Late FETEP2 entry. Hope it still counts! Contains incest and a bit of roleplay, as per the requirements for at least 2 of the 4 fetishes given.
A Luxray father has had feelings for his teenage Luxio daughter for the longest time, since she's the spitting image of her late mother, in every conceivable way. After a fight with some bullies at her school in front of him makes him realize his error in waiting so long, he decides to come clean and confess his feelings to his daughter in an unusual way.
(Might do a non-contest version, with more effort into it (multiple chapters possibly, if not one longer story with more plot) and feral, like I had intended to initially for this idea.
Update 1/4/2023: I chose to do anthro versus feral as I initially planned for this, even though it wasn't a fetish like it was in the later FETEP 3 contest. ^^; Partially due to how fast I had to write it but mainly as it was the only way to do the "roleplay" fetish, since feral Pokemon seem unlikely to do that and "bondage" didn't fit with the respect I had in mind for the father to his daughter, especially for their first time. Much less did "tentacles" fit in here with the species I'd long-ago settled on using for my initial plan on this one.
Never realized before that this was the first story I wrote with incest, which is one of my favorite fetishes and has only grown in the years since. I don’t think I did it justice with regards to the whole taboo/mentality of incest (especially with the bond the two should’ve had and not make it seem like he’s taking advantage of her) or underage (never said her age, but if in high school, under 18 probably), but I wrote this in one night, so didn’t think much on those fronts. I hope anyone reading this part will give it a shot, since it’s better than a lot of stories I’ve seen previously on here alone (when I was more active in reading), not to sound rude. ^^;
Small spoiler: Even though I reread/skimmed most of this today, I didn't do all of it. And from my recollection, pretty sure I never said what the species of Lily's mother was in this version. But if I ever rewrite this as I intended to years ago, I will fix/add a lot of things to it.
Story Notes:
Okay, know this is way late, and sorry to those who actually entered on time, but I rushed my ass to get this done, so I hope it's at least half-decent, though probably not one of my better works.
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A Father's Love (contest entry) (5723 words)
[Reviews: 1] Will probably redo this one at a later date. Hope you like it as-is though, and give me some feedback, good or bad! No flamers, though! I know I didn't do so well on this one, probably!
Date:Sep 21 2013 Chapter:A Father's Love (contest entry)
Well, not sure if you mean the fight that took place or the lack of details behind what happened before the story began (that led up to the fight or how anthros came to be), but I had written this in a rush job to meet the deadline for the contest this took place. So I didn't exactly have time to come up with something better (even if I didn't need to, at least for the anthros' existence), since I don't generally plan my stories ahead of time; even if I SHOULD, so it's not half-assed sometimes even if those kinds that are written on a whim are sometimes the best ones, as they feel natural and not forced somewhat. My original vision of this idea was with ferals and would've had a lot more depth (and length) but I figured with the contest, I might use it to enter, even if it wasn't likely I would win. And I did maybe get talked into it by someone I was with at the time, when I expressed interest in entering. Ah well, hope you'll read more when I possibly submit more to this site again someday. Not now though, as I'm on hiatus as of responding to this (1/12/2014). Thanks for reading and reviewing!