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Rainy Day: The Second Time by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 1]

Summary:

Time and rain are the only ways to tell if love will prevail...

Story Notes:

this is the rewrite of Rainy Days, I figured that seeing as I believe that I'm a better writer now that I can stand to change and fix it, please enjoy and I do not own pokemon, never have and never will... no ownership at all, all ownership to the guy who created it...

  1. Chapter 1 (2484 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Jul 31 2015 Chapter:Chapter 1
    A nice rewrite. However, I did spot a few minor mistakes, and just like the previous rendition, the pacing was just a bit rushed. Just a bit.

    Otherwise it was good.