AGNPH Stories
Rated: XXX [Reviews: 1]

Summary:

Glitter the Lopunny would have thought that it would be a dream come true to have women falling over you constantly. That's certainly what his cute charm ability has caused. He was wrong. And now he figures he'll rob them to make up. But what happens when he meets a gorgeous Lucario girl in a club? Has he finally found true love?

  1. Chapter 1 (1713 words) [Reviews: 1]

    Yes I know I suck at summaries. Please forgive me. This story has not been beta'd or proofread. Pokemon and all related characters are the property of Nintendo and Game Freak. I do not own any of the intellectual properties used.

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date: Sep 9 2016 Chapter: Chapter 1

    Welcome to the world of erotic fanfiction!

     

    And you might have done very well with spelling, but as you said, the formatting/grammar COULD use a little refining and some touch-ups.

    Now, for your Fanfic Acheivements!

     

    {} Acheivement Unlocked; 50G

    "Cherry Poppin'; Level 1"

    Posted your first story. Congrats. More will be expected of you now!

     

    {} Acheivement Unlocked; 25G

    "That Escalated Quickly..."

    Have the lead character(s) engage in sexual activities before the half-way point.

     

    {} Acheivement Unlocked; -5G

    "The Wall"

     

     

    Perhaps requesting some help with formatting would be a benefit...

     

    {} Acheivement Unlocked; 70G

    "Fighting For One's Heart"

    Earn a rating of at least 7 with a Fighting-Type

     

    {} Acheivement Unlocked; 70G

    "Not Normal"

    Earn a rating of at least 7 with a Normal-Type

     

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much for the advice. I must admit that I wrote this fanfic in a spurt of creativity after seeing the theme from last month. I will be certain to have someone give my fics a once over for grammar, spelling, and the like from now on. If you would be willing, any suggestions you can make about formatting would be much appreciated. And again, thank you for your kind review.