Story Notes:
Comeback story? Yes. Good story? Maybe. :P Please read and review. Sorry for the Very long wait.
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Flag 1: Unfolding of Events (1954 words)
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First Kiss and a Misunderstanding (2314 words)
Story Notes:
Comeback story? Yes. Good story? Maybe. :P Please read and review. Sorry for the Very long wait.
Flag 1: Unfolding of Events (1954 words)
First Kiss and a Misunderstanding (2314 words)
Date:Sep 16 2016
I suppose this is my first scathing review ever. Not that the story is bad, though.
IT'S IN THE WRONG FUCKING PLACE.
YOU DO NOT PLACE A TOUHOU FANFICTION IN WITH THE POKEMON FANFICTION. RAN YAKUMO IS NOT A NINETAILS.
GEEZE. IF YOU WANTED TO WRITE TOUHOU, TRY FANFICTION.NET (or Archive Of Our Own if you're up to high standards.)
As what seems to be the only reader, I urge you to rewrite or move.