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Mrs. Whiskers' Unusual Request by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 3]

Summary:

A lonely Machoke is facing yet another mating season in the company of his own right hand. However, one night a mysterious Alakazam appears in his cave, bearing an unusual request...


 


April 2013 Odd Couple Contest entry,

Story Notes:

All characters, settings, and related material are the property of their respective owners, Pokemon character names are trademarks of Nintendo. All characters in this story are above the age of consent. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

  1. Mrs. Whiskers' Unusual Request (5744 words) [Reviews: 3]

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Apr 16 2013 Chapter:Mrs. Whiskers' Unusual Request
    I had my doubts at first, but this was grand. The pairing, the back story, mentality, all of it blended together.

    {} Achievement Unlocked; 60G
    Mind Over Matter
    "Bring the battle of mental and physical prowess to a stalemate."

    {} Achievement Unlocked; 30G
    Surprise, surprise!
    "Toss in a surprise ending, opening up the possibility of a sequel"
     
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    Friendly Zangoose
    Reviewer: Daneasaur
    Date:Apr 20 2013 Chapter:Mrs. Whiskers' Unusual Request
    This was a very enjoyable read. The spelling and grammar are essentially flawless, but most of all, I enjoyed the content.

    While I am against cheating, it works for this tale and doesn't detract from my enjoyment.

    I give a solid 9 of 10.

    I would actually enjoy seeing a follow up encounter between these two, perhaps even making it so that his fondness and love for her trump his attraction to her, making it unnecessary for her to trick his senses.
     
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    Reviewer: ashoka
    Date:Apr 21 2013 Chapter:Mrs. Whiskers' Unusual Request
    As a smut it's pretty funny and good, and of course my Pokesona is a Machamp so I couldn't resist a gander at this it's only one down the evo chain. Chumps; lol what a name, also fitting. Some little dominating personality and very forward actions by Mrs. Whiskers has all the mix for a good simple smut and easy pick up and read. Dang I was gagging for breath during this. Anyhow good job and good luck on your entry.