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Beachside Encounter by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 1]

Summary:

A moody Absol finds the missing piece in her life in the arms of one she never expected

Story Notes:

This story is about 5 years old now. And still not bad for a first shot. Figued it could go up here where it belongs.

  1. Chapter 1 (2471 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    Reviewer: redacted
    Date:Jun 13 2014 Chapter:Chapter 1
    This is really good for a first timer, but you just left so many spelling errors it's like you didn't even read over it to see what you misspelled. The story itself is somewhat laughable, (don't get me wrong I just don't like smut) but overall yes, you did do alright. I just suggest you re-read the next story you write. Even though you posted this two years ago I still suggest you do.