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Where Dreams End by
Rated:XXX [Reviews: 4]

Summary:

Side Sequel to XD-385's Forbidden Love. The descendants of Ashton Redford Crimson had found themselves in an predicament when the region starts hunting for their heads for a crime they didn't commit. They need to clear their name with the help of a distant sky pirate, a determined rebel, an honorable shinobi, and a beautiful maiden. A story about escape, romance, and desires. What will become of the two siblings?

EDIT::. New title

  1. Character Sheet (1133 words) [Reviews: 1]

  2. The Boy Known As Alistor Gracidea (3921 words) [Reviews: 1]

  3. The Time That Comes Before Heading Out (4536 words) [Reviews: 1]

  4. A Small Delay from a Journey (6141 words)

  5. A New Dawn For A New Day (7272 words) [Reviews: 1]

  6. Step 1: Challenge the First Gym (6800 words)

  7. A Formal with Some Drama and Danger (8965 words)

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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 21 2013 Chapter:Character Sheet
    Quite a character list. A bit of an infodump, but in this case it's okay--although you may want to go through and fix a few pronoun slip-ups.
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 21 2013 Chapter:The Boy Known As Alistor Gracidea
    Parts were somewhat jumbled, and with the run-in with Ash I have a burning question: where were Pikachu and Brock?
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 21 2013 Chapter:The Time That Comes Before Heading Out
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    Slutbunny
    "Made use of the stereotypical nickname for most Lopunny"

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    Blasting Off Again!
    "Have character(s) launched high enough to vanish into the sky"
     
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    The Wild-Card!
    Reviewer: Captain_Dragonuv
    Date:Aug 22 2013 Chapter:A New Dawn For A New Day
    Cool fight scene. A teaser of potential hot lesbo action. But a few minor mistakes--both spelling and grammar
    Author's Response:
    Thank you for all of those reviews ^^ Yeah, spelling and grammar were my krytonite back in the day @.@ I'm not as bad now...hopefully ^^;;;Anyway, hope you'll check out some of my other stories :3