AGNPH Stories

Summary:

A flygon and Absole fuck on the beach.

  1. Royally fucked (1004 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date: Oct 29 2016 Chapter: Royally fucked

    First blush, VERY short. Rushed. And quite puzzlingly, the format was highly unusual.

    HOWEVER; it was a nice change of pace--odd as it was--and hopefully you can improve!

    For now, you're getting a low score, BUT should you take my advice and improve greatly & rewrite this, I my take this low-score back and give you a higher one.