A beloved holiday icon in the world of Pokemon is kidnapped by a group of evil trainers, and two teams of young Pokemon explorers take up the task of rescuing him before something treacherous happens.
Give a Gift Contest Submission - 1st Place
Original Finished Date - Dec 27 2009
Featured Story - 01/03/10
Story Notes:
This was written for the AGNPH winter-themed "Give a Gift" contest, based off a request left in the special thread by Pathwarden. I really liked the idea he gave, and it gave me an excuse to write a Pokemon story based around Mystery Dungeon. I even use the setting of the PMD2 games, including Wigglytuff's Guild. Overall I had a lot of fun writing this one and developing the cute characters through dialogue. Lots of it!
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Operation Snowpoint (11163 words)
[Reviews: 1]
Date:Sep 1 2014 Chapter:Operation Snowpoint
However, you did have grammatical errors here and there, which kind of took away from that. The story was fine but a little illogical, for example, how did team flarestorm get a truck on an island?
Also, why was team flarestorm wanting to capture Flurry? The story failed to describe that very well. The team mentions wanting to take his powers, but doesn't explain why. I suppose that's excusable, but it sort of pestered me.
Overall, I thought the story was cute and made for a nice read. Good job, and make sure to re-read your work.
-{ 4 stars__ +1 for enjoyment }-