Join Dragonite and Flygon as they grow up, and finally cross paths one fateful day.
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My first attempt at smut. Read, rate, review, enjoy!
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Thank you, it's nice to hear good feedback from readers.
Out of curiosity, is the word mix-up you were referring to effect/affect? Because that use about the weather was intentionally "effect", or to bring about change.
Thanks, this is exactly the kind of feedback I was looking for! Concrete points that I can look out for and improve upon in future stories.
About the POV, the switch to omnicient near the end was an intentional experiment and I wasn't sure if it could work with the story or not (I guess it didn't).