No doubt about it, someone watched How to Train your Dragon! I myself enjoyed the movie very much as well. The relationship the two main protagonists share is just so bloody likeable.

Now I certainly have yet to read your new rendition of Luca, though I do remember enjoying the original very much, so I will succumb to curiousity and have a go at it eventually.

It's strangely difficult to point out flaws since my mind immediately focuses on the inspiration of the story being an enjoyable film, also adding in the notion of Luca being a solid story on here too. So with that, I'll say I don't have much to say on the first page other than it's satisfying, plus I look forward to the tie-in towards Luca to be revealed in the future chapters. Sure, there's the likely theme of "Well, I guess we can get along with Pokemon," but from the experience you have shown in the past, I'm certainly interested in where this could go.

Looking forward to page two.

It was great, I think you could have Jokir encounter Felix and Luca after "going to far". When will you update it though, thats my question? You have earned a favorite, my fine sir... P.S. can you help me with idea's, my dad had a book of them, and it got taken out in a house fire. Why I live on a boat.