Everything was so descriptive, the pace was steady, the ninetails was simples and sexy as hell & the guy didn't seem like a useless numpty.
The grammar was excellent, no mistakes at all. The only thing I did spot was one extra full stop somewhere.
So yeah, pretty much a brilliant story. I really enjoyed it, I don't think it would be possible to sequel this but that would be tremendous if you did.
I can give you a very genorous nine out of ten... No wait, ten out of ten! I think it deserves it.
Date:Oct 20 2012 Chapter:Chapter 1
Everything was so descriptive, the pace was steady, the ninetails was simples and sexy as hell & the guy didn't seem like a useless numpty.
The grammar was excellent, no mistakes at all. The only thing I did spot was one extra full stop somewhere.
So yeah, pretty much a brilliant story. I really enjoyed it, I don't think it would be possible to sequel this but that would be tremendous if you did.
I can give you a very genorous nine out of ten... No wait, ten out of ten! I think it deserves it.
All the best! -Fuzzy
Date:Apr 16 2013 Chapter:Chapter 1
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Burn, Baby Burn
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Date:Jun 22 2014 Chapter:Chapter 1