AGNPH Valentine's Day Un-Official Theme Submission
Valentine's Day is the day that everything is supposed to be perfect: a day of love when the best thing ever is to have someone to spend an evening with. But prospects for that perfection don't look good for Darin, a trainer who has lost both his license and his girlfriend in rapid succession. Luckily for Darin, his rather precocious Delcatty, Fela, takes it upon herself to teach him the steps towards landing the right girl for that special day. Will Darin have all the right moves in time? Or will he be doomed to spend the most romantic night of the year alone?
Story Notes:
Thanks are due to ysrnty, who beta-read for me and gave me some great suggestions that made it into the final cut.
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Teach Me (21170 words) [Reviews: 2]
Date:Dec 1 2014 Chapter:Teach Me
Date:Mar 9 2015 Chapter:Teach Me
Bravo sir! Excellent work! Words fail me. Quite a riveting tale from start to end. No mistakes, grammatical or spelling-wise, and the pacing flowed beautifully! Can't wait to see your next story.
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