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Poke-dolls Inc. by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 3]

Summary:

Poke-dolls the newest sex toy on the market. When a young man finds a Poke-doll outside in the trash he decides to take her home with him. But what are the consequences for a act of kindness.

Story Notes:

I told my brother my idea for this and he wanted to read more. So I typed it all down my computer and uploaded it for everyone to enjoy.

  1. Episode 1 Poke-dolls Incorporated. (4649 words) [Reviews: 3]

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    Reviewer: fuzzy
    Date:Dec 1 2012 Chapter:Episode 1 Poke-dolls Incorporated.
    Nice, brilliant idea for a fic!

    I love the realism of it and would love for this to continue.

    The only problem was a couple of mistakes with spelling and grammar, but other than that it flowed very nicely.

    Unfortunately I cant give it a rating this early but if continues it will probably earn some big stars!

    All the best! Fuzzy
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Jan 5 2013 Chapter:Episode 1 Poke-dolls Incorporated.
    Interesting start. Please continue.

    But one note however; you may want to reread through this carefully and proofread yourself--or get someone else to do so.

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    So It Begins...
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    Reviewer: Ragnarok
    Date:Jun 11 2013 Chapter:Episode 1 Poke-dolls Incorporated.
    Liked to let everyone that reads this in the future to know that I'm the owner of this profile. Sense the change in the site I'm unable to log into my old account where this and my other story are kepted. I did make a new account on here where I will repost and contiue my stories on my new account. So if you see the same story posted twice but with a diffent user name. It's just me on my new account. Here's my new account name incase you want to contact me.

    Ragnarok