AGNPH Stories

Luca - 1st Edition by Felix


Story Notes:

This is the first posted edition of my story Luca.
Luca is a special riolu who is given to the trainer Felix. Meant for each other, the two endeavor to make the best of their lives together. However, what is life without trials to make bonds grow stronger?

Intro and Disclaimer

Just so everyone knows. In no way do I represent the pokemon franchise. This is just a story I was inspired to write when I realized how much I like Riolu and Lucario characters. Though I don't intend for this story to be like the others posted I feel it's inevitable that I end up putting my characters through similar situations. I'd like to apologize for this in advance and if you want, you can personal message me and I will credit you for posting/writing it first. Also the characters I use in this story are entirely original (save for the pokemon, I only claim to have invented their personalities and again apologize for any similarities as they are not intended.) again I apologize if there are similarities and just want any readers to know that I did not in any way intend for similarities or I would have sited them. The only thing I ask is that you grant me the same courtesy and let me know if you plan to use anything significant from this story.

With that being said there a few similarities with one other story I've read that I would like to credit someone with. I'd like to credit XD385 and his "Rukario Romance" There are a few places where my story resembles his, and though I will not go into detail I would like to give him credit for any similarities, he thought them up first, not me. Though I'm certain that reading his story helped inspire me to write mine so again it was his idea first.

This is my first story and I've found myself putting a lot of thought into it. I only hope anyone who reads it can get past any novice writing mistakes I've made (such as view confliction, third person, first, second...). Also I do intend to have sex in later chapters, but this will not be a real sex heavy story, it focuses more on the relationship between the trainer, Felix, and Luca. So sorry to anyone who was wishing for a lot of sex. That's also a warning for those who hadn't noticed... ;)

Last is a bit of back round that I've found needs ironing out. Felix started his journey when he was ten, the norm for trainers. And he is twenty at the beginning of this story, that's all I'm saying there, I think the rest is made clear in the chapters. Next, for all intents and purposes Luca does not have the Lucario chest spike, but retains the spikes on the back of a Lucario's paws. I attribute this to her being a female, and still consider the males to have the chest spike. If you disagree I'll let you come up with your own explanation as to why I ignore it in this story. Otherwise Felix would have many holes in his chest by the time the story is over.

With all that done, I hope you enjoy. O and I always appreciate any feedback as well.
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    Reviewer: Arrulai
    Date:Aug 26 2012 Chapter:Intro and Disclaimer

    A story of what love, conflict, adversaty, this has made me cry and laugh more than any story. It shall always be my favorite

    Reviewer: sanguine
    Date:Aug 28 2012 Chapter:Intro and Disclaimer
    This is a very heartwarming story about raising a family and the bonds that exist and form therein. It's full of laughs, love and loss and is one of the few stories that has had me come back to read it again. A highly recommended read and will always have a place in my heart.