Story Notes:
I'm writing here as a challenge to myself to see if I can...A)Handle writing these kinds of things.B)Work out of my element to improve my skills.C)Provide more generation 5 content for the fics section.
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Chapter 1 (4624 words) [Reviews: 1]
Date:Oct 18 2012 Chapter:Chapter 1
Not mistakes at all, characters where solid, setting was great and the mating scene was good.
Im gonna give it a nine out of ten. Only one point off perfect because it didn't seem to flow very well.
Either way, nice work!
All the best! -Fuzzy.