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Elina's Normal Day by
Rated:R [Reviews: 3]

Summary:

Basically, a Vulpix shows an ignorant Braixen how evolution is important.. And why it's important not to ignore or squander one's gift!

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Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Tomu. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of Nintendo or Game Freak. No copyright infringement is intended.

  1. Elina's Normal Day (1618 words) [Reviews: 3]

    My first story, and the quite literal last-minute entry into the July Fics contest for 2014. I hope you enjoy it; for a first fic it might be a little thin, but there might be more to come! Who knows.

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    Reviewer: kolofox
    Date:Aug 1 2014 Chapter:Elina's Normal Day
    I really like the concept, I for one don't like rape but this Braixen got his just desserts. I didn't see much wrong grammatically; granted I'm not the best a pointing out such details. great job I hope to read more from you.
     
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    Reviewer: redacted
    Date:Aug 2 2014 Chapter:Elina's Normal Day
    Heh... and that, is why one never plays with fire.

    Well, good job. Kind of a silly over the top story, but it was good.
    You didn't do very well with the dialogue however, it could have used a bit more to explain each characters thoughts better. Also, use quotation marks instead of apostrophes.

    -{ 5 Stars__ }-
     
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    Linoone
    Reviewer: Ricter
    Date:Aug 17 2014 Chapter:Elina's Normal Day
    very nice set up as well as ending, the story, however short, was very enjoyable and wasn't just all sexual in nature as it had a battle which was a nice change of pace from what I normally read. No complaints here, you did very well for a short story :3