If you don't want your stories to be lost, they should be posted in the fics section, not the forums. The forums are for linking to your stories or discussing your stories, not actually displaying the whole story as part of the thread.
Despite the sheer amount of text in OP, I don't think CryCer is intending to dump the story here, but rather provide a centralized location for the story's fandom.
I am sorry if I come off as a bit long winded
(As one of the review comments proclaimed no spelling errors, you're not the only one who hasn't.)
~My fire shall always burn eternal~
There's a difference between reading for fun and providing some feedback, and sitting down to scrutinize every word of a piece.
. . . others in the archive that glaring errors everywhere.
maybe I've gotten used to reading bad writing...
not long-winded, but pretentious. You seem to be going into this thinking you're writing the next Potter or Twilight series and are feathering a nest in preparation.
Having read the first chapter of your piece at this moment, I have no serious complaints about it and it does show you understand what writing a chapter means rather than the typical neophyte's "sit down, write 1500 words, submit as a chapter" pattern, but it's infested with typographical errors and typesetting problems. Not enough of them to make me question your core ability, but enough that I know you have not developed a discipline for self proof-reading.
Casually I'd say you've earned a B– so far on the technical side; for the story itself I haven't read enough yet to pass a fair judgment (hence I have not voted on the entry yet) but I think I've figured out enough to expect that it will be worthy of being suggested to others, which is probably the highest praise a fan-ficition can earn, with something of a caveat. I will revise this impression as necessary when I find free time to lend it further attention.
Go big or go home.
THERE ARE TYPOS IN MY STORY!?? NO WAY!
I could have sworn that word got em all
I would like your opinion on the others as well.