A flygon and Absole fuck on the beach.
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First blush, VERY short. Rushed. And quite puzzlingly, the format was highly unusual.
HOWEVER; it was a nice change of pace--odd as it was--and hopefully you can improve!
For now, you're getting a low score, BUT should you take my advice and improve greatly & rewrite this, I my take this low-score back and give you a higher one.