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Rated:R [Reviews: 4]

Summary:

(requested) Sanako seems to get into trouble and Kangaskhan ordered by Sanako's father keeps him from trouble. Sanako always finds some way to either cause or get into trouble.

Story Notes:

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  1. Father's worry (1932 words) [Reviews: 1]

  2. Fear of the Past (2240 words) [Reviews: 1]

  3. Last Badge, New Love (2396 words) [Reviews: 1]

  4. Shoulda Thought Ahead (1641 words) [Reviews: 1]

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Sep 13 2013 Chapter:Father's worry
    A nice start, and with Kangaskhan. Pretty rare, as this would be the third story I've come across with her.

    But, as you mentioned beforehand, you have many grammar mistakes that need tending to, as well as a few formating issues--not to mention some seemed a bit rushed.

    Looking forward to the rest.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Sep 13 2013 Chapter:Fear of the Past
    Just as many grammar mistakes, and once more the timing seemed rushed.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Sep 13 2013 Chapter:Last Badge, New Love
    First off; this should have been rated XXX instead of R due to the sex at the beginning.
    Secondly; which I have been holding my tongue, you need A LOT of work on timing, both in and out of battle.
    Third; you should have spent some time checking you grammar and sentencing better.
    Finally; sorry if I'm suddenly coming off as harsh, but I'm just expressing my opinions--even though this is an untouched/archived story...
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Sep 13 2013 Chapter:Shoulda Thought Ahead
    Eeuuu'kay.....

    A few things are off about this, but it's all about genetics and stuff so I'll keep a lid on it except for one thing:

    Kangaskhan are female ONLY.

    That's all.