Chp. 1
Disclaimer: This is a work of fan fiction and should not be considered related to the actual source of the characters and/or places. Pokemon is copyrighted to Nintendo and Gamefreak and the characters within are used without permission. It will contain material that should not be read by those under the age of 18. It should especially not be read by those who would hate reading about two males going at it. This is my first story so please bare with it as it will probably suck for you. Please enjoy.
"Out of One Love and Into Another"
It was a bright and sunny day in the world of Pokemon. The Butterfree were fluttering around in a field of flowers. The Pidgey were all enjoying an afternoon flight around the forest. Magikarp were all splashing in a nearby lake. Ash and his group were walking along the path and enjoying the beautiful day. But this story isn't about them so their presence is somewhat pointless I suppose. Let's shift the scene to elsewhere.
Somewhere in a mountain range, a loud roar could be heard for a mile around. At a nearby cave, some pokemon who had heard the roar and came to inspect it found a Tyranitar running out of the cave with rocks flying past him. The Tyranitar and his girlfriend had just had a fight and the female started to use rock throw to drive him out of the cave. A few minutes later, the Tyranitar found himself wondering around the forest looking for a new home and tired from all the running. He eventually found a lake to rest by and to get a drink from.
He could still remember how the argument started. He had just found out from a friend that she had been cheating on him with another Tyranitar.
"How could you go behind by back you filthy whore!!!" He had yelled at her.
"You just can't handle the fact that he's a better provider and a better lover!!!" She countered.
"We could have talked about but no, YOU just decide to go and see someone else instead" He bellowed.
"Just shut up and get out!!! ROOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAR!!!" Was the last thing she shouted before she started using rock throw.
It was just then that he saw his friend Rhydon walk over and sit next to him. The Rhydon just sat there looking at the lake with the Tyranitar and admiring the view. It was a few minutes before either of them said anything.
"Hey Rhy." That was his nickname for the Rhydon.
"Howzit goin' Ty?" This was the Rhydon's nickname for the Tyranitar.
"I guess you heard all the commotion then." Ty finally said after a few minutes.
"Yeah, sorry about what happened between you and her. Makes me wish I had never told you about them." Rhy said. It was the Rhydon who had caught Ty's girlfriend cheating with another Tyranitar. He wasn't going to say anything at first but he felt that, as Ty's best childhood friend, it would be best if Ty knew before things got bad.
"I'm glad you did though. I don't know what would have happened if she had brought him around and decided to tell me there and then." Ty said, trying to comfort his friend.
After a few more minutes of looking at the lake and the sky they decided to head to Rhy's home. Rhy had offered to let Ty stay at his cave until he could find a new place to stay.
"Thanks Rhy, I would love to stay at your place. Thinking about this whole day and the way my last relationships have gone, it makes me want to give up on women all together." Ty had said as they entered the cave.
"You know Ty..." Rhy started in a sly tone. "... maybe I can help you with that." He said as they made their way further towards the back of the cave.
"What are you taking about?" Asked Ty with a confused look on his face.
"Just keep following me and you'll see." Rhy said as they kept going.
This was when Ty noticed that this cave was awfully deep. A lot deeper than most caves were. They eventually came to a dead end where Ty decided to rest; they had been walking for nearly 10 minutes.
"Geez Rhy *pant pant* why is this cave so long?" Ty said through exhausted breaths.
"Because I made it that way with a lot of digging. Plus, I added this little secret room that only I know about." Rhy bragged as he pressed a secret stone. This caused the walls to make a bunch of noises. Eventually the wall that they came to started to shift and split apart. This revealed a large room lit up by some glowing rocks.
The also contained, to Ty's surprise crude drawings of Ty. Some of them with both Rhy and Ty. Ty wasn't sure how to react; all he could do was just stand there in awe as he looked at the glowing rocks and the different drawings. It was a few minutes before Rhy finally cleared his throat and began talking.
"For some time now, I've had these feelings for you. Feelings I figured would spoil our friendship if you ever found out about them. Especially since you already had a girlfriend. I'm probably wrong about this, but I figured that now would be good time to reveal these feeling to you, seeing as you could use some comforting and all. I can understand if you hate me for this but I just had to tell you. Otherwise I would never feel better about myself." Rhy continued going on though Ty was lost in thought.
He was surprised and shocked. He didn't know what to think. He thought of all the times that they hung out together. Ty always felt good whenever he was with Rhy. For some reason he knew it wasn't just because he was Ty's best friend but he couldn't figure it out why else. It haunted him in the back of his mind for a long time. Just now did he realize what the reason might be. He must be in love with Rhy. As he realized this, Rhy just finished talking.
"So I need to know how you feel. But if you want some time I can understand. I'd also understand if you didn't share the same feelings. Whatever your answer may be, I hope we can still be fri-mmph..." Rhy was interrupted as Ty had suddenly went and brought him into a deep kiss. As they finally pulled away from each other Ty noticed that Rhy was crying.
"What's the matter?" Ty asked.
"I'm just so happy that you share the same feelings. I feel so much closer to you than before." Rhy said as he embraced Ty.
*Author's comment* God! Is it me or does the dialogue really suck? Might as well get this over with already.
"I want you to mate me Ty." Rhy said as they moved towards the secret room, the doors closing behind. "But first, let me prep you." Rhy said as he sat Ty down and spread his legs revealing his crotch.
Rhy lowered his head between Ty's legs and started to stick his tongue inside the slit that concealed Ty's cock. As his tongue was probing around for it's prize, Rhy took his left hand and started to fondle Ty's balls. This brought a few moans from Ty as he relaxed his head back and enjoyed this treatment. His girlfriend had done the same thing to him on several occasions but she wasn't as good as Rhy. As he thought of this his cock had finally revealed itself and Rhy had started to wrap his mouth around it and bob his head up and down and had developed a steady rhythm which nearly drove Ty over the edge. Ty was lost in a world of ecstasy unlike which he had never been in.
Just as he was really getting into it Rhy had suddenly stopped. Ty was almost frustrated when he looked and saw that Rhy was turning around and presenting himself to Ty.
"Take me Ty. Make me complete." Rhy said in a sexy tone.
Ty got up and went over to Rhy, his erection bouncing slightly as he walked. He grabbed his dick and positioned it at Rhy's entrance then looked up at Rhy. Rhy gave him a nod and Ty began to slide his dick into Rhy. Both of them moaned a little as Ty slid his dick further and further into Rhy. Finally, Ty had his entire cock inside Rhy. He waited a few minutes and started to pull out. He stopped just as he was about to pull all the way out and started to go back in. He noticed that it was allot easier since some of hi pre cum had started to lube the anus. He eventually developed a steady rhythm and was pumping in and out of Rhy.
"YES! OH GOD YES! KEEP GOING TY!!! DON'T STOP!!!" Rhy hollered as Ty started to increase his speed and rhythm. Ty was eventually going as fast as he could and was once again lost in a world of ecstasy. They were both moaning as they kept up their rhythm and speed for what seemed like forever for them.
Rhy had eventually started backing up into Ty to increase the pleasure. Which caused both or them to moan with pleasure even louder. It had been nearly and hour before they both finally came. Ty filling up Rhy's insides with his cum and Rhy cumming allover the floor and his chest. Ty finally pulled out after catching his breath, got Rhy to roll over and started to clean the cum off of his chest. Ty enjoyed the taste of his new lover's cum. It had a sweet taste to it. Which he thought ironic compared to Rhy's tough appearance. After they had finished cleaning up they left the secret room. But no before Rhy drew a heart around one of the pictures with both of them in it.
As they stepped out of the room the doors closed behind them and they both found a place to lie down and sleep. But before they did Ty turned and asked, "By the way Rhy, how did you make those doors?" Rhy just looked at him, winked and said, "Thats my little secret." After which they both fell asleep hugging each other.
Meanwhile...
"I wonder what that roar was that we heard earlier today was." Ash said as him and his friends sat around the campfire.
"Who cares? Just go to sleep already." Misty complained as she got in her sleeping bag and went to sleep.
Ash decided to do the same and eventually fell asleep still wondering about the mysterious roaring.
Thats my first lemon. I hope you enjoyed it. And if you didn't, any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would be appreciated. Oh and by the way. Please don't take this story and claim it to be yours or anything. I have this story saved on a disk and could ,therefore, prove that the story is of my creation.
"Out of One Love and Into Another"
It was a bright and sunny day in the world of Pokemon. The Butterfree were fluttering around in a field of flowers. The Pidgey were all enjoying an afternoon flight around the forest. Magikarp were all splashing in a nearby lake. Ash and his group were walking along the path and enjoying the beautiful day. But this story isn't about them so their presence is somewhat pointless I suppose. Let's shift the scene to elsewhere.
Somewhere in a mountain range, a loud roar could be heard for a mile around. At a nearby cave, some pokemon who had heard the roar and came to inspect it found a Tyranitar running out of the cave with rocks flying past him. The Tyranitar and his girlfriend had just had a fight and the female started to use rock throw to drive him out of the cave. A few minutes later, the Tyranitar found himself wondering around the forest looking for a new home and tired from all the running. He eventually found a lake to rest by and to get a drink from.
He could still remember how the argument started. He had just found out from a friend that she had been cheating on him with another Tyranitar.
"How could you go behind by back you filthy whore!!!" He had yelled at her.
"You just can't handle the fact that he's a better provider and a better lover!!!" She countered.
"We could have talked about but no, YOU just decide to go and see someone else instead" He bellowed.
"Just shut up and get out!!! ROOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAR!!!" Was the last thing she shouted before she started using rock throw.
It was just then that he saw his friend Rhydon walk over and sit next to him. The Rhydon just sat there looking at the lake with the Tyranitar and admiring the view. It was a few minutes before either of them said anything.
"Hey Rhy." That was his nickname for the Rhydon.
"Howzit goin' Ty?" This was the Rhydon's nickname for the Tyranitar.
"I guess you heard all the commotion then." Ty finally said after a few minutes.
"Yeah, sorry about what happened between you and her. Makes me wish I had never told you about them." Rhy said. It was the Rhydon who had caught Ty's girlfriend cheating with another Tyranitar. He wasn't going to say anything at first but he felt that, as Ty's best childhood friend, it would be best if Ty knew before things got bad.
"I'm glad you did though. I don't know what would have happened if she had brought him around and decided to tell me there and then." Ty said, trying to comfort his friend.
After a few more minutes of looking at the lake and the sky they decided to head to Rhy's home. Rhy had offered to let Ty stay at his cave until he could find a new place to stay.
"Thanks Rhy, I would love to stay at your place. Thinking about this whole day and the way my last relationships have gone, it makes me want to give up on women all together." Ty had said as they entered the cave.
"You know Ty..." Rhy started in a sly tone. "... maybe I can help you with that." He said as they made their way further towards the back of the cave.
"What are you taking about?" Asked Ty with a confused look on his face.
"Just keep following me and you'll see." Rhy said as they kept going.
This was when Ty noticed that this cave was awfully deep. A lot deeper than most caves were. They eventually came to a dead end where Ty decided to rest; they had been walking for nearly 10 minutes.
"Geez Rhy *pant pant* why is this cave so long?" Ty said through exhausted breaths.
"Because I made it that way with a lot of digging. Plus, I added this little secret room that only I know about." Rhy bragged as he pressed a secret stone. This caused the walls to make a bunch of noises. Eventually the wall that they came to started to shift and split apart. This revealed a large room lit up by some glowing rocks.
The also contained, to Ty's surprise crude drawings of Ty. Some of them with both Rhy and Ty. Ty wasn't sure how to react; all he could do was just stand there in awe as he looked at the glowing rocks and the different drawings. It was a few minutes before Rhy finally cleared his throat and began talking.
"For some time now, I've had these feelings for you. Feelings I figured would spoil our friendship if you ever found out about them. Especially since you already had a girlfriend. I'm probably wrong about this, but I figured that now would be good time to reveal these feeling to you, seeing as you could use some comforting and all. I can understand if you hate me for this but I just had to tell you. Otherwise I would never feel better about myself." Rhy continued going on though Ty was lost in thought.
He was surprised and shocked. He didn't know what to think. He thought of all the times that they hung out together. Ty always felt good whenever he was with Rhy. For some reason he knew it wasn't just because he was Ty's best friend but he couldn't figure it out why else. It haunted him in the back of his mind for a long time. Just now did he realize what the reason might be. He must be in love with Rhy. As he realized this, Rhy just finished talking.
"So I need to know how you feel. But if you want some time I can understand. I'd also understand if you didn't share the same feelings. Whatever your answer may be, I hope we can still be fri-mmph..." Rhy was interrupted as Ty had suddenly went and brought him into a deep kiss. As they finally pulled away from each other Ty noticed that Rhy was crying.
"What's the matter?" Ty asked.
"I'm just so happy that you share the same feelings. I feel so much closer to you than before." Rhy said as he embraced Ty.
*Author's comment* God! Is it me or does the dialogue really suck? Might as well get this over with already.
"I want you to mate me Ty." Rhy said as they moved towards the secret room, the doors closing behind. "But first, let me prep you." Rhy said as he sat Ty down and spread his legs revealing his crotch.
Rhy lowered his head between Ty's legs and started to stick his tongue inside the slit that concealed Ty's cock. As his tongue was probing around for it's prize, Rhy took his left hand and started to fondle Ty's balls. This brought a few moans from Ty as he relaxed his head back and enjoyed this treatment. His girlfriend had done the same thing to him on several occasions but she wasn't as good as Rhy. As he thought of this his cock had finally revealed itself and Rhy had started to wrap his mouth around it and bob his head up and down and had developed a steady rhythm which nearly drove Ty over the edge. Ty was lost in a world of ecstasy unlike which he had never been in.
Just as he was really getting into it Rhy had suddenly stopped. Ty was almost frustrated when he looked and saw that Rhy was turning around and presenting himself to Ty.
"Take me Ty. Make me complete." Rhy said in a sexy tone.
Ty got up and went over to Rhy, his erection bouncing slightly as he walked. He grabbed his dick and positioned it at Rhy's entrance then looked up at Rhy. Rhy gave him a nod and Ty began to slide his dick into Rhy. Both of them moaned a little as Ty slid his dick further and further into Rhy. Finally, Ty had his entire cock inside Rhy. He waited a few minutes and started to pull out. He stopped just as he was about to pull all the way out and started to go back in. He noticed that it was allot easier since some of hi pre cum had started to lube the anus. He eventually developed a steady rhythm and was pumping in and out of Rhy.
"YES! OH GOD YES! KEEP GOING TY!!! DON'T STOP!!!" Rhy hollered as Ty started to increase his speed and rhythm. Ty was eventually going as fast as he could and was once again lost in a world of ecstasy. They were both moaning as they kept up their rhythm and speed for what seemed like forever for them.
Rhy had eventually started backing up into Ty to increase the pleasure. Which caused both or them to moan with pleasure even louder. It had been nearly and hour before they both finally came. Ty filling up Rhy's insides with his cum and Rhy cumming allover the floor and his chest. Ty finally pulled out after catching his breath, got Rhy to roll over and started to clean the cum off of his chest. Ty enjoyed the taste of his new lover's cum. It had a sweet taste to it. Which he thought ironic compared to Rhy's tough appearance. After they had finished cleaning up they left the secret room. But no before Rhy drew a heart around one of the pictures with both of them in it.
As they stepped out of the room the doors closed behind them and they both found a place to lie down and sleep. But before they did Ty turned and asked, "By the way Rhy, how did you make those doors?" Rhy just looked at him, winked and said, "Thats my little secret." After which they both fell asleep hugging each other.
Meanwhile...
"I wonder what that roar was that we heard earlier today was." Ash said as him and his friends sat around the campfire.
"Who cares? Just go to sleep already." Misty complained as she got in her sleeping bag and went to sleep.
Ash decided to do the same and eventually fell asleep still wondering about the mysterious roaring.
Thats my first lemon. I hope you enjoyed it. And if you didn't, any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism would be appreciated. Oh and by the way. Please don't take this story and claim it to be yours or anything. I have this story saved on a disk and could ,therefore, prove that the story is of my creation.
Date:Nov 11 2012 Chapter:Chp. 1
I found this enjoyable enough, the dialog was a little clunky but there were no errors or mistakes. I think if it was longer or maybe had a second chapter, I could feel it would deserve more points...
But as it stands I could give you a solid 6/10.
Good work, try to keep a high level of focus next time; helps bulk out the story rather than skipping to the "Good stuff"
All the best! -Fuzzy