A boy and his Typhlosion have been friends for almost a year now. But something sparks between the two, igniting a deeper love for each other then previously thought possible.
Story Notes:
Well, this is my first story I want to try to post here. Most people say be nice on their first post, but not here! Be as harsh as possible, yet still constructive please. I hate the story myself, but I want to see what others think. I think the story is too short, repetitive, and doesn't flow very well. I may just be over picky... No real characterization, as this is just me and my mate.
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Chapter 1 (5340 words)
[Reviews: 1]
Date:Oct 17 2012 Chapter:Chapter 1
Nicely wrote, steady pace, it had a few lines that I had to read twice but that was fine.
All in all, I give it 9 out of 10. Good job!