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The Lucario Knight by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 2]

Summary:

This is a short lemon,which i was commissioned by whatsapokemon to write for him, it is short because its a one shot romp.


"A lucario awakes to find that he is runting and discovers his princess playing with herself in her chambers"

  1. The lucario knight (728 words) [Reviews: 2]

    This is a short lemon,which i was commissioned by whatsapokemon to write for him, it is short because its a one shot romp.


    "A lucario awakes to find that he is runting and discovers his princess playing with herself in her chambers"


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    Reviewer: sanguine
    Date:Aug 23 2012 Chapter:The lucario knight
    This could have been better, aside for being painfully short it was lacking detail and you could have been more elaborate. There were also a few grammar errors at the start of the sex.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Apr 19 2013 Chapter:The lucario knight
    Short indeed. And I would like to note that there were several spelling and few grammar errors. Namely misspelling GARDEVOIR, and several spots where a comma would be needed. And the proper pronouns at times too.

    Sorry if I seem a bit harsh, but I would very much like to see this either extended and/or with a second chapter.