Story Notes:
I wrote this story after reading part of Felix's story Luca.I would like to thank him for inspiring me to write this story.I am sorry for amy similarities that may show up in the story.I would like to say that it did not mean to end up that way and would like to give Felix credit.
Chapter 1
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Two Months ago.
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A large boat floated onto the beach of a small island far off the coast of Canalave City.
A slim 6', brown haired teen wearing a white lab coat with a black shirt and a pair of blue jeans jumped off the side of a ship after making port at a small island and started off into the dark woods looking for some help for the load of trainers that where also on the boat back at the beach. The trees leaves and branches covered the sky making it nearly enough too seem as it was night.As he made his way deeper into the woods he started to hear faint whinning noise coming from deeper into the woods. He started off into a run to see what was making the noise and stumbled into a clearing where a creasent shaped pond lay in the center with still water and behind it was a Riolu with its leg stuck under the tree's root as if the tree grew to wrap around its leg. He ran over to the little Pokemon to see if he could help it. As he got to the tree the Riolu saw him coming and stopped its whining and looked at him with teary eyes. "Hey there,you need some help?", he asked as he got on his knees and helped the little Pokemon get its leg free and seeing that it was raw and bleeding. "I wish I had some potions on hand, but the closest Pokemart or nearest Pokemon Center is at Canalave City at the port... How do you fell about going with me for a trip?" The Riolu limped over to him and rubbed her head against his leg. "Well I will take that as a yes." He picked her up and carried her back to the ship just in time as the ship was just starting up after being repaired, and he climbed aboard and went inside and sat down and talked to her for the last hour of the trip.
As they got to port it was already dark and it stared to rian down hard, he took her straight to the Pokemon Center running in dripping wet to the counter tried to explain what happened, then asked Joy to take a look at her. After a half hour Joy came out with the sleeping Riolu in her arms and set her down beside the teen.
"Its a good thing you brought her in when you did. She must have been stuck for at least a week, she would have starved if you had not found her, but her leg is ok and should heal in a day.",Joys said.
"I take it you are gonna keep her as your own?"
"I never thought of that"
"Well she seemed to have taken to you when you walked into the door"
"Well I think it wouldn't hurt", he said as he picked the Pokemon up into his arms, thanked Joy and walked out.
The teen walked out and with the sleeping Riolu in his arms and made the trip to Jubilife City and walk into his apartment and laid the sleeping Pokemon on the bed. "
I think I will name you Kari.", he said as he laid down on the bed and dosed off. A week went by and the Riolu grew to like her new trainer, she learned how to speak English after a few day and caught her trainer by surprise. The teen went to Sandgem Town at the end of the week to get his starter Pokemon with his Pokedex. The trip only too one hour and the road was lined with trees and woods on both sides. As he got into town he saw a lagre white building with Big glass windows with Pokemon Lab on the side of it.
When he walked inside he was guided to Professor Rowan by one of his helpers. After talking for awhile we about his study s he turned and asked about the little shy Riolu hiding behind the teens right leg. Jren explained what had happen, and Pro. Rowan told him he could not get the normal starter Pokemon, due to already have his first Pokemon, yet could get a normal Pokemon with his Pokedex.
The teen choose a young Ralts. After talking more about what he will and might encounter on his journey the professor wished him luck and asked him to check in about anything he might want to know about, on the way out he picked up his new pokedex and made his way back home to get his bag. Along they stopped off for a rest and Jren let Ralts out of her ball to play with Kari.
The two Pokemon got along and where soon friends. They started back onto the road after 30 minutes. When they got back to his room he grabbed the bag he had set out the night before with all of his stuff in it, on the way out of town he picked Kari up and set him on his shoulders and they started off down the dirt road.
Two months past and the Riolu grew more attached to her trainer,and the Ralts he got from the lab evolved into a Kirlia.
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Chapter 1: A Long Journey Ahead
"Kari use Force Palm" I yelled to Kari as she scramble to her feet after dodging a Shadow Ball from the trainer's Umbreon. She dashed in with the attack charged in her hand and nailed the Umbreon in the face, as it fell to it's side it let loose a Psychic attack hitting Kari at point blank.
Kari fell to the ground and weakly got to her feet as her Focus Sash burnt and fell to the ground. "Quick, use Reversal before it can get up!", I yelled as she charged the attack and forcused it into her right paw and hit the Umbreon in the side, as it was getting its bearings.
The Umbreon pasted out and the trainer called it back into it's Pokeball. I ran out onto the field picking up Kari and spun around telling her how great she did.
I set her down as the trainer walked up to me.
"Wow, you have a great Roilu there.", the trainer contuned. 'Wanna trade for one of my Pokemon?"
"Sorry Kari has been with me since the start and I am not letting go of her."
"Well I can understand that", he said as he handed over the prize money and walk off.
"Jren I am sorry.", Kari said as she looked up at me.
"Why is that?", I asked as I sat so I would be at eye level with her.
"The sash you gave me burnt up in the battle."
"Well, thats silly, its meant to do that so if you ever came close to fainting from taking a hard hit you would be able to use Reversal and end the battle before that can happen, and if you could not make the hit I would give up before you got hurt."
"I know, but I have had that thing since you gave it to me and it sorta grew on me"
"Well I will see if I can find you anew one in the next town, hoe about that?"
"That sounds great!"
My name is Jren and unlike other trainer I waited till I was 15 years of age to start my Pokemon journey, so I could go to Saffron Tech and learn some base skill so if Pokemon training didn't work out for me I would have something to fall back on, so I studied in tech learning programming and make circuit boards. When I started my quest I had moved to Jublife City one week before I left for Sandgem Town to get my starter Pokemon and start out on my quest, but before I could make it to Jublife the boat I was traveling on with some trainers broke down by Full moon Island and we stop there while waiting for the coast guard to get there and help us out, and that is where my story began and now I am on my way with my two Pokemon to see the world.
We spent a month in Oreburgh City training before we took on the gym leader, since his type was rock we took him down fast with Riolu's Force Palm. After that we started to make our way to Eterna City, only stopping in Floaroma Town to stock up on berries and supplies.
We where somewhere in the middle of the Enterna Forest when Kari turned to talk to me.
"Jren I think its gonna rain", she said as she was walking beside Jren.
"The trees are so think above us I can't see the sky."
"What made you think is gonna rain?"
"My ears are twitching so its gonna rain"
"Well I will believe it when I see it", just as Jren said tht a clap of thunder rang all in the forest.
"Ok, I believe it now!", Jren yelled as he picked up Kari and ran to look for cover.
As they ran deeper into the forest they came across a old ran down building with broken window and a faded brown paint on the out side.There was a sign out at the gate and the writing on it was fade, yet he made out the words "O-d Ch-te-u". Just as he got done the rain started to come down hard and he ran up and saw the door was open and ran in with Kari in his arms.
"I don't like this place Kari.", said Kari.
"Well its the only place I could find and besides its getting bad out there"
"I don't know its just this place gives me the creeps."
They walked in dodging a few cobwebs that fell when they entered. The house had a slightly dim lighting with pale green wall and spiders web all over the place. As they started in JRan shivered as the temperature got colder the more he went into the house. As they headed upstairs one of the steps gave away and he almost fell got his leg caught into the hole.
As they looked around they found a room down at the end of the hall with a bed and a desk covered in dust. Jren walked in and set his bag down, pulled out his sleeping bag and spread it over the bed. "Oh, by the way Kari I got you a gift at the last town", he said as pulled out a silky black belt and tied it around Kari's waist. Her eyes started to tear and she jumped up and hugged Jren's neck, thanking him for the gift.
"Oh, its the best gift ever!"She said as she hopped down. "Thanks you so much!"
"Its not problem for my Kari, I think you look great with it."
Jren flopped onto the bed and laid on his back and start to dose off, and Kari crawled up and laid beside Jran and fell asleep.
A loud static noise banged all in the old house. "What the heck!", Jren yelled as he jerked up from his sleep looking around the old dark room. The dim lighting was gone and it was almost completely dark if not for the light from the moon from outside the window. The sound started again followed by the sounds of the wall breaking. Jran got up leaving Kari sound asleep on the bed to look out the door to see what was going on. He slowly peaked around the corner to see three men dressed in black and dark red matching uniform, except one was wearing a silver badge on the side of his arm down at the end of the hall way. The men where battling a single Pokemon with a three Baltoys. The blue and orange Pokemon they where fighting was letting out a static noise that was splitting Jren's head open. He quickly ran over to Kari and woke her up."Come on Kari we need to get out of here!"
As she started to wait up the static got worse and Kari's eyes jerked open and she let out a cry as she held her ears to deafen the sound. "What was that cry?", one of the men asked. "You number 178 go see what that noise was!", the man with the badge on his shoulder said as he pointed down the hall and turned his attention back to the orange and blue Pokemon laying on the floor shivering in pain. The man started checking the rooms as he walked down the hall and was just three rooms away from Jren and Kari.
Jren swung his bag around his arms and wrapped Kari in the sleeping back and open the window.
"What are we doing?", Kari asked with a scared look on he face with a tear in her eye.
"We are getting out of here", I said as I jumped out the window falling to the bushes one story below, landing on the side of my right foot. I flinched as a pain shoot swelled up in me.
I looked over to see if Kari was ok as I held her in my arms still wrapped in the sleeping bag, she had passed out from being scared of the fall. The grunt made it to the room right after we made it out the window. "There's nothing down here, it must have been a trick from the Rotom", He yelled back to the other men as he started back down the hall and helped them get the KO'ed Rotom into a black capture unit. I looked up as I heard the grunt talk and then every thing went black as I passed out.
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Ok I am at a stopping point for the story now. I am in need of a name of the evil team that is attacking the Rotom. If you have any ideas (must have Team in the name)
e-mail them to [email protected] and if I like the team your team name will be used in the story.(aka like Team Rocket or Team Darkri) Sorry about my English, I was never good at it even if I made A's and B's in school. If you notice a mistake in the story please point them out and comments are welcomed even if they are negitive.
I have fixed some of the grammar errors and made the story more detailed.
Two Months ago.
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A large boat floated onto the beach of a small island far off the coast of Canalave City.
A slim 6', brown haired teen wearing a white lab coat with a black shirt and a pair of blue jeans jumped off the side of a ship after making port at a small island and started off into the dark woods looking for some help for the load of trainers that where also on the boat back at the beach. The trees leaves and branches covered the sky making it nearly enough too seem as it was night.As he made his way deeper into the woods he started to hear faint whinning noise coming from deeper into the woods. He started off into a run to see what was making the noise and stumbled into a clearing where a creasent shaped pond lay in the center with still water and behind it was a Riolu with its leg stuck under the tree's root as if the tree grew to wrap around its leg. He ran over to the little Pokemon to see if he could help it. As he got to the tree the Riolu saw him coming and stopped its whining and looked at him with teary eyes. "Hey there,you need some help?", he asked as he got on his knees and helped the little Pokemon get its leg free and seeing that it was raw and bleeding. "I wish I had some potions on hand, but the closest Pokemart or nearest Pokemon Center is at Canalave City at the port... How do you fell about going with me for a trip?" The Riolu limped over to him and rubbed her head against his leg. "Well I will take that as a yes." He picked her up and carried her back to the ship just in time as the ship was just starting up after being repaired, and he climbed aboard and went inside and sat down and talked to her for the last hour of the trip.
As they got to port it was already dark and it stared to rian down hard, he took her straight to the Pokemon Center running in dripping wet to the counter tried to explain what happened, then asked Joy to take a look at her. After a half hour Joy came out with the sleeping Riolu in her arms and set her down beside the teen.
"Its a good thing you brought her in when you did. She must have been stuck for at least a week, she would have starved if you had not found her, but her leg is ok and should heal in a day.",Joys said.
"I take it you are gonna keep her as your own?"
"I never thought of that"
"Well she seemed to have taken to you when you walked into the door"
"Well I think it wouldn't hurt", he said as he picked the Pokemon up into his arms, thanked Joy and walked out.
The teen walked out and with the sleeping Riolu in his arms and made the trip to Jubilife City and walk into his apartment and laid the sleeping Pokemon on the bed. "
I think I will name you Kari.", he said as he laid down on the bed and dosed off. A week went by and the Riolu grew to like her new trainer, she learned how to speak English after a few day and caught her trainer by surprise. The teen went to Sandgem Town at the end of the week to get his starter Pokemon with his Pokedex. The trip only too one hour and the road was lined with trees and woods on both sides. As he got into town he saw a lagre white building with Big glass windows with Pokemon Lab on the side of it.
When he walked inside he was guided to Professor Rowan by one of his helpers. After talking for awhile we about his study s he turned and asked about the little shy Riolu hiding behind the teens right leg. Jren explained what had happen, and Pro. Rowan told him he could not get the normal starter Pokemon, due to already have his first Pokemon, yet could get a normal Pokemon with his Pokedex.
The teen choose a young Ralts. After talking more about what he will and might encounter on his journey the professor wished him luck and asked him to check in about anything he might want to know about, on the way out he picked up his new pokedex and made his way back home to get his bag. Along they stopped off for a rest and Jren let Ralts out of her ball to play with Kari.
The two Pokemon got along and where soon friends. They started back onto the road after 30 minutes. When they got back to his room he grabbed the bag he had set out the night before with all of his stuff in it, on the way out of town he picked Kari up and set him on his shoulders and they started off down the dirt road.
Two months past and the Riolu grew more attached to her trainer,and the Ralts he got from the lab evolved into a Kirlia.
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Chapter 1: A Long Journey Ahead
"Kari use Force Palm" I yelled to Kari as she scramble to her feet after dodging a Shadow Ball from the trainer's Umbreon. She dashed in with the attack charged in her hand and nailed the Umbreon in the face, as it fell to it's side it let loose a Psychic attack hitting Kari at point blank.
Kari fell to the ground and weakly got to her feet as her Focus Sash burnt and fell to the ground. "Quick, use Reversal before it can get up!", I yelled as she charged the attack and forcused it into her right paw and hit the Umbreon in the side, as it was getting its bearings.
The Umbreon pasted out and the trainer called it back into it's Pokeball. I ran out onto the field picking up Kari and spun around telling her how great she did.
I set her down as the trainer walked up to me.
"Wow, you have a great Roilu there.", the trainer contuned. 'Wanna trade for one of my Pokemon?"
"Sorry Kari has been with me since the start and I am not letting go of her."
"Well I can understand that", he said as he handed over the prize money and walk off.
"Jren I am sorry.", Kari said as she looked up at me.
"Why is that?", I asked as I sat so I would be at eye level with her.
"The sash you gave me burnt up in the battle."
"Well, thats silly, its meant to do that so if you ever came close to fainting from taking a hard hit you would be able to use Reversal and end the battle before that can happen, and if you could not make the hit I would give up before you got hurt."
"I know, but I have had that thing since you gave it to me and it sorta grew on me"
"Well I will see if I can find you anew one in the next town, hoe about that?"
"That sounds great!"
My name is Jren and unlike other trainer I waited till I was 15 years of age to start my Pokemon journey, so I could go to Saffron Tech and learn some base skill so if Pokemon training didn't work out for me I would have something to fall back on, so I studied in tech learning programming and make circuit boards. When I started my quest I had moved to Jublife City one week before I left for Sandgem Town to get my starter Pokemon and start out on my quest, but before I could make it to Jublife the boat I was traveling on with some trainers broke down by Full moon Island and we stop there while waiting for the coast guard to get there and help us out, and that is where my story began and now I am on my way with my two Pokemon to see the world.
We spent a month in Oreburgh City training before we took on the gym leader, since his type was rock we took him down fast with Riolu's Force Palm. After that we started to make our way to Eterna City, only stopping in Floaroma Town to stock up on berries and supplies.
We where somewhere in the middle of the Enterna Forest when Kari turned to talk to me.
"Jren I think its gonna rain", she said as she was walking beside Jren.
"The trees are so think above us I can't see the sky."
"What made you think is gonna rain?"
"My ears are twitching so its gonna rain"
"Well I will believe it when I see it", just as Jren said tht a clap of thunder rang all in the forest.
"Ok, I believe it now!", Jren yelled as he picked up Kari and ran to look for cover.
As they ran deeper into the forest they came across a old ran down building with broken window and a faded brown paint on the out side.There was a sign out at the gate and the writing on it was fade, yet he made out the words "O-d Ch-te-u". Just as he got done the rain started to come down hard and he ran up and saw the door was open and ran in with Kari in his arms.
"I don't like this place Kari.", said Kari.
"Well its the only place I could find and besides its getting bad out there"
"I don't know its just this place gives me the creeps."
They walked in dodging a few cobwebs that fell when they entered. The house had a slightly dim lighting with pale green wall and spiders web all over the place. As they started in JRan shivered as the temperature got colder the more he went into the house. As they headed upstairs one of the steps gave away and he almost fell got his leg caught into the hole.
As they looked around they found a room down at the end of the hall with a bed and a desk covered in dust. Jren walked in and set his bag down, pulled out his sleeping bag and spread it over the bed. "Oh, by the way Kari I got you a gift at the last town", he said as pulled out a silky black belt and tied it around Kari's waist. Her eyes started to tear and she jumped up and hugged Jren's neck, thanking him for the gift.
"Oh, its the best gift ever!"She said as she hopped down. "Thanks you so much!"
"Its not problem for my Kari, I think you look great with it."
Jren flopped onto the bed and laid on his back and start to dose off, and Kari crawled up and laid beside Jran and fell asleep.
A loud static noise banged all in the old house. "What the heck!", Jren yelled as he jerked up from his sleep looking around the old dark room. The dim lighting was gone and it was almost completely dark if not for the light from the moon from outside the window. The sound started again followed by the sounds of the wall breaking. Jran got up leaving Kari sound asleep on the bed to look out the door to see what was going on. He slowly peaked around the corner to see three men dressed in black and dark red matching uniform, except one was wearing a silver badge on the side of his arm down at the end of the hall way. The men where battling a single Pokemon with a three Baltoys. The blue and orange Pokemon they where fighting was letting out a static noise that was splitting Jren's head open. He quickly ran over to Kari and woke her up."Come on Kari we need to get out of here!"
As she started to wait up the static got worse and Kari's eyes jerked open and she let out a cry as she held her ears to deafen the sound. "What was that cry?", one of the men asked. "You number 178 go see what that noise was!", the man with the badge on his shoulder said as he pointed down the hall and turned his attention back to the orange and blue Pokemon laying on the floor shivering in pain. The man started checking the rooms as he walked down the hall and was just three rooms away from Jren and Kari.
Jren swung his bag around his arms and wrapped Kari in the sleeping back and open the window.
"What are we doing?", Kari asked with a scared look on he face with a tear in her eye.
"We are getting out of here", I said as I jumped out the window falling to the bushes one story below, landing on the side of my right foot. I flinched as a pain shoot swelled up in me.
I looked over to see if Kari was ok as I held her in my arms still wrapped in the sleeping bag, she had passed out from being scared of the fall. The grunt made it to the room right after we made it out the window. "There's nothing down here, it must have been a trick from the Rotom", He yelled back to the other men as he started back down the hall and helped them get the KO'ed Rotom into a black capture unit. I looked up as I heard the grunt talk and then every thing went black as I passed out.
--------------------------------------MY NOTES-------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ok I am at a stopping point for the story now. I am in need of a name of the evil team that is attacking the Rotom. If you have any ideas (must have Team in the name)
e-mail them to [email protected] and if I like the team your team name will be used in the story.(aka like Team Rocket or Team Darkri) Sorry about my English, I was never good at it even if I made A's and B's in school. If you notice a mistake in the story please point them out and comments are welcomed even if they are negitive.
I have fixed some of the grammar errors and made the story more detailed.