After experiencing heartbreak, a trainer comes across a vaporeon in a similar situation, and learns how love can bloom even in the darkest of times...
Valentine's Day 2010 Submission
Story Notes:
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A Meeting of Wandering Hearts (6690 words)
[Reviews: 1]
Date:Oct 18 2012 Chapter:A Meeting of Wandering Hearts
I didnt see much in the way of mistakes besides a little bit of off grammar.
The characters where good, the antagonists where excellent, it flowed nicely and the mating was pretty nice.
All in all, I think I could give this a decent six or seven out of ten. It had a slightly rushed feel, the talking seemed a little out of character and the surroundings wasnt described very well.
But I think its a good story, worthy of a read though; it did make me feel a little better about love... And mating with Vaporeons.
All the best! -Fuzzy