AGNPH Stories

Summary:

With spring coming in, this year's pests are ready to swarm local farms and orchards. To add to the normal routine pests a new invasive species has also been causing problems too. A new compromise must be formed with a former nuisance to convince the new pest to leave. To the nuisance however, it's also a way to express long term desires. The problem is maturing forms can significantly change one's appearance for the worst.

"Pick Your Poison 2011" Contest Submission

Story Notes:

Sorry about the massive submission. Meant to get this done five days earlier, but I failed.Ok, so I'm nervous. I have no damn clue if what I wrote serves as an okay writing style. I've been fighting this pressure for a very long time but I don't get any feedback about my work to know if I'm doing well or not. Is this enough detail, too little, too much? Should there be more complex descriptions, more big vocabulary words to make me sound ridiculously extravagantly smart, or is that not even required for a good story? Or how about less dialogue or should there be more? Those are just a few things I ask myself every second I type. Lately writing has been very stressful because whenever I read a good story I think â��If I need people to appreciate my hard work then I should write like that.â�a33; I shouldn't think like that but since I'm left in the dark I can't help it. Am I good enough, or do I suck at some areas? What makes a good story? You tell me readers, please. Help me, I really need it.

  1. Chapter 1 (7202 words)

  2. Chapter 2 (5775 words)

  3. Chapter 3 (4301 words)

  4. Chapter 4 (6633 words)

  5. Chapter 5 (6394 words)

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