AGNPH Stories


Sometimes it is best not to make a bet you can't win.

Also this is my first time joining the site and adding a story to it so please be nice.

  1. Chapter 1 (2825 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    Reviewer: ninjatommy21
    Date:May 26 2015 Chapter:Chapter 1
    It was an interesting quick read. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you.

    Personally I wouldn't have added the pokemon dialogue, seeing as the trainer can understand him. Maybe if it was only there when the pokemon was near another trainer. Otherwise it seems repetitive and trivial.

    It wasn't explained as to how he could understand his pokemon, but honestly a direct explanation wasn't needed. Knowing he was an anthro pokemon himself was very valuable to that.

    All in all. I enjoyed it.

    Author's Response:
    thanks for the review and true the dialog isn't needed but its fun to make it up as i go along ^w^