AGNPH Stories


What happens when I get stuck with Legendaries playing Truth or Dare. Warning: Possible lemons...

  1. Prologue (1239 words) [Reviews: 1]

  2. Preparatory Chapter (1182 words)

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    Reviewer: damanlyguy
    Date:Apr 21 2014 Chapter:Prologue
    The sudden transition in the mood of the fic is really off putting. The events also moved really fast and could easily be embellished with descriptive 'filler' sentences.

    The concept of T/D with legendaries has potential, although I would personally rethink how it happened.

    All in all, I rate this 2/5 for good potential.