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Diaphanous Perception by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 13]

Summary:

Maggie thought the one thing keeping Manny from loving her the way she loves him was her body, a mienshao's body. She wished he saw her as a human, and two of her friends helped grant that wish.

Story Notes:

Boilerplate: Text, characterizations, and story by the Author. Original Pokemon concept and designs by Tajiri and Sugimori.

  1. An Implausible Proposition, As Told By Maggie. (3900 words) [Reviews: 5]

  2. Bringing Home A Stray, As Told By Manny. (4007 words) [Reviews: 2]

  3. Burning Both Ends, As Told By Maggie, Mostly. (4012 words) [Reviews: 2]

  4. Inconsiderate Intervention, As Told By Anton. (4882 words) [Reviews: 1]

  5. Penetrating the Veil, As Told By Maggie. (6032 words) [Reviews: 2]

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    Reviewer: s3eker
    Date:Oct 6 2012 Chapter:An Implausible Proposition, As Told By Maggie.
    I can't believe no one has commented on this story yet. It's amazing and i cant wait to see more!
    Author's Response:
    I can believe. There haven't been any orgasms yet.

    Expect updates every Monday for the rest of this month. (Five Mondays, five chapters.)
     
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    Reviewer: s3eker
    Date:Oct 9 2012 Chapter:Bringing Home A Stray, As Told By Manny.
    The plot thickens. I'n as shocked and confused as maggie was! Will we find out what happened next monday?
     
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    Reviewer: scratchchicken
    Date:Oct 17 2012 Chapter:An Implausible Proposition, As Told By Maggie.
    "Come on, they're not all that impressed with conversation. True gentlemen avoid it when they can. But they dote and swoon and fawn on a lady who's withdrawn. It's she who holds her tongue who get's a man." - Alakazam
     
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    Reviewer: s3eker
    Date:Oct 18 2012 Chapter:Burning Both Ends, As Told By Maggie, Mostly.
    This is quite possibly one of the coolest story plots I've ever read. Maggie is in some DEEP shit now! Pauls also a cool character, hope to see more of him
    Author's Response:
    Deep shit's about to hit the fan, too. Paul appears in both of the remaining chapters.
     
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    Reviewer: s3eker
    Date:Oct 24 2012 Chapter:An Implausible Proposition, As Told By Maggie.
    Noooooooo! Please don't say this story will have a sad ending! Your first story has enough sad in it to begin with! ;_;
     
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    Reviewer: scratchchicken
    Date:Oct 27 2012 Chapter:Penetrating the Veil, As Told By Maggie.
    Well.................. that was a downer.

    Regardless, a fanfic that DOESN'T end in them getting together (and also, gets completed) is one of the rarest things on this planet. 10/10 even if it was depressing.
    Author's Response:
    It does seem like I used up all my happy-ending on Can't Escape. It isn't that I like playing low notes, but I write by letting the story tell itself to me, and that seems to be how they've been wanting to go.
     
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    Reviewer: s3eker
    Date:Oct 28 2012 Chapter:An Implausible Proposition, As Told By Maggie.
    Ugh, man. The actual ending as a story is amazing. But, it's so depressing ._.

    I mean, everything happened in a way that makes sense, that it was logical and I saw it coming as soon as Paul mentioned what he was. But whyyyyyyyy ;_______;

    Hopefully your next story won't have your readers reaching for a tissue. As a side note, when I read that Maggie is a "well-fed Meinshao" with an extra inch on her waistline, I smiled. I have a soft-spot for that kind of stuff, and everyone and their mom makes character who just have stock, average builds.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Sep 12 2013 Chapter:An Implausible Proposition, As Told By Maggie.
    A pleasant start, with a nice scheme towards the end of the chapter. A few spots need a slight grammatical and/or punctuation tweek, but overal well done.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Sep 12 2013 Chapter:Bringing Home A Stray, As Told By Manny.
    Well I love the new Mag--I mean 'Lilith--in this chapter. And Manny's slight cluelessness.

    And I enjoyed the sexless/undetailed love-scene Manny and Lilith had. A nice break from the near-constant hentai I look for.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Sep 12 2013 Chapter:Burning Both Ends, As Told By Maggie, Mostly.
    Nice twists there. Nice way to wrap-up the loose end with the Biker-thug, and having Anton pose as Maggie; perfect.
     
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