A remote monastery offers refuge to a young man forced to flee all he knows. The strange pokémon residing there baffles and frustrates him, but he quickly learns there is more to her than meets the eye...
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A Semblance of Self (14665 words)
[Reviews: 2] Pokemon is (c) of Nintendo. No infringement is intended.
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Commander
Absolutely Amazing. Whoever wrote this is a master of the written word. ^w^
Author's Response:Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. ^^
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Helixion's Maker
Your way with words is a standard that I hope to match one day, and I found the plot flowed smoothly once I understood the era. The mystery, Ryo and the monks' backstory, the lead up to the sex, tand of course Akane in every way, came together to tell a delightful story. Exceptional effort!
Date:Apr 28 2019 Title:A Semblance of Self
I personally love surreal stuff, whether it's a dream squence, psychedelic drugs, or a zoroark with illusion level 100. I hope you enjoy writing surreal stuff as much as I do. And the theme of her being a predator by nature, that's one I also really like and have gone into great detail on. Every species is different, but predator species are a different kind of different. If they're any sort of proper predator imo, they should be at least somewhat exciting and terrifying to be friends with, you know, someone who keeps you on your toes, which Akane definitely is, so I just loved her.
Date:May 31 2019 Title:A Semblance of Self
Agreed! It's fun to write the dominant predator types, isn't it? Thanks for reading and commenting!