There will be several dark/sickening moments to come in later Chapters. Rest assured, things will balance out by the ending.
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Starting Anew (4909 words) [Reviews: 3]
A flashback from Gardevoir sheds some light on a rather unpleasant experience, followed by a shocking twist from an unexpected source...
Current roster; Gardevoir(f), Blaziken(f), Absol(f), Mightyena(f).
Deliverance Unto Safety (5541 words)
Helping Pokémon in need, then a glimpse into things to come.
Updated roster; Gardevoir(f), Blaziken(f), Absol(f), Mightyena(f), Flygon(m).
Date:Jul 20 2013 Chapter:Starting Anew
I know I should be grateful to have a review and rating finally, but perhaps you could elaborate some? I'm always open to criticism and praise--so long as it's not downright nasty and intolerable.
Date:Aug 12 2013 Chapter:Starting Anew
On a comical whim/observation, why is the paragraph after the flash-back also centered? Certainly not something to count off for, but just a visual query.
General grammar appears to be fine, not that I'm usually a nazi on the hunt for such to begin with regardless.
Thank you for your input. Nice to see some life after the relaunch. And to address your concerns/observations:
Plenty of character development will occur in later chapters, with a surprise twist or two after --------- and -------- happens to ------- then after --------- goes and -----------.
So just read on for more!
[and a side note, Burning Desires ties in with this]
As for the text alignment... A simple uploading/editing error.
Date:Sep 2 2013 Chapter:Starting Anew
Thank you for your input. I'm doing what i can to hasten some character's development, although a few are being drawn-out on purpose.