AGNPH Stories

Summary:

A young boy left alone to live in a cabin deep within the woods struggle to live day by day as him and his old pet Eevee worry about what the future holds for them

  1. Chapter 1 (3509 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    Reviewer: zackarykidder
    Date:Jul 25 2017 Chapter:Chapter 1

    One problem there is missing a lot of character building I would love for this to become a full on series but we all know it would never happen everyone says they lose interest too quickly :( but I see It as an excuse to write other things eh that's just me

     

    Anyways great story but I'll have to give a 3/5 lack of development on story progress anyways 7/10 rating needs more build and it needs edge to it a little bit of violence ferality and skill in this make a 3 year later or something