream for sure, and so my conscience didn't object to what I was doing. I grabbed her fur and dropped her onto her back, and then fell on top of her, much like she had done to me, as I continued to mix saliva with her. She pulled away momentarily and looked at me unsurely, not used to having someone on top of her. I thought of Gardenia and how cute she had been. My Ninetales is just as cute. I stroked her soft fur and looked at her and thought, No, cuter. Why don't I...
I was shocked at what I was thinking. After all, she was a pokemon, and I was her trainer. It would be unfair for me to take advantage of her. Unfortunately, I knew that I wouldn't be able to get the thought out of my head, and that I would need release before going back to sleep. Well, I figured, it wouldn't hurt to masturbate with her. I slipped down my pants and underwear, and began softly rubbing myself directly against Sara's fur. It was a unique sensation. She looked at me again questioningly. In response, I reached my hand down to in between her legs and felt for a soft, fleshy hole. When I found it I noticed that it was larger and more swollen than I thought. I lightly moved my finger around the outer edge, slowly moving inwards. She squirmed in response to this, so I kept going, finally working my index finger inside of her. Being a fire type she was very warm on the inside, warmer even than her mouth. I continued to masturbate on her fur, becomingly increasingly aroused. Judging from the dampness that was now starting to come over her, I could tell that Sara was too. I bit her softly on the neck, licking her luxorious fur. I inhaled deeply; I wanted to be filled with her scent, which was now arousing me even further. I by now had worked three fingers into her, and her muscles were now moving in response to their presence.
I could tell now that I would be able to fit inside her easily. I wanted her badly. Beginning to kiss her again wildy, I looked into her eyes and lost all self-control. I positioned her beneath me, while she looked at me expectantly. All at once I pushed myself into her as deeply as I could. She squealed pain, and I realized that this was probably her first time. In one sense, it was mine too. Slowly I began thrusting my hips against hers, her legs spread wide around me. As my body clashed against hers in a union unintented by nature, I claspedmy fists around her fur as tightly as she was pressed around me. The warmth and the aroma and the closeness to her overwhelmed my senses. I increased my tempo, and she began to return with light movements of her own. I pinned her shoulders to the ground and kissed her all over her face, her lips, her cheek, her muzzle. It was more powerful than any experience I had had before, like an awakening, an evolution.
It wasn't long before my "evolution" would be finished. I increased the speed of our thrusts, now slamming against her fragile furry body repeated. The experience was soon too much for her, and she whined in the pleasure the pain of her first love and as she reached her climax. Her liquids tainted her beautiful fur. With one final breath of the most sensual moment of my life, my seed shot far into her virgin body. I slowly released my grasp on her, feeling a powerful bond that would transcend our physical hold on each other.
I pulled out of her dripping sex, and wondered had just happened. I was exhausted, and Sara was too. I felt a strange contentedness inside of me that I didn't know how to explain. Doing the only thing that there was to do, I laid down and pulled Sara, my Ninetales, my pokemon, against me, and whispered sweet nothings as we fell back to sleep, to where dreams belonged.
Chapter End Notes:
Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended, and is applicable for all consecutive chapters that follow.
Date:Oct 24 2012 Chapter:Chapter 1
Okay, there was a few mistakes but at the most I only saw three. Besides that, everything else was written pretty well; it had a nice flow and kept me interested.
The mating scene was damn good, but... Ah virgins, what can you do with them? Heheh...
Shame about the shortness, but I think this is still a good read. Im going to give this a 6 out of 10!
You would have got more if it was longer, no errors, a bit more descriptive or had multiple rounds... But still a great job.
All the best! -Fuzzy