Author's Chapter Notes:
If you have read the original version of Brotherly Love, I would suggest you read the prologue anyway because I have made huge edits to the story!
It was a nice Saturday morning. I heard the wind blowing through the trees as I sat outside on the grass, watching the clouds go by. It was so peaceful; so quiet.
I'm Isaac. In human years I'm supposed to be 12. I'm a Rockruff, if you were wondering. I live with my brother and my mother in a small house out in the country.
My brother's name is Max. He's only two years older than me, making him 14. He, unlike the rest of us, has red eyes instead of the normal blue. Mom has no idea how it happened, but I think it makes him look cool as hell.
I haven't really seen my father before. Mom said that he disappeared one day without a trace before we were born, but Max has suspicions that the real reason is something else. To this day we don't know where he could be at, and Mom tried everything to "find him", but at that point she thought it was useless. He has to be out there somewhere...somewhere.
I opened my eyes finally after a good hour of relaxing outside. The sun was rising and the sky was turning blue yet again. "Did I fall asleep?" I wondered as I looked around me. I got up to stretch and walked inside so I wouldn't get yelled at for being outside so early.
I went to ask mom where Max was, but I couldn't seem to find her. I looked around for a few minutes before finding a note on the fridge saying, “Went to go get food, brb. Don't get into trouble while I'm gone! -Mom"
“Hmm, I should find Max. We could always play a game or something,” I said to myself.
Then a thought came to my head: Hehe yeah, a game of anal.
I shook my head trying to get the thought out before I got a boner.
There's something I need to say. You see, for the past two years, I have had a crush on my brother. Yeah, yeah, I know it's wrong, but I can't help it! He's just so hot to me and I really wish I could just make out with him for hours and hours...Oh Max~
Speaking of my brother, I went upstairs to go see what he was up to. His door had a sign on it that said “Do No Enter (that means you, Isaac)”. As I read it, I thought, "Psh, who cares what a stupid sign says? He has to look after me after all." I slowly opened the door so he wouldn't hear me come in, and at that very Moment I became both embarrassed and turned on at the same time.
I saw my brother on the bed jerking off. He seemed to be really enjoying it too, because he was moaning quite a lot, which was making me have a bit of a boner myself. I wanted to sit there and watch him until he hopefully started cumming. I blushed even more.
“Uh...Max?” I shyly asked.
He was taken by surprise and stopped immediately. He sat up and looked at me with embarrassment, then annoyance.
“What the hell do you want? Can't you see I'm busy here?” he said, very annoyed about me disrupting his alone time.
“I know, but Mom's gone and I have the feeling she wanted you to look after me until she got back.” I explained.
He sighed, “Alright, fine. Just stay in here then. I gotta finish doing this”
I walked in the room and shut the door behind me. I sat in a corner of the room and watched him as he continued fapping. He didn't even pay much attention to me, which was good so it wasn't as awkward. My penis was starting to grow bigger as he kept stroking his cock. "Mmm yes, stroke that nice thick cock of yours, hehe. Fap so hard that you'll cum all over the bed!~" I thought, wanting to jerk off myself.
He looked over and saw me staring at his cock while getting a huge boner. He blushed and asked, “W-why are you watching me like that?”
I snapped out of it and realized what I was doing. I blushed. “Oh! Well uh, I kind of started spacing out and-”
“You were staring at my dick while I was fapping?” he interrupted.
“Y-yeah …” I said looking off.
“Answer honestly: Do you want to watch me fap?” he asked me.
“...” I was silent.
“...y-yeah, kinda.” I finally answered.
I saw he blushed even more now, but tried not to show that he was surprised. We were both silent for a moment. Then finally, while he was blushing and looking away, he said, “You know, if you want...you can come closer to watch.”
“I can?” I asked, feeling my dick peek up a bit more.
He sighed. “Yeah, I guess.”
I went over and jumped up on the bed, laying several inches away from his dick. He blushed a little more and said, “Oh, didn't expect you to come that close.”
“D-did you not want me to?” I asked.
“No, no, it's fine.” he said stroking his dick slowly.
He started stroking it a bit faster now, which was making my dick want to grow out more, but can't because it's already gone out as far as it could. "Oh god, I think I'm gonna cum from this~" I thought as I laid there, watching my brother jerk off and trying to resist the urge to cum. My dick was starting to feel tingly, which indicated I was definitely getting close. I whimpered a small bit, knowing I wouldn't be able to handle it in much longer.
“Hey, are you ok?” Max asked me, hearing my whimper.
“A-aah!” I moaned, finally releasing my semen. Max eyes grew as he asked, “Woah, are you cumming?” I nodded, still going.
“Here, let me see.” he told me. I lifted up my leg for him, showing my dick spewing out cum on the bed. It finally stopped.
“Wow, I've never seen you cum like that before. Was that because of me?” he asked.
“S-should I answer?” I asked, blushing and covering my muzzle.
He was silent for a moment. I whimpered a little, embarrassed that I came on his bed. He smiled, seeing I still felt bad about what I did. “Aw, do you feel bad because you came on my bed?”
“Yeah, I'm sorry.” I whimpered.
“No, it's ok. I mean, I cum on my bed a lot. It's not really any different with you.” he reassured.
“Are you sure?” I asked. He nodded.
"Heh, thanks Max." I smiled.
“No problem bud.” He said smiling back.
We were both silent for a while, having no clue what to say next. My mind told me that this was the perfect moment to tell him, but I tried ignoring it the best I could. Finally, Max cleared his throat.
“Well...I'm not done jerking off yet. If you still wanted to stay and watch…”
“Yeah, I'd love that” I said, clearly not choosing my words carefully. Why did I have to make it sound like I enjoyed the thought of that a little too much? I mean, I did, but he doesn't have to know that!
He gave me a weird look and said, “You...would?”
I quickly covered my mouth and then tried correcting myself. “Er- I meant: Yeah, that would be fine.”
He stared at me for a little bit. I had a bad feeling he was gonna ask me something that I wouldn't want to answer, but what are the chances of that?
“Hey, quick question: Do you love me?” He asked.
I tried to think of something to say, anything at all, as long as it wasn't the truth. I finally thought of something and cleared my throat awkwardly.
“Well, of course I do. You're my brother after all” I said.
“No I mean, as something more? Like-”
A thought came into my head, and it hit me hard. I didn't even have time to think about what the idea was, I just did it, and I really wish I didn't. I didn't even give him a chance to finish talking before I kissed him by surprise. His eyes widened as I kept kissing him in a way that we never kissed before. For a moment, it felt as though he was about to kiss me back. He pushed me away and stopped us from kissing, keeping the surprised look on his face.
“Why did you do that?” He asked me.
I decided it was time I told him. I knew this day would come, but I didn't expect it to come so soon. I took a deep breath and started to explain.
“You see, Max, ever since I was 10, I have had a huge crush on you. The feelings I have for you is more than just brotherly love, it's...true love, love love. I never wanted to tell you, but I guess it was wrong for me to keep it a secret. I'm sorry. I understand if you feel uncomfortable around me now.”
He had no words. He was frozen for a moment, trying to process what I said. When he finally snapped out of it, he smiled. “Look Isaac, yes it was wrong for you not to tell me, but I won't feel uncomfortable around you or anything. It's ok.”
I don't think I can ever explain how happy I was that he didn't take it too harshly. I had a huge smile on my face, which made him smile even more.
“Thank you so much for understanding! You don't know how happy I am right-”
Then he jolted and kissed me. I was only a little surprised, but quickly, my horny side took over. I put my paw on the back of his head as we kept kissing. He then pushed me slightly, making us fall back on the bed. I tried to push my tongue inside his mouth and make out fully, but he was resisting. After a bit, he finally let me push my tongue in his mouth. And for doing so, he penetrated his tongue in my mouth. I wanted to keep this up forever, but sadly we had to stop after a minute or so. We looked at each other, both of us smiling from the slight pleasure.
“Can I tell you something now?” He asked me.
“Yeah, sure!” I said to him.
“If I was completely honest, I kind of liked you this way for about a year. I tried really hard to suppress the feeling because I thought you wouldn't understand, and even if you did, I was afraid you were going to tell Mom and I would be in trouble. Sorry that I didn't tell you before.” He said, with his ears flopping forward.
“Aw, it's ok Max. I know now, and on top of that, we both have the same feelings for each other.” I told him, trying to cheer him up. I was silent for a moment “Does that mean we're-”
“Dating? If...you want” he said.
My tail wagged in excitement. I was hoping for the day he would ask me out. Honestly, I had a feeling he was never going to ask me. “Hell yeah!” I yelled, agreeing to his offer.
He laughed a small bit, which made me laugh too.
“Of course, we're gonna have to keep this a secret from Mom. God knows what she's gonna say if she finds out.” He told me.
“Yeah, of course.” I said, showing him that I understand.
He put his arms around me with a grin on his face. I had a small feeling I knew what he was going to do, so I let him do what he needed to do.
“So, anything you want to do now?” He asked me with a grin.
“Besides anal in bed for the next, oh I dunno, hour in a half? I have no clue” I said.
“Heh, and how long have you been wanting that?” He asked, still grinning. His tail started to wag.
“Damn uh...for the past year and a half?” I said, unsure.
“Wow, really? Damn, you poor thing. Well it's about time you lost your virginity then.” He said.
I gulped as I imagined his huge cock inside my tight butthole, thinking of how pleasuring it would feel. I felt my face getting really hot.
I felt myself getting a boner again as I turned around, my ass clear for him to see. He started sniffing it at first, which confused me. He started licking my butthole, which actually felt quite nice, "Haha, stop! It tickles!" I giggled uncontrollably. Then, almost immediately, he got up on top of me with his front paws wrapped around my waist. I felt his dick rub against my asshole before slowly sliding in.
I heard Max moan a small bit, and I moaned with him. I wanted to feel it all. I wanted to feel him penetrate me as hard as he can and never stop, but the sad truth was, I'm not ready for that yet. I'm better off going nice and slow than basically him obliterating my asshole. Maybe at some point in the future we can do that, but for now, it's best to take it easy.
“Man, this feels so good.” I panted.
“Y-yeah, sorry if I'm not going fast and hard, I just didn't want to hurt you.” He said.
“I understand. Besides, I was hoping you would do that anyway, since this is my first time.” I admitted.
He giggled a bit as he kept penetrating me with gentle thrusts. At this point, I couldn't help but blurt out a question I've been wanting to ask for a while. “C-can you go a bit harder... and faster? I t-think I can handle it” I
“Yeah, sure bud. Just tell me if it's too much for you and I'll go back, ok?”
He started going harder and faster, just as I asked him to. Honestly, it felt even better than before. I wanted to ask him to keep going harder, but I feared he wouldn't let me. After all, he did say he didn't want to hurt me.
“Heh, does that feel good buddy?” He asked me.
“Y-yeah, *pant* so good” I moaned.
“You know, you can ask to go as hard or as fast as you want. I'll do it for you, and don't be afraid to ask to go slower as well. Remember: I don't want to hurt you in any way.”
“Well, now that you mention it, can you keep going harder? I'll tell you when to stop” I told him.
So just like that, he started going harder. Every two times he penetrated me, he would go harder. The harder he went, the more I moaned. It started hurting a small bit as he kept going, but I had a feeling I was going to be fine, so I kept moaning. Finally, he got to a point where I had to tell him to stop going harder or else he's going to leave my asshole feeling extremely sore.
“M-max! Stop!” I moaned.
He didn't stop. I couldn't tell if he was just panting too loud so he couldn't hear or what, but either way, it both scared me and made me feel hornier. I tried to plead him to stop because my asshole was feeling sore, but nothing could come out of my mouth except moans and panting. Then, he stopped and realized what he was doing. I couldn't tell if my vision was getting a bit blurry or if he really was about to cry.
“Oh my God, I'm so sorry, Isaac! I didn't mean to do it, I swear! I got way too caught up in the moment and, and, oh fuck! I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry!” He cried.
I put my paw over his mouth to keep him quiet. “Hey, it's fine hun. I understand completely, don't beat yourself up over it,” I told him, “and here, since you're still feeling troubled, I have an idea.”
"What is it?" He sniffled.
I laid him down on the bed. Slowly, I rubbed my paws from his stomach to his cock, giving him a dirty look. Precum was starting to run down his penis, so I grabbed it with one paw and starting "cleaning" it, licking it as if it were a lollipop. It tasted a bit funny, but what do you expect? It was just in my asshole a minute ago. Finally, I licked up to the tip and shoved it in my mouth, to which I was greeted with a nice taste of his precum.
"Fuck, Issac. You're mouth is so warm" he moaned, putting his paw on my head.
He forced my head down to take his entire cock, only for me to gag from how big it was. If he didn't push back in time, I might have vomited on his dick and that would have been it for me. He apologized for making me gag as much as I did, to which I moaned softly to show I didn't care all that much. He went faster, fucking my mouth the way he did with my ass. I could tell he was getting close, all I needed was to give it a little more pressure and…
Just like that, with the sound of his loud moans and grunts, his cum spewed into my mouth. It tasted a bit salty, but I didn't mind it that much. Rope after rope, it just kept on coming (pun not intended...maybe), so much so that I ended up swallowing it all. I loved every second of it.
After I had his dick out of my mouth, I couldn't help but grin and say to him, “Hehe, did you enjoy that?”
“Y-yeah, I did,” he panted, “...I love you”
“I love you too” I responded.
As we started to make out on the bed again, I tried to imagine what our future would hold; how our relationship will turn out. I may not know, I may never know, but there is one thing I am certain about: We will be together forever.
Chapter End Notes:
Be ready for the first chapter to come out at...some point! I have so much planned and I hope you guys stay tuned for more!