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Saving Grace by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 2]

Summary:

Here we meet Grace, A young girl who stayed behind when everyone else went out on their own adventure. Now it seems the adventure has come to her!

Story Notes:

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the me, the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

  1. Prologue (984 words)

    Young Grace finds herself in a troubling situation; trapped behind bars with a scientist that warns her of a hidden agenda! But what could it be...

  2. A Fiery Beginning! (5953 words) [Reviews: 2]

    Whoo, actual stuff! I think in my oroginal submission, this was separated in parts, but I just threw it all together this time. Happy reading!

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    Friendly resident Cyndaquil
    Reviewer: Cyn
    Date:Mar 12 2013 Chapter:A Fiery Beginning!

    Nice to see this is getting a rewrite.  My only nitpick is the paragraph blocking.  Not sure if it's just me, but I feel there isn't enough paragraph breaks, or they are placed in a random uniform fashion rather than by topic.  At they very least, dialogue should be in its own separate line when a new speakers starts.


    On a second note, I'm assuming you used to be the author Byoukari?  If so, contact a fics admin if you want access/the accounts merged.

     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Jun 26 2013 Chapter:A Fiery Beginning!
    That was great! A few spelling errors, but still great. Can't wait for more!

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