Story Notes:
Well, this is my first story I want to try to post here. Most people say be nice on their first post, but not here! Be as harsh as possible, yet still constructive please. I hate the story myself, but I want to see what others think. I think the story is too short, repetitive, and doesn't flow very well. I may just be over picky... No real characterization, as this is just me and my mate.
Chapter 1
The sun was starting to go down now, the sky a dark blue on one side and an orangish crimson on the other. It was a calm, cool night with little to no wind at all. The mountain forest around us was quiet and still. The mountains around us were a dark, misty silhouette against what little light there was.
The only sound that could be heard was from us, my Typhlosion Daisy and I, walking along a close cut forest path. We had been walking to Blackthorn City, leaving from Mahogany Town that afternoon. We had beaten the gym leader there and were headed to the last and final gym.
It was dark, so we decided to stop for the night and picked a nice clearing in the path. Daisy nuzzled me as I unpacked my bag, taking out the blanket the two of us slept on at night and rolling it out on the ground. Daisy went out to collect firewood for cooking and warmth. She came back with a couple logs, with some twigs and branches for starting it. I got out the tender box and sparked a fire on the twigs, laying them on the logs as to catch them too.
So I got out a little foldable metal pot stand I kept with me, setting it up over the fire and placing a hanging pot on it. I also pulled out a can of beans for myself and a canteen of water. I poured some of the water in the pot to boil. I handed Daisy a can of Pokemon food. She only ate that stuff when we were on the road. When the water began to boil, I poured the can of beans in the water, letting them cook.
As I waited for the beans to cook, I pulled out Daisy and I's blanket. We snuggled close together and I wrapped it around us. She helped keep me warm, for it got really cold at night on our journeys. I always liked to snuggle with her, I laid my head in her neck like a pillow, and she would usually lick me in the forehead. I embraced her, trying not to fall asleep in her warmth. So we lay there, snuggling close to each other and enjoying the company and watching the fire flicker.
When the beans were done, I pulled out a small bowl and a spoon from my bag, and started eating. I didn't really like beans, but they were good travel food. I finished up and sat the dishes over for the morning. I crawled back over by Daisy, snuggling my head into her neck. We were embracing as she licked me on the cheek. She had a rough tongue so it tickled a bit, so I laughed in response. She smiled and licked me again.
"How would you like it if I licked you back, eh?" I said playfully, licking her on the cheek. She licked my back yet again, smiling still. That went on for a little while before I just leaned into her and hugged her lovingly.
All of a sudden, something weird happened... I opened my eyes and looked at her, and I blushed, hiding my face back in her neck. I was a bit surprised as to why I blushed. I mean, it's not like I could have possibly felt embarrassed for some reason...
I shrugged it off, wrapping my arms around Daisy and rubbing the vents on her neck. They were really sensitive, so she flinched a bit from it, but started to growl in her throat: the Typhlosion equivalent to purring. She liked it when I did that. I looked up again, but this time her eye caught mine. I could feel myself go beet red, she seemed to notice and head tilted. She looked at me funny, like I did something strange.
I felt weird now inside, like a tingly feeling in my chest. I reached up and stroked her smooth ears with one of my hands, sub consciously gazing into her eyes now. Speaking of her eyes, they weren't normal red, but instead were sort of a deep blue. I had noticed it before, but now it seemed so... nice.
She closed her eyes and rubbed her chin against my cheek, I leaned into it, wondering through my mind what was happening. I had a thought but it quickly crossed out of my mind. At first I thought that I actually might be feeling love for her, not just friendship, but deeper. I just ignored it and tried to focus on the hug.
I just couldn't force myself to keep it out of my head, it was like it was going to come out whether I wanted it to or not. So I quit ignoring it, wondering whether it really was love I was feeling right now. It didn't feel right, for Pokemon and people weren't to be like that, but on the other hand it seemed right, just me and her, alone together, happy.
I looked at her again, looking for some hint of whether she was feeling the same thing. I didn't have to look hard, for she never really was one for hiding her feelings. I looked her in the eye, she looked straight back.
"Daisy..." I muttered simply. She head tilted, wondering why I seemed to be acting strange.
"Daisy... You do love me, as a friend, right?" I asked, almost stuttering.
"Baka" She answered nodding. I could feel myself getting redder all the time. "What about any more than that?" She looked at me curiously, wondering where I was going with this.
I buried my face in her chest in embarrassment. She nuzzled me, obviously confused as to what to do. I was completely lost, having no idea as to what to do. I wanted to give in to it... but I didn't know what to think. People and Pokemon were not supposed to be together like that, but I just couldn't help it. I looked up again, trying to look her straight in the eye.
"D-Daisy... I-I... I think I may..." I traced off, taking a breath and trying to build confidence. "Daisy, I think I... l-love... you..." I wanted to explode, but I just buried my face back in her chest. She was confused. Apparently she didn't get what I was trying to say. I lifted my head up and tried again "I think I love you, Daisy, like, love, love... I don't know what to say..." I stopped myself from going back into her fur, looking at her still.
She simply leaned over and licked me again. I smiled and nuzzled her, guessing that she was just fine with it. I embraced her, taking notice to how cold it was getting outside. I wrapped us both in the blanket, snuggling together for warmth. I didn't say anything for a long while. I was going over in my head what had just happened. It obviously wasn't such a big thing for her, considering she didn't seem surprised at all. I was starting to wish I could be more like her, just going with it and not be embarrassed to say it.
She had her eyes closed, so I guessed she had drifted off to sleep. I lay there, looking between the fire and Daisy's face. She seemed so peaceful, happily sleeping, dreaming about who knows what. So I closed my eyes and did my best to fall asleep, which was actually pretty easy once I closed my eyes and snuggled into Daisy's warm chest.
The next morning I woke, fully rested. The sun was starting to peek out from behind the morning clouds. Daisy was still asleep with me, so I eased out of the grip she had me in, and proceeded to put out the embers that remained of the fire. I had gone out for a bit, getting some water from a nearby stream. When I got back, she was still sound asleep. I figured I'd let her sleep in. So I sat there for a while and took in the mountain air.
When she finally woke up, she lazily sat up, rubbing her eyes and trying to comprehend what was happening, as most people do when they first wake up. I smiled to her, walking over and hugging her, helping her up and offered that they go to the stream to freshen up. So we both walked a little ways to a small, secluded stream I had found. I took my clothes off. I always did this, and Daisy always bathed with me, but when I did it this time, I could feel myself going red again, especially since Daisy was watching me, wondering why I was hesitating. I quickly jumped in, because I felt the last thing I wanted right now, I was starting to get an erection!
She didn't notice, and jumped in with me. She was not afraid of the water, like some fire types. She could also swim very well. I had laid some stuff over to the side of the stream, so I wadded over. I dunked my head underwater for a second, wetting my hair, then squirted some shampoo in my hand and spreading it in my hair. I washed it out, before Daisy swam over. I reached over for her shampoo, which was for her slightly coarse fur. She dunked under as I did. I squirted some of her shampoo in my hands, rubbing it on her back. She murred and was rubbing her back against my hands. I also spread it on her head and around her ears.
When she turned around for me to do her front, I spread it on her neck, moving down her chest before I felt what I was sure was her breasts. I looked down, rubbing her clean all over. She also lifted her legs so I could do those. I got really nervous when I was rubbing the inside of her legs, being really close to her region. When she was lathered up, she dunked under for a few seconds, coming back up and smiling. I wadded over and hugged her, but realized that my erection hadn't gone done! She felt something poking her and looked down. I quickly realized what I had done and jumped as quickly as I possibly could out of the stream and wrapped up in a towel, sitting with my legs in front of me.
She didn't have enough time to realize what happened, so she just looked at me funny and crawled out, shaking herself before insta-drying herself, which she did by super heating her body. It was cool because all the water on her just all of a sudden turned to steam. I quickly crawled over to my bag, putting my underwear on facing away from Daisy.
After we had both had camp packed up, we set out again for Blackthorn City. We had hoped to make it to the entrance to Ice Cave by the end of that day, which they would have to go through the next day, which would take a day. Then Blackthorn was about an hour's walk from the cave exit.
It was mountain passes and valleys all the way to Blackthorn. Neither of us had any problem with it. We both loved the mountains. The view was beautiful from the route we were taking. We were heading down a small path leading down the side of a mountain, overlooking a huge, pine-filled valley with a beautiful lake in the middle. Everywhere you looked was snow capped mountains that reached out into the sky, as if testing just how high they could go.
The day itself was beautiful. It was cloudy, which meant the mountains were misty from afar with mist, which made them seem ominous, and mysterious, but also made it seem relaxing at the same time. We had both preferred cloudy days to sunny ones.
After walking for a while, we came to an indention in the mountain. We stopped to take a break from hiking. I pulled out a couple of bottles of water, giving her one and I drank the other. We sat on a rock and admired the gorgeous view. Being there with Daisy made it seem almost dream-like. Her being there made everything seem perfect. I leaned into her, putting my arm around her and smiling. She growled in her throat, indicating that she was happy, as was I.
We continued back on the trail. We had a long ways to go still before we made it to Blackthorn city.
After a while, it became dark again, the sun going down. You could see the sunset for the clouds had cleared up that afternoon. The sky just seemed to fade from black into purple, into red, into orange, and finally into a glowing gold. I couldn't help but be distracted a little bit while walking, for I tripped over a rock and almost went tumbling down the mountainside.
We were now down in a valley, so I thought we could set up camp in an opening we saw. We followed the normal routine of me setting up camp and her going to get firewood. We both huddled by the fire, cuddling together. I wasn't so nearly as nervous as I was the night before. I actually seemed a lot happier. I leaned into Daisy's shoulder, and she leaned back, balancing us out. We both then lay back on our backs, looking up at the big, full moon they had that night.
I looked over at her and nuzzled her, she looked back at me. I stared into her eyes, a wave of warmth washing over me. I leaned in, and nuzzled her cheek, before giving her a kiss on the lips and hugging her. She seemed a little surprised from the kiss, but didn't seem to mind too much. I finally had built up the courage to say what I had wanted to say to her since the night before.
"Daisy... I wanted to say this to you clearly. I stumbled through my words last night, confused as to what I was actually saying, but I thought on it today. Daisy, I love you. More than just a friend, but as my best friend, my partner..." I paused for a second, getting ready for what I was about to say, "My mate..."
I think she finally realized why I had been acting so weird lately, for she wrapped her arms around me and hugged me. I gladly did the same right back, rubbing her back. I broke the hug, looking at her again. This time when I leaned in, I didn't hold back, I planted my lips against the smooth fur on her maw. I closed my eyes, savoring the moment. She didn't retreat; in fact, she put her paws on my shoulders and pushed back. I was so glad to see that she loved me back. I was scared that she might think me weird and ignore me, but it was the complete opposite.
We lay there for what seemed an eternity, lips locked in a passionate kiss, enjoying the feel of the others lips and the touch of the others hands/paws on their body. I had my hands on her side, rubbing gently. When the kiss broke, we embraced again, and then another thought ran through my head. I didn't want to hold back now, that we were together, but I hesitated for a moment on this one, for this was farther up than I originally planned on going.
I spoke up "Daisy, I have a question to ask you..." She looked at me, waiting. "I know it is kind of sudden, but would you be my mate?" she didn't hesitate though, for she licked me on the lips and hugged me. I was overjoyed that she really did love me. I was really afraid at first that she wouldn't, but now that those bridges had been crossed, we didn't have to worry about anymore hesitation between us, for we both had formed a strong bond together.
I nuzzled her neck affectionately, rubbing lower, until I came again to her chest. Once again, I felt the lumps, I didn't realize what I was doing until I hear `d a soft mur come from Daisy. I noticed that my head had rubbed against one of her nipples, which she seemed to enjoy. I looked up at her, then back down to her chest, nuzzling her breast with my nose, looking up again. She looked down, a look of pleasure on her face.
I stroked the fur on her chest with my hand, before starting to rub on her breast, pushing and massaging it lightly. She was really enjoying this, so I took it a step further still, licking at her nipple through her fur. She shivered at this, so I took her whole nipple in my mouth, sucking lightly and flicking at it lightly with my tongue. She started to rub my back with her paw, so I took my other hand and played with her other breast while still suckling on the one.
Feeling adventurous, I started to lick her breast, and started moving lower, down to her belly, with both hands on her breasts and my mouth occupied by licking and suckling her belly. She was on her back now, arching her back away from me at the treatment. I started to move further down still, seeing if she were to protest what I was planning. I was looking up at her the entire time, waiting for a no, but it never came, so my tongue had accidentally licked over her pussy lips because I wasn't paying attention. She squeaked, not expecting this, but obviously not protesting. I was surprised too, looking down and blushing as I saw her pink slit.
I nudged it with my nose, hearing a moan of consent from Daisy; I licked over it again, running my tongue from bottom to top. I noticed she seemed to twitch when my tongue ran over a small piece of skin at the top of her slit. So I licked it, a shiver running down her body as her body twitched without her consent. Guessing that was a good thing, I licked it again, and again, getting the same response every time.
Gaining a bit of courage, I brought my hands, which were still rubbing her breasts, down, taking one side of her pussy lips with one finger and opening it, a very strong, sweet aroma emitting from it. I carefully eased my tongue in, it being greeted by a wondrous tasting flavor. I couldn't quite tell what it was, but I liked it! I eagerly snuck the rest of my tongue in, penetrating her virgin lips. The smell was very overpowering, as if urging me to go deeper, which I gladly did. I was licking all the inside walls of her vagina, the liquid leaking from deep inside her. My tongue was thirsty for more, so I moved it all around inside her, licking at every inch it could reach.
This obviously being her first time, she orgasmed pretty quickly. She let out a yelp, her body tensing up and her vagina clenching down on my tongue, before a stream of the delicious liquid came out, covering my mouth as I tried to lap it all up. She was panting very heavy, her body not moving. I was still digging around inside her, getting all of the liquid I could out before licking it off the outside and off my lips.
I crawled up her body after making sure she was completely clean. She was still breathing quickly, panting as her chest rose and fell. I hugged her neck. I felt so good for being able to being her pleasure like that. It made me feel needed, loved.
"Did you enjoy it?" I asked, obviously knowing the answer "Ba... Baka..." She panted, hugging me very tightly. "I'm glad." I said, nuzzling her as she was caught up in the afterglow of her first orgasm. I laid there right beside her, nuzzling her shoulders as she continued to recover.
I got a little nervous now, knowing what was to happen next. "So, Daisy... Well, do you want to... you know..." I swallowed "Will you, mate with me?" I asked, trying not to sound so nervous. She was still breathing pretty heavy, but was alert "Baka..." She said, nodding and holding me tighter. I hugged her back, smiling. I then reached down for my jeans, and unbuttoned, then unzipped them. Slowly I pulled both my jeans and underwear down to my ankle, using my left hand to slowly fondle with myself, still hugging Daisy.
She caught her breath and sat up, noticing me rubbing myself. I could have sworn I saw her blushing under her fur, she looked down and stared. I started blushing myself, looking out over her shoulder. She then did something I really wasn't expecting; she reached out her paw, and started to rub my member. I jumped, looking at what had touched me besides my own hand; my face turning beat red. I let her take my member in her paw as she started to stroke slowly. I started to grunt, her soft paws feeling wondrously good on my sensitive skin.
Now, I had masturbated before, but it wasn't an everything day thing, so I was just as sensitive as she was. I was leaking pre, the sound of her paw going up making a sort of squishing noise. Her paw was damp with my pre. I felt a tingling building up, so I reached down and pulled Daisy's paw away, indicating that I was ready to go on.
What I did next probably wasn't the smartest thing in the world. Now, mind you I'm no expert on the female anatomy, so I had no idea what would happen when I were to dig right into her. So I had crawled on top of her, straddling her with the tip of my member hovering right at the lips of her vagina. I steadied myself, readying to plunge in.
"Are you ready, Daisy?" I asked, a bit nervous. "Baka." She replied, nodding at me. I nodded back, took a breath then eased the head of my penis in, grunting a little from the feeling. She pinched her lips, closing her eyes and readying for me to go all the way in.
I took another breath, before slowly easing the rest in, before I felt some skin like barrier blocking me. I didn't know what it was, so I pushed against it; a mistake. I had broken the bit of skin, which caused Daisy to wail out in pain. I quickly pulled out and looked to see what happened. I had blood on the tip of my penis. I hugged Daisy, stroking her ears comfortingly "Daisy, I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to hurt you in anyway, I'm so sorry!" I babbled on, but after a few seconds, she licked my face and grabbed around for my penis, pulling it towards her slit again.
"Wh-what? No, I don't want to hurt you again!" I cried, but she continued to pull. "Are you sure?" I asked, really not wanting to hurt her in any way. She nodded and tried to pull me further. "If you're certain..." I sighed. I did the same as before, steadying myself outside her lips, before slowly pushing in again. This time I very cautiously eased in, making sure I didn't run into anything else. When I was all the way in with no resistance, I stayed there for a while. She was so warm inside, it was extraordinary! I could feel some of the liquid she had leaked that my tongue could not reach. After taking in the moment, I eased out, clenching my teeth as I went.
When I had reached almost out, I slowly started in again, not hesitating so much now that I had reassurance that I wasn't going to hit anything that might hurt Daisy. Daisy had her eyes closed with her paws digging into the ground. I got back all the way in, so I started to pick up the pace until I was to a point where I could be considered humping her now. The pleasure was immense, every little inch going in and coming out felt wondrous all down my shaft. I picked up the pace, now moaning quite loudly. Daisy was panting, clenching the ground with her paws, thrusting back into me as I mated with her.
I couldn't believe I was doing this... I was actually mating with my partner who had been my companion for about two years now. I was overwhelmed, my emotions running like crazy through my mind. I was just about to say "I love you" to Daisy when suddenly a wave of warmth swept over me. I felt a burning building deep inside me, as my warm seed made its way up my urethra, spurting out all into Daisy's insides, traveling down into her womb where if I had been a Typhlosion, an egg might have formed. I was overwhelmed, screaming out in ecstasy as my member pumped several rounds into Daisy's vagina.
Feeling the warmth of the cum inside her, that had caused Daisy so climax herself, yelping into the air her species call, as her walls clenched and tightened all around my member, squeezing any and all cum that might not have came out, out. Her juices poured out from inside her, mixing with my cum and pooling inside her. I collapsed on top of her, panting and breathing hard as my member started to deharden inside her. I looked up and met Daisy eye to eye. I stared into her deep, blue eyes, before leaning in and kissing her once again. There I laid my head on her neck, and we both recovered, together and shared in the wondrous afterglow.
We both lay there, staring up at the stars. The night was beautiful; any clouds that had been out earlier had passed on, leaving the sky to be big and open. The moon was near full, shining down upon the two of us. There were millions of stars visible. I was so happy to be alone with Daisy, just enjoying the company and basking in the other's warmth. I pulled my jeans and underwear up, for it was getting cold.
As cold as it was, we were both sweaty and our lower regions were soaked in our juices. So I got up and stretched. I helped Daisy up. "Hey, Daisy, let's go find a lake or something so we can wash off."
So we walked off into the forest, holding hands/paws now. After a minute or two, I heard water over to our right. We walked over through a row of trees, which opened up, showing a small forest waterfall and pond. The waterfall was falling at a pretty harsh force, causing the bottom so foam up. There was plenty more water for us to bathe in. So I took my clothes off, not embarrassed at all by Daisy watching me. In fact, it kind of turned me on a little. She was watching me closely, so when I had finally stripped down to my birthday suit, I noticed that I had an erection again. Daisy noticed and blushed a little, scratching her head. I sat on the edge of the pond, letting my legs sit in. It was very cold, but I hopped in anyways. Daisy followed suit, leaping in and doggy paddling over to where I was.
When she got over, I took her into an embrace. She hugged back, licking my neck. I waded around behind her and started to rub her shoulders. She mured, enjoying the massage. I moved on up her neck, massaging her vents, which made her flitch. I rubbed and scratched her ears. I loved her ears, I don't know why. They just seemed so nice to me. So I moved down now, rubbing her back and sides, nibbling on one of her ears. She was enjoying the treatment a lot, her right leg started beating when I was rubbing her ears. I could feel the water starting to warm up, guessing that Daisy had warmed it with her body. When I got down to her thighs, I gently rubbed them. I also reached around to her region, just trying to clean off the cum and juices. She hadn't expected this, and flinched, now moaning as my fingers passed over her slit.
Not really meaning to start anything, once I was done cleaning her region, I continued on down to her feet, cleaning out between her toes. She seems kind of disappointed but didn't seem to mind too much. So once I had her all washed and rubbed down, I hugged her again, nuzzling her soft, wet neck. I dunked down under the water, then felt her paws on my head, moving over my head as to clean my hair out. I came back up and laughed, her laughing too. I kissed her on the cheek quickly and splashed her with water. She covered her face, but growled playfully and splashed back. We had a water splashing fight. She finally tackled me and pushed me under. I forced my head back up, gasping real quick "Okay, okay! I give, you win!" I said.
We crawled back out; she shook herself out and did her instant drying technique. I laughed at her, because after she did that, her hair was all poofed out. I walked over to where I had left my bag, and got out her brush. I sat her down and started to brush her now soft fur. She always enjoyed being brushed, pushing against the brush when I ran it down her back. After I had her looking nice and clean, I went to put some clothes on, since I was actually really cold. After I got my bag repacked. we walked back to camp. Neither of us were tired, so I thought we should go look around.
We went walking out a ways, listening to the quiet sounds of the mountain forest. After a while of walking, we came to a cliff, overlooking a huge valley, completely covered in mist that was shining in the bright moonlight. The mountains looked like huge, peaceful giants, watching over the valley forest below. We sat down on the ledge, and I put my arms around Daisy. "Beautiful, isn't it?" I asked, almost in a whisper.
"Baka." She nodded, leaning against me. I held her close to me, our heads against each other, looking down on the gorgeous view below. I had a feeling rush over me, like a warm feeling, but different. It was as if I had something inside of me snap, like a gap was filled. I then realized just how much Daisy really meant to me. A year's time may not be much, but it was more than enough for me and Daisy to form a bond with each other, a bond that would never be broken. I looked over and caught her eye. For the third time in two days, I just stared into her eyes, thinking nothing except being with her for the rest of our lives.
I leaned in and kissed her, breaking it to say, "Daisy, I'm glad we're mates. I'm glad that something snapped in me yesterday; because that was the best thing that could possibly happen to me. I hope we never get split apart." I hugged her, never wanting her to leave my side. She hugged back, not saying anything. I knew I had found love; a love that would go on forever.
THE ENDChapter End Notes:Thanks for reading, please review/rate. And remember, be harsh, yet constructive
The only sound that could be heard was from us, my Typhlosion Daisy and I, walking along a close cut forest path. We had been walking to Blackthorn City, leaving from Mahogany Town that afternoon. We had beaten the gym leader there and were headed to the last and final gym.
It was dark, so we decided to stop for the night and picked a nice clearing in the path. Daisy nuzzled me as I unpacked my bag, taking out the blanket the two of us slept on at night and rolling it out on the ground. Daisy went out to collect firewood for cooking and warmth. She came back with a couple logs, with some twigs and branches for starting it. I got out the tender box and sparked a fire on the twigs, laying them on the logs as to catch them too.
So I got out a little foldable metal pot stand I kept with me, setting it up over the fire and placing a hanging pot on it. I also pulled out a can of beans for myself and a canteen of water. I poured some of the water in the pot to boil. I handed Daisy a can of Pokemon food. She only ate that stuff when we were on the road. When the water began to boil, I poured the can of beans in the water, letting them cook.
As I waited for the beans to cook, I pulled out Daisy and I's blanket. We snuggled close together and I wrapped it around us. She helped keep me warm, for it got really cold at night on our journeys. I always liked to snuggle with her, I laid my head in her neck like a pillow, and she would usually lick me in the forehead. I embraced her, trying not to fall asleep in her warmth. So we lay there, snuggling close to each other and enjoying the company and watching the fire flicker.
When the beans were done, I pulled out a small bowl and a spoon from my bag, and started eating. I didn't really like beans, but they were good travel food. I finished up and sat the dishes over for the morning. I crawled back over by Daisy, snuggling my head into her neck. We were embracing as she licked me on the cheek. She had a rough tongue so it tickled a bit, so I laughed in response. She smiled and licked me again.
"How would you like it if I licked you back, eh?" I said playfully, licking her on the cheek. She licked my back yet again, smiling still. That went on for a little while before I just leaned into her and hugged her lovingly.
All of a sudden, something weird happened... I opened my eyes and looked at her, and I blushed, hiding my face back in her neck. I was a bit surprised as to why I blushed. I mean, it's not like I could have possibly felt embarrassed for some reason...
I shrugged it off, wrapping my arms around Daisy and rubbing the vents on her neck. They were really sensitive, so she flinched a bit from it, but started to growl in her throat: the Typhlosion equivalent to purring. She liked it when I did that. I looked up again, but this time her eye caught mine. I could feel myself go beet red, she seemed to notice and head tilted. She looked at me funny, like I did something strange.
I felt weird now inside, like a tingly feeling in my chest. I reached up and stroked her smooth ears with one of my hands, sub consciously gazing into her eyes now. Speaking of her eyes, they weren't normal red, but instead were sort of a deep blue. I had noticed it before, but now it seemed so... nice.
She closed her eyes and rubbed her chin against my cheek, I leaned into it, wondering through my mind what was happening. I had a thought but it quickly crossed out of my mind. At first I thought that I actually might be feeling love for her, not just friendship, but deeper. I just ignored it and tried to focus on the hug.
I just couldn't force myself to keep it out of my head, it was like it was going to come out whether I wanted it to or not. So I quit ignoring it, wondering whether it really was love I was feeling right now. It didn't feel right, for Pokemon and people weren't to be like that, but on the other hand it seemed right, just me and her, alone together, happy.
I looked at her again, looking for some hint of whether she was feeling the same thing. I didn't have to look hard, for she never really was one for hiding her feelings. I looked her in the eye, she looked straight back.
"Daisy..." I muttered simply. She head tilted, wondering why I seemed to be acting strange.
"Daisy... You do love me, as a friend, right?" I asked, almost stuttering.
"Baka" She answered nodding. I could feel myself getting redder all the time. "What about any more than that?" She looked at me curiously, wondering where I was going with this.
I buried my face in her chest in embarrassment. She nuzzled me, obviously confused as to what to do. I was completely lost, having no idea as to what to do. I wanted to give in to it... but I didn't know what to think. People and Pokemon were not supposed to be together like that, but I just couldn't help it. I looked up again, trying to look her straight in the eye.
"D-Daisy... I-I... I think I may..." I traced off, taking a breath and trying to build confidence. "Daisy, I think I... l-love... you..." I wanted to explode, but I just buried my face back in her chest. She was confused. Apparently she didn't get what I was trying to say. I lifted my head up and tried again "I think I love you, Daisy, like, love, love... I don't know what to say..." I stopped myself from going back into her fur, looking at her still.
She simply leaned over and licked me again. I smiled and nuzzled her, guessing that she was just fine with it. I embraced her, taking notice to how cold it was getting outside. I wrapped us both in the blanket, snuggling together for warmth. I didn't say anything for a long while. I was going over in my head what had just happened. It obviously wasn't such a big thing for her, considering she didn't seem surprised at all. I was starting to wish I could be more like her, just going with it and not be embarrassed to say it.
She had her eyes closed, so I guessed she had drifted off to sleep. I lay there, looking between the fire and Daisy's face. She seemed so peaceful, happily sleeping, dreaming about who knows what. So I closed my eyes and did my best to fall asleep, which was actually pretty easy once I closed my eyes and snuggled into Daisy's warm chest.
The next morning I woke, fully rested. The sun was starting to peek out from behind the morning clouds. Daisy was still asleep with me, so I eased out of the grip she had me in, and proceeded to put out the embers that remained of the fire. I had gone out for a bit, getting some water from a nearby stream. When I got back, she was still sound asleep. I figured I'd let her sleep in. So I sat there for a while and took in the mountain air.
When she finally woke up, she lazily sat up, rubbing her eyes and trying to comprehend what was happening, as most people do when they first wake up. I smiled to her, walking over and hugging her, helping her up and offered that they go to the stream to freshen up. So we both walked a little ways to a small, secluded stream I had found. I took my clothes off. I always did this, and Daisy always bathed with me, but when I did it this time, I could feel myself going red again, especially since Daisy was watching me, wondering why I was hesitating. I quickly jumped in, because I felt the last thing I wanted right now, I was starting to get an erection!
She didn't notice, and jumped in with me. She was not afraid of the water, like some fire types. She could also swim very well. I had laid some stuff over to the side of the stream, so I wadded over. I dunked my head underwater for a second, wetting my hair, then squirted some shampoo in my hand and spreading it in my hair. I washed it out, before Daisy swam over. I reached over for her shampoo, which was for her slightly coarse fur. She dunked under as I did. I squirted some of her shampoo in my hands, rubbing it on her back. She murred and was rubbing her back against my hands. I also spread it on her head and around her ears.
When she turned around for me to do her front, I spread it on her neck, moving down her chest before I felt what I was sure was her breasts. I looked down, rubbing her clean all over. She also lifted her legs so I could do those. I got really nervous when I was rubbing the inside of her legs, being really close to her region. When she was lathered up, she dunked under for a few seconds, coming back up and smiling. I wadded over and hugged her, but realized that my erection hadn't gone done! She felt something poking her and looked down. I quickly realized what I had done and jumped as quickly as I possibly could out of the stream and wrapped up in a towel, sitting with my legs in front of me.
She didn't have enough time to realize what happened, so she just looked at me funny and crawled out, shaking herself before insta-drying herself, which she did by super heating her body. It was cool because all the water on her just all of a sudden turned to steam. I quickly crawled over to my bag, putting my underwear on facing away from Daisy.
After we had both had camp packed up, we set out again for Blackthorn City. We had hoped to make it to the entrance to Ice Cave by the end of that day, which they would have to go through the next day, which would take a day. Then Blackthorn was about an hour's walk from the cave exit.
It was mountain passes and valleys all the way to Blackthorn. Neither of us had any problem with it. We both loved the mountains. The view was beautiful from the route we were taking. We were heading down a small path leading down the side of a mountain, overlooking a huge, pine-filled valley with a beautiful lake in the middle. Everywhere you looked was snow capped mountains that reached out into the sky, as if testing just how high they could go.
The day itself was beautiful. It was cloudy, which meant the mountains were misty from afar with mist, which made them seem ominous, and mysterious, but also made it seem relaxing at the same time. We had both preferred cloudy days to sunny ones.
After walking for a while, we came to an indention in the mountain. We stopped to take a break from hiking. I pulled out a couple of bottles of water, giving her one and I drank the other. We sat on a rock and admired the gorgeous view. Being there with Daisy made it seem almost dream-like. Her being there made everything seem perfect. I leaned into her, putting my arm around her and smiling. She growled in her throat, indicating that she was happy, as was I.
We continued back on the trail. We had a long ways to go still before we made it to Blackthorn city.
After a while, it became dark again, the sun going down. You could see the sunset for the clouds had cleared up that afternoon. The sky just seemed to fade from black into purple, into red, into orange, and finally into a glowing gold. I couldn't help but be distracted a little bit while walking, for I tripped over a rock and almost went tumbling down the mountainside.
We were now down in a valley, so I thought we could set up camp in an opening we saw. We followed the normal routine of me setting up camp and her going to get firewood. We both huddled by the fire, cuddling together. I wasn't so nearly as nervous as I was the night before. I actually seemed a lot happier. I leaned into Daisy's shoulder, and she leaned back, balancing us out. We both then lay back on our backs, looking up at the big, full moon they had that night.
I looked over at her and nuzzled her, she looked back at me. I stared into her eyes, a wave of warmth washing over me. I leaned in, and nuzzled her cheek, before giving her a kiss on the lips and hugging her. She seemed a little surprised from the kiss, but didn't seem to mind too much. I finally had built up the courage to say what I had wanted to say to her since the night before.
"Daisy... I wanted to say this to you clearly. I stumbled through my words last night, confused as to what I was actually saying, but I thought on it today. Daisy, I love you. More than just a friend, but as my best friend, my partner..." I paused for a second, getting ready for what I was about to say, "My mate..."
I think she finally realized why I had been acting so weird lately, for she wrapped her arms around me and hugged me. I gladly did the same right back, rubbing her back. I broke the hug, looking at her again. This time when I leaned in, I didn't hold back, I planted my lips against the smooth fur on her maw. I closed my eyes, savoring the moment. She didn't retreat; in fact, she put her paws on my shoulders and pushed back. I was so glad to see that she loved me back. I was scared that she might think me weird and ignore me, but it was the complete opposite.
We lay there for what seemed an eternity, lips locked in a passionate kiss, enjoying the feel of the others lips and the touch of the others hands/paws on their body. I had my hands on her side, rubbing gently. When the kiss broke, we embraced again, and then another thought ran through my head. I didn't want to hold back now, that we were together, but I hesitated for a moment on this one, for this was farther up than I originally planned on going.
I spoke up "Daisy, I have a question to ask you..." She looked at me, waiting. "I know it is kind of sudden, but would you be my mate?" she didn't hesitate though, for she licked me on the lips and hugged me. I was overjoyed that she really did love me. I was really afraid at first that she wouldn't, but now that those bridges had been crossed, we didn't have to worry about anymore hesitation between us, for we both had formed a strong bond together.
I nuzzled her neck affectionately, rubbing lower, until I came again to her chest. Once again, I felt the lumps, I didn't realize what I was doing until I hear `d a soft mur come from Daisy. I noticed that my head had rubbed against one of her nipples, which she seemed to enjoy. I looked up at her, then back down to her chest, nuzzling her breast with my nose, looking up again. She looked down, a look of pleasure on her face.
I stroked the fur on her chest with my hand, before starting to rub on her breast, pushing and massaging it lightly. She was really enjoying this, so I took it a step further still, licking at her nipple through her fur. She shivered at this, so I took her whole nipple in my mouth, sucking lightly and flicking at it lightly with my tongue. She started to rub my back with her paw, so I took my other hand and played with her other breast while still suckling on the one.
Feeling adventurous, I started to lick her breast, and started moving lower, down to her belly, with both hands on her breasts and my mouth occupied by licking and suckling her belly. She was on her back now, arching her back away from me at the treatment. I started to move further down still, seeing if she were to protest what I was planning. I was looking up at her the entire time, waiting for a no, but it never came, so my tongue had accidentally licked over her pussy lips because I wasn't paying attention. She squeaked, not expecting this, but obviously not protesting. I was surprised too, looking down and blushing as I saw her pink slit.
I nudged it with my nose, hearing a moan of consent from Daisy; I licked over it again, running my tongue from bottom to top. I noticed she seemed to twitch when my tongue ran over a small piece of skin at the top of her slit. So I licked it, a shiver running down her body as her body twitched without her consent. Guessing that was a good thing, I licked it again, and again, getting the same response every time.
Gaining a bit of courage, I brought my hands, which were still rubbing her breasts, down, taking one side of her pussy lips with one finger and opening it, a very strong, sweet aroma emitting from it. I carefully eased my tongue in, it being greeted by a wondrous tasting flavor. I couldn't quite tell what it was, but I liked it! I eagerly snuck the rest of my tongue in, penetrating her virgin lips. The smell was very overpowering, as if urging me to go deeper, which I gladly did. I was licking all the inside walls of her vagina, the liquid leaking from deep inside her. My tongue was thirsty for more, so I moved it all around inside her, licking at every inch it could reach.
This obviously being her first time, she orgasmed pretty quickly. She let out a yelp, her body tensing up and her vagina clenching down on my tongue, before a stream of the delicious liquid came out, covering my mouth as I tried to lap it all up. She was panting very heavy, her body not moving. I was still digging around inside her, getting all of the liquid I could out before licking it off the outside and off my lips.
I crawled up her body after making sure she was completely clean. She was still breathing quickly, panting as her chest rose and fell. I hugged her neck. I felt so good for being able to being her pleasure like that. It made me feel needed, loved.
"Did you enjoy it?" I asked, obviously knowing the answer "Ba... Baka..." She panted, hugging me very tightly. "I'm glad." I said, nuzzling her as she was caught up in the afterglow of her first orgasm. I laid there right beside her, nuzzling her shoulders as she continued to recover.
I got a little nervous now, knowing what was to happen next. "So, Daisy... Well, do you want to... you know..." I swallowed "Will you, mate with me?" I asked, trying not to sound so nervous. She was still breathing pretty heavy, but was alert "Baka..." She said, nodding and holding me tighter. I hugged her back, smiling. I then reached down for my jeans, and unbuttoned, then unzipped them. Slowly I pulled both my jeans and underwear down to my ankle, using my left hand to slowly fondle with myself, still hugging Daisy.
She caught her breath and sat up, noticing me rubbing myself. I could have sworn I saw her blushing under her fur, she looked down and stared. I started blushing myself, looking out over her shoulder. She then did something I really wasn't expecting; she reached out her paw, and started to rub my member. I jumped, looking at what had touched me besides my own hand; my face turning beat red. I let her take my member in her paw as she started to stroke slowly. I started to grunt, her soft paws feeling wondrously good on my sensitive skin.
Now, I had masturbated before, but it wasn't an everything day thing, so I was just as sensitive as she was. I was leaking pre, the sound of her paw going up making a sort of squishing noise. Her paw was damp with my pre. I felt a tingling building up, so I reached down and pulled Daisy's paw away, indicating that I was ready to go on.
What I did next probably wasn't the smartest thing in the world. Now, mind you I'm no expert on the female anatomy, so I had no idea what would happen when I were to dig right into her. So I had crawled on top of her, straddling her with the tip of my member hovering right at the lips of her vagina. I steadied myself, readying to plunge in.
"Are you ready, Daisy?" I asked, a bit nervous. "Baka." She replied, nodding at me. I nodded back, took a breath then eased the head of my penis in, grunting a little from the feeling. She pinched her lips, closing her eyes and readying for me to go all the way in.
I took another breath, before slowly easing the rest in, before I felt some skin like barrier blocking me. I didn't know what it was, so I pushed against it; a mistake. I had broken the bit of skin, which caused Daisy to wail out in pain. I quickly pulled out and looked to see what happened. I had blood on the tip of my penis. I hugged Daisy, stroking her ears comfortingly "Daisy, I'm so sorry! I didn't mean to hurt you in anyway, I'm so sorry!" I babbled on, but after a few seconds, she licked my face and grabbed around for my penis, pulling it towards her slit again.
"Wh-what? No, I don't want to hurt you again!" I cried, but she continued to pull. "Are you sure?" I asked, really not wanting to hurt her in any way. She nodded and tried to pull me further. "If you're certain..." I sighed. I did the same as before, steadying myself outside her lips, before slowly pushing in again. This time I very cautiously eased in, making sure I didn't run into anything else. When I was all the way in with no resistance, I stayed there for a while. She was so warm inside, it was extraordinary! I could feel some of the liquid she had leaked that my tongue could not reach. After taking in the moment, I eased out, clenching my teeth as I went.
When I had reached almost out, I slowly started in again, not hesitating so much now that I had reassurance that I wasn't going to hit anything that might hurt Daisy. Daisy had her eyes closed with her paws digging into the ground. I got back all the way in, so I started to pick up the pace until I was to a point where I could be considered humping her now. The pleasure was immense, every little inch going in and coming out felt wondrous all down my shaft. I picked up the pace, now moaning quite loudly. Daisy was panting, clenching the ground with her paws, thrusting back into me as I mated with her.
I couldn't believe I was doing this... I was actually mating with my partner who had been my companion for about two years now. I was overwhelmed, my emotions running like crazy through my mind. I was just about to say "I love you" to Daisy when suddenly a wave of warmth swept over me. I felt a burning building deep inside me, as my warm seed made its way up my urethra, spurting out all into Daisy's insides, traveling down into her womb where if I had been a Typhlosion, an egg might have formed. I was overwhelmed, screaming out in ecstasy as my member pumped several rounds into Daisy's vagina.
Feeling the warmth of the cum inside her, that had caused Daisy so climax herself, yelping into the air her species call, as her walls clenched and tightened all around my member, squeezing any and all cum that might not have came out, out. Her juices poured out from inside her, mixing with my cum and pooling inside her. I collapsed on top of her, panting and breathing hard as my member started to deharden inside her. I looked up and met Daisy eye to eye. I stared into her deep, blue eyes, before leaning in and kissing her once again. There I laid my head on her neck, and we both recovered, together and shared in the wondrous afterglow.
We both lay there, staring up at the stars. The night was beautiful; any clouds that had been out earlier had passed on, leaving the sky to be big and open. The moon was near full, shining down upon the two of us. There were millions of stars visible. I was so happy to be alone with Daisy, just enjoying the company and basking in the other's warmth. I pulled my jeans and underwear up, for it was getting cold.
As cold as it was, we were both sweaty and our lower regions were soaked in our juices. So I got up and stretched. I helped Daisy up. "Hey, Daisy, let's go find a lake or something so we can wash off."
So we walked off into the forest, holding hands/paws now. After a minute or two, I heard water over to our right. We walked over through a row of trees, which opened up, showing a small forest waterfall and pond. The waterfall was falling at a pretty harsh force, causing the bottom so foam up. There was plenty more water for us to bathe in. So I took my clothes off, not embarrassed at all by Daisy watching me. In fact, it kind of turned me on a little. She was watching me closely, so when I had finally stripped down to my birthday suit, I noticed that I had an erection again. Daisy noticed and blushed a little, scratching her head. I sat on the edge of the pond, letting my legs sit in. It was very cold, but I hopped in anyways. Daisy followed suit, leaping in and doggy paddling over to where I was.
When she got over, I took her into an embrace. She hugged back, licking my neck. I waded around behind her and started to rub her shoulders. She mured, enjoying the massage. I moved on up her neck, massaging her vents, which made her flitch. I rubbed and scratched her ears. I loved her ears, I don't know why. They just seemed so nice to me. So I moved down now, rubbing her back and sides, nibbling on one of her ears. She was enjoying the treatment a lot, her right leg started beating when I was rubbing her ears. I could feel the water starting to warm up, guessing that Daisy had warmed it with her body. When I got down to her thighs, I gently rubbed them. I also reached around to her region, just trying to clean off the cum and juices. She hadn't expected this, and flinched, now moaning as my fingers passed over her slit.
Not really meaning to start anything, once I was done cleaning her region, I continued on down to her feet, cleaning out between her toes. She seems kind of disappointed but didn't seem to mind too much. So once I had her all washed and rubbed down, I hugged her again, nuzzling her soft, wet neck. I dunked down under the water, then felt her paws on my head, moving over my head as to clean my hair out. I came back up and laughed, her laughing too. I kissed her on the cheek quickly and splashed her with water. She covered her face, but growled playfully and splashed back. We had a water splashing fight. She finally tackled me and pushed me under. I forced my head back up, gasping real quick "Okay, okay! I give, you win!" I said.
We crawled back out; she shook herself out and did her instant drying technique. I laughed at her, because after she did that, her hair was all poofed out. I walked over to where I had left my bag, and got out her brush. I sat her down and started to brush her now soft fur. She always enjoyed being brushed, pushing against the brush when I ran it down her back. After I had her looking nice and clean, I went to put some clothes on, since I was actually really cold. After I got my bag repacked. we walked back to camp. Neither of us were tired, so I thought we should go look around.
We went walking out a ways, listening to the quiet sounds of the mountain forest. After a while of walking, we came to a cliff, overlooking a huge valley, completely covered in mist that was shining in the bright moonlight. The mountains looked like huge, peaceful giants, watching over the valley forest below. We sat down on the ledge, and I put my arms around Daisy. "Beautiful, isn't it?" I asked, almost in a whisper.
"Baka." She nodded, leaning against me. I held her close to me, our heads against each other, looking down on the gorgeous view below. I had a feeling rush over me, like a warm feeling, but different. It was as if I had something inside of me snap, like a gap was filled. I then realized just how much Daisy really meant to me. A year's time may not be much, but it was more than enough for me and Daisy to form a bond with each other, a bond that would never be broken. I looked over and caught her eye. For the third time in two days, I just stared into her eyes, thinking nothing except being with her for the rest of our lives.
I leaned in and kissed her, breaking it to say, "Daisy, I'm glad we're mates. I'm glad that something snapped in me yesterday; because that was the best thing that could possibly happen to me. I hope we never get split apart." I hugged her, never wanting her to leave my side. She hugged back, not saying anything. I knew I had found love; a love that would go on forever.
THE ENDChapter End Notes:Thanks for reading, please review/rate. And remember, be harsh, yet constructive
Date:Oct 17 2012 Chapter:Chapter 1
Nicely wrote, steady pace, it had a few lines that I had to read twice but that was fine.
All in all, I give it 9 out of 10. Good job!