AGNPH Stories
 

Rainy Day: The Second Time by seikiru

 
 

Story Notes:

this is the rewrite of Rainy Days, I figured that seeing as I believe that I'm a better writer now that I can stand to change and fix it, please enjoy and I do not own pokemon, never have and never will... no ownership at all, all ownership to the guy who created it...


Chapter 1

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A Pikachu's home is something that can be hard to replace. A den in a small mountain side, with a forest down below is all that is needed. The forest just needs a friendly Pokémon, trees, and berry bushes. There in the forest a Pikachu needs to be able to play games, nap in peace, and not worry about being hunted. Pikachus, Caterpies, Weedles, and even a Burmy or two can live in peace in these forests.

Though most Pokémon are inside their homes today, the rain is pouring down and most Pokémon are praying that it will stop. For about three days now the rain has been pouring. Most Pokémon are happy inside of their den, warm, and full. Pokémon have to eat right?

Unlike most Pokémon though Spot was out of food, he wasn't prepared for the coming storm, and didn't have time to stock pile food. Spot was different, and his difference made him an outcast of sorts. You see Spot had a small well dot on his back that was Raichu colored. Most of us are thinking that is cool right? Well in the Pokémon world it's the sign of the outcast.

Spot decided that he would have to brave the rain to get food, or else he would die and even though he was an outcast dyeing wasn't big on his list. So taking a gulp of breath he left his den at the bottom of a mountain to find food.

He searched and searched for food but couldn't find any, at least what he did find was rotten and he couldn't eat rotten food, or fear for getting sick. He continued his wandering and to his relief no more then half an hour of storming rain and harsh wind to find what looked like a berry tree, that wasn't rotten.

He sighed with relief and reached up to pluck one of the berries. They were light blue in color and from what Spot could see they were Oran Berries. He pulled the berry off and heard a light snap coming from behind him.

Turning around he gasped out as his eyes beheld a Caterpie. This little Pokémon looked weak, out of breath, and almost dead. Her body was covered in cuts, scraps, and bruises. "Help." The little voice managed to get out before collapsing.

Grabbing a hand full of berries, Spot rushed over to the Caterpie and picked her up using one paw. Spot wasn't really surprised, Caterpies were usually very light creatures. He ran off into the forest as fast as he could go with out dropping berries and falling over.

When he arrived to his den he rushed in side, he laid the Caterpie in his bed, set the handful of berries in his storage area and ran back over to help the poor Pokémon lying in his bed.

Spot looked over the Caterpie's wounds and wrapped her up the best he could. "I'm no doctor but this should last, for now." He stepped back and looked over the Caterpie, other then the bandages she was a basic Caterpie, green with yellow spots, a light white to cream under belly her antenna type things were also the classic red. To his eyes she was a classic Caterpie, a female one at that, at least from what Spot figured. He didn't have much contact with females being an outcast and all.

"I need more food, and the bush is roughly an hour or so away though I could probably run there and back before she wakes up." Spot looked around then to the Caterpie and nodded to him self, "I'll be back before she even awakes."

Running out of his den he ran back towards the bush. About an hour or so later he returned with a bundle of berries to add to the small pile he had already gathered. Taking a berry he ate it quickly and walked over to check on his guest.

From the time he was gone to the time he arrived the Caterpie was sleeping. Though as soon as he walked in the area whistling a small tune she was awake, "Where am I?" Her voice was filled with fear, though it was sweet and caring at the same time.

"You are in my home, I'm Spot." He smiled and sat down by the Caterpie.

"I'm Amanda, where exactly is your home?"

"Honestly Amanda, I'm not so sure. I've never asked the name of this forest."

"Why am I here?"

"You collapsed outside; your body was covered in all kinds of wounds. I carried you here and fixed you up." Spot held out a berry he grabbed before he came to check on her, "You must be hungry, here."

Amanda smiled as best she could from the pain and took the berry eating it down fast, "Thank you, you are too kind."

Spot blushed and rubbed the back of his head, "I'm not that special, I just care. Though I need to know how you got this injured."

"Well to start I'm not from here. My home was burned down during this storm and I walked here to get help." Amanda stopped and took a deep breath, "I was attacked by a Beedrill on the way which is the cause of these wounds. I'm sorry if I was a burden."

"You're not a burden, I don't mind the company, now please go to sleep you need it." Spot smiled and stood up, "I'll be in the next room yell if you need anything." With that he left, Amanda drifting into sleep.

[A Few Days Later]

The rain was gone and the sun shining. Amanda was better, able to move around and Spot couldn't be happier. A day ago he asked Amanda if she wouldn't mind staying with him seeing as her home was burned down. She accepted and Spot was busy everyday preparing a room for her, and gathering food for them both while Amanda healed.

Amanda helped where she could and spent most of her time sleeping. No more then two days after his offer her room was done. It was a simple build like his room; it contained a small fire pit with ventilation, a straw bed, and a small stack of berries. She loved it even with the simplicity of it. She quickly used her new bed and slept, working hard to finish the room.

Spot on the other hand wasn't exactly awake but wasn't sleepy. He walked to the mouth of his den and watched the sun set his mind racing. I can't believe that she is staying. She is so cu.... He stopped in mid sentence his mind making a double take. Was he just about to call Amanda cute, was he falling in love with her? He shook his head he couldn't be falling for her. Was it right for two Pokémon of a different species to like each other? His mind and heart heavy he fell asleep, after slowly walking towards his bed.

[Another Few Days]

Spot really was falling in love with Amanda. She was funny, smart, and knew how to take care of her self. Her voice was sweet and the air around her was filled with care. There was nothing about her that he didn't like, though he was clueless about confessing things, so nothing much on the subject was ever said. They both spent their days gathering food and playing games.

Today though was different and only Amanda knew that today was going to be different. Today was the third day of Amanda's heat cycle, and as her family could tell you by day three she was more then ready and confessions were big in her mind. She also knew that Spot liked her; it wasn't that hard to notice. He always acted different around her, and shied away at the most awkward and best confessing moments. Truth be told she liked him too.

Spot at that moment was in his room sleeping it was early morning and he was napping after collecting food for the next few days. Amanda decided that this was the moment that she was going to surprise and confess her love to him.

She lightly walked/crawled over to Spot and lightly jumped onto his chest. Her nether regions were swollen and bright red. Her body needed a release and she herself really needing it. Although this wasn't her first heat she was a virgin, and never experienced an orgasm she was always told that it was one of the few greatest things on this earth.

Spot feeling the weight on his belly opened his eyes, "Amanda?" he spoke after his vision cleared. "What are you do-"

He was stopped mid-sentence when Amanda forced her lips on his. Her tongue forced its way into his mouth and swirled around with his. Spot reacted almost robotically his tongue wrestling and swirling with Amanda's. He didn't care why she was kissing him, he was just glad that she was. His body reacted almost instantly his sheath swelling.

He deeply inhaled as Amanda pulled away; the air around her was thick with arousal, her regions becoming wet with just the thought. Her breath was heavy, "I...I...lo... love you." They both spoke at the same time, "I love you too." again at the same time. With in seconds there lips were connected and their tongues swirling together.

Amanda pulled away again and smiled, "Please be my ma...ate." Her voice sounds needy and all Spot could do was smile and nod. Amanda taking the moment lightly rubbed her tail along his sheath helping the growing member out of hiding. Spot moaned out, letting his instincts take over and help him.

His had rose to her region and lightly rubbed her snatch, enticing a moan out of Amanda. He smiled and lightly pushed in a finger moving it in and out at the pace that Amanda's tail was moving. Amanda stopped and turned around, she smiled and raised her tail to show Spot her dripping snatch which he began to lick.

She tasted of Oran Berries, with a small hint of spice. Spot loved the taste and dug in increasing the pace of his tongue and eventually shoving it inside of her. Amanda moaned out and sighed. Her tongue wormed its way out of her mouth and lightly ran from the base of Spot's arousal to the tip.

Spot squirmed as she continued each lick receiving a lick from him, each lick also gave Amanda a drop of pre, which to her tasted more like Oran Berries then Oran Berries did. It was safe to say that she loved the stuff.

Spot dug in with his tongue tiered of the slow pace and started adding force, trying to get more of Amanda's sweet fluid. His hand moved to just below his tongue and lightly brushed over her clit. Amanda froze and hissed in pleasure pushing back on his tongue her attack on his member ceasing to continue.

With his tongue and finger work Amanda was soon squirming in pleasure, her orgasm close. A few more licks and she moaned out Spot's name, her walls clenched onto his tongue and spilled out her juice. He lapped it up and did his best to not miss a drop.

Spot laid his head down one the bed and licked his lips, watching Amanda enjoy the aftermath of her orgasm. Shaking it off she turned around, "Will you take me?" Spot nodded and picked her up. He stood up and flipped her onto her back.
Lining up with her opening he slowly inserted his member. He moaned, it was clear that her size wasn't meant for him, as he had to push and force his way into her. He sighed when her walls relaxed and he could slide in better, though he was soon stopped as a barrier blocked his path.

Spot looked at Amanda and she smiled shaking her head. He pulled out till only the tip was inside of her and thrust back in fast. He ripped the barrier and moved in to the hilt.

Amanda screamed in pain and closed her eyes. Spot worried pulled out and gasped at the sight of blood. "I...I'm so so...sorry." With tears in his eyes he ran away, afraid that he hurt her and afraid that she would hate him.

With no words from him he ran, Amanda on the other hand yelled after him, "Spot come back I'm fine!" Her word fell on death ears as thunder boomed across the sky and rain began to fall.

Spot ran for an hour until he arrived at the Oran Berry bush where he found Amanda. His eyes were tear streaked and his mind heavy. "She hates me, I know it." He sat down by the nearest tree, and winced in pain. The rain was falling fast and heavy and his erect member didn't like it, he sucked up the pain and cried, his mind telling him that he lost the one person closest to him, not afraid of the spot on his back.

He cried for what seemed like forever his tears gone, when Amanda showed up. She crawled onto his belly, and kissed him, "I'm not made, and I knew it was going to hurt. Please don't be mad, I love you." She whispered in his ear and smiled.

Spot looked at Amanda and sniffed, "Sorry I ran." She shook her head and ran her tail along his sheath, he moaned.

"We are going to finish." Her voice was demanding but caring. He nodded as she continued her effort to coax his member back out. A few strokes later he was ready again. She lined up her entrance with his member and lowered herself onto him. The barrier was gone and he slid in with problem and without pain, only pleasure.

They moaned in unison and connected their lips, tongues swirling with each other. Spot was thrusting at a relatively medium pace and Amanda was relaxing enjoying the pleasure. Pre was leaking out of Spot's member every few thrusts and he could feel his climax approaching fast. Being a virgin he had an idea that he wouldn't be able to last long.
Amanda moaned out Spot's name and hissed her walls clamping down on his member her climax closer then she thought. Not being able to take the tightness and the milking of her walls Spot came. He hissed out in pleasure his seed coating her walls.

Amanda moaned his warm seed finding its way into her womb, they both knew she couldn't bear child till her Butterfree stage but they didn't care. Bright light flashed across Spot's chest as his member fell out.

He gasped as where his Caterpie was once, was now a Metapod. HE smiled, "Ready to go home?" The Metapod nodded and closed her eyes. He picked her up and started walking home, behind him the clouds parting and the sun shinning.
Chapter End Notes:I hope you enjoyed the story, please comment I take any and all advic
 
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Jul 31 2015 Chapter:Chapter 1
    A nice rewrite. However, I did spot a few minor mistakes, and just like the previous rendition, the pacing was just a bit rushed. Just a bit.

    Otherwise it was good.