Besides being an entry for this moth's submission, I want to experiment on writing using 2nd Person Point of View. So my question is, who are you in this short story?
For the first time, I'm writing something family friendly in this site.
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Chapter 1 (592 words)
[Reviews: 1]
Date:Jun 10 2016 Chapter:Chapter 1
This was a beautiful piece. Different to read a story in 2nd-person perspective. Though I do have one note with that, I would have kept the reader's in-story character gender neutral, so thatsome readers--as myself--won't be so shocked when we read the Ralts is a girl.
That's all.