Yes, I like it all; the slightly forceful Lucario, the disgruntled teenager and the asshole dad. It just flowed together so nicely.

I didnt see an error of any kind, except that the deck of cards the used may have been shorter than normal.

Plot: Thick, rich and steady. 10

Characters: Well thought out, dexterous and encompasing. 10

Sex: Filling, very teasy & touchy, a little too sweet. 9

All in all, I can give this story a very good 8. The only thing that let it down really was interactions and a slight "Script-like" fell to it.

All the best! -Fuzzy