This is my first fic uploaded to AGNPH, and although it is a Gay lemon, I am not a just gay author: I'm Bisexual, so if you want to see more, I will be uploading (hopefully) a large number of one-shots like this one, either gay, straight, or bisexual. If you want to see a specific fic then PM me the specifics. I might not get to it right away, but I will get back to you as soon as I can.
Raiden, a male Lucario, wakes up his master, Eric, with an unusual surprise. Experimental and obligatory gay smut one-shot quickly follows. This is my first gay lemon. Don't hate.
You can, however, leave a critique below. As an aspiring author of both smut and non smut, any and all critique is greatly appreciated. That being said, don't just say 'this fucking sucks dude' or 'Well, I liked it, but it could be better.' TELL ME WHAT YOU LIKE OR DON'T LIKE.
Much obliged:
The Sword of Absol
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Good Morning, Lucario. (1271 words) [Reviews: 4]
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This was a simple atory nothing but a quick smut story. I do like how it started off. A question of sexuality. Moat start off already knowing where they stand. Yet he seem to accept it. I was happy he was able to get some in the end. To many times it ends up with the human being sub to the pokemon. Not a big fan of thoae stories.
Still nice work.
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This was a simple atory nothing but a quick smut story. I do like how it started off. A question of sexuality. Moat start off already knowing where they stand. Yet he seem to accept it. I was happy he was able to get some in the end. To many times it ends up with the human being sub to the pokemon. Not a big fan of thoae stories.
Still nice work.
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This was a simple atory nothing but a quick smut story. I do like how it started off. A question of sexuality. Moat start off already knowing where they stand. Yet he seem to accept it. I was happy he was able to get some in the end. To many times it ends up with the human being sub to the pokemon. Not a big fan of thoae stories.
Still nice work.
Author's Response:Thanks for taking the time to leave a review--it genuinely means a lot to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it, short though it may be. If you have any specific pokemon on pokemon/pokemon on human pairings you want me to try, feel free to let me know--I'll definitely consider trying it out.
Although I am curious--why are there three of the same review on the same fic from you? was that a glitch? -
This story just made my entire life. The characters are so cute and sweet. The way the trainer does what e knows will make Lucario happy, even if he isn't the most comfortable himself. I get the idea that Lucario deserves it to, he must be such an awesome guy, just a well meaning but inexperienced Pokémon who the trainer loves to spoil and let himself get taken advantage of by. And god, do I love stories with a dominant, feral Pokémon. I guess it's just their nature. Seeing Lucario as such a proud and strong lover, and being a "wild animal" in a way is such an ingenious way to take the story. Im so glad it went for as long as it did with Lucario as a "top" even if it gave up on it in the end. Please let me know if you get this. It's fantastic!
Author's Response:*I haven't been on this site in a while, sorry it's been so long since you posted this and I'm just now getting back to it.
Well, i'm glad you like it--you certainly seem enthusiastic! I appreciate you taking the time to write the review and rate, it really does mean a lot to me. Feel free to let me know if you want me to write more stuff like this, and if you want me to write about any specific pokemon, I'll definitely consider it/give it a try!
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Bisexual and proud bitches!
I loved this story, it had alot of in depth character development in a short time and was a good fap, that being said "i wish it was longer"
P.s Pun intended
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Really liked the story loved the how the trainer was "straight" but had no problem helping his pokemon with his problem two things though first is more an opinion than a note.
first, I personally feel Lucario is a bit overdone much like Gardevior still like Lucario...still hot.
second I can understand that Lucario and his trainer were tired after the first round but the ending where Lucario was receiving felt a little rushed maybe if it was drawn out with a bit more oral by Lucario to keep his trainer on the edge till they caught their breath.
as for future couplings, I think a female Mienshou would be amazing super sexy fighting type really underappreciated.
Date:Apr 21 2018
LOVE IT