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A Trainer's Comfort by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 1]

Summary:

A male trainer/female pokemon fic that follows an aspiring young trainer in his battle against the corrupt Pokemon League.

Story Notes:

This is a slightly revised version of an unfinished story that I originally uploaded to fanfiction.net. The plot and characters are unchanged.

  1. Chapter 1 (1446 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    Reviewer: fuzzy
    Date:Oct 24 2012 Chapter:Chapter 1
    Hmm... Not bad at all, I allways enjoy a bit of Ninetails fun.

    Okay, there was a few mistakes but at the most I only saw three. Besides that, everything else was written pretty well; it had a nice flow and kept me interested.

    The mating scene was damn good, but... Ah virgins, what can you do with them? Heheh...

    Shame about the shortness, but I think this is still a good read. Im going to give this a 6 out of 10!

    You would have got more if it was longer, no errors, a bit more descriptive or had multiple rounds... But still a great job.

    All the best! -Fuzzy